What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
Clone Capsule
(Revival Consumable)
Descriptor: Omelette has surgically embedded a chip into her brain, allowing her to "back-up" her consciousness, memories, and personality to a digital cloud hosted within the WYVERN laboratory. If and when she dies, the systems back in her home-base will activate, "3D printing" her a new body and inserting her backed-up self into it.
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
Self-Healing Skin (?)
Healing 7 (700)
Descriptor: The Bobinator’s systems rely on a backup system that heals the terminator’s body in case of damage.
Coin to be deducted: 700
STAFF EDIT:
Consider this part of the consumable rules -"Consumables can look like anything, just like normal Abilities, but they should always be represented by an exterior item that your character uses, and must make some sort of narrative sense (even if you have to “MacGyver” it). For example, it wouldn’t make sense for you to fire a bullet Consumable from a bow, but you could lash it to the tip of an arrow to make it work."
Right now, this seems more like an Ability description, not a consumable.
Effects
Mobile Base the size of a Sailing Ship with a Surveillance module.
1 rank of Speed
1 Rank of Flight.
Descriptor: Celestial Dolphin 2 - A dolphin themed and shaped spaceship that is a smaller version of the ones Gizmo and Gadget ride in back home. Thankfully it seems that intergalactic laws involving licenses to drive spaceships are more lax here so that they can cruise through space no problem.
Coin to be deducted: 4,900 Coins
STAFF EDIT: Please note that the Ongoing modifier will be required for your Speed Rank 1 and Flight Rank 1 effects-- if you want them to last longer than a few seconds, anyway.
Please also note that the Treasury module is required to add any additional base modules, and that the Surveillance module requires at least a size 5 base.
Also, when writing these, it helps to write the cost of each Effect your base has and each element affecting it's total cost. In this instance, this would be:
ABILITIES COST: 400 Coin
BASE COST: 1,000 Coin
MOBILE BASE SIZE MULTIPLIER: x4
(400 + 1,000) x 4 = 5,600 Coin.
Then, you add the cost of your modules (you don't multiply these by the mobile base size multiplier).
Descriptor: An exceptional vintage of pre-Bomb wine, the '43 is a treasured piece of any true noble's cellar, the finest work the Castillan Hanging Vinyards ever produced. While only enough remains within the bottle to offer a single sip to the weary warrior, the spiced wine is, allegedly, laden with stimulants and potent narcotics that earned it its popularity among the nobility. The Barons of Santagria staunchly deny these claims, and none have managed to penetrate deep enough into their wine cellars to steal a sample.
Coin to be deducted: 1,000
STAFF EDIT: Hey there! Right now, I'm not really seeing much explanation for the Limited modifier. The consumable actually being "limited in amount" isn't really an accurate use of the Limited modifier, considering the Finite modifier would be more applicable. Yet, since the nature of a consumable (it being a single-use object) is already a thing, Finite wouldn't be a good modifier to apply here, either. Can you resubmit with a new modifier or different explanation for the Limited mod?
Descriptor: An exceptional vintage of pre-Bomb wine, the '43 is a treasured piece of any true noble's cellar, the finest work the Castillan Hanging Vinyards ever produced. While the bottle is irresistible to the weary warrior, the spiced wine is, allegedly, laden with stimulants and potent narcotics that earned it its popularity among the nobility. The Barons of Santagria staunchly deny these claims, and none have managed to penetrate deep enough into their wine cellars to steal a sample. Those on the battlefield may have better luck- this precious pint can be wrested from Isaac's possession with a thief's eye- or a scavenger's.
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
Fusion 4
Debuff 8: Force Fusion (Mind Control? Grapple?)
Descriptor: Betting on myself in DA with my own coin here.
If this is unfeasible or overpowered I understand, but nothing ventured nothing gained.
Symbiotic Relationship
A sort of fail-safe for the R41M15 R3V3N63, when this switch is flipped, the skeleton framework chassis becomes limp, fully ceding control to the Malefactor. The symbiote goop will bind its current host to a new host entirely, purely out of survival instinct. The metal plating from its current form and its already impressive biomass will be used to enhance and, if necessary, overpower the new host. Y'know, for survival purposes. As a wise man once said, "Catch a riiiiiide."
Coin to be deducted: 2800
STAFF EDIT: The event host said no to another ability that allowed this, so I’d message Karl Jak/Alex to ask. If he says “sure” then resubmit.
If Alex says it’s OK, the Debuff wouldn’t really be needed if you buy the right rank of Fusion and just ASK the writer you’re fusing with if you can RP it like this. Keep in mind that since this is a consumable it will not last forever, though, but for the same duration all consumables do.
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
Damage 10 (1000)
-ranged (500)
Healing 10 (2000)
-removable (-500)
3000
Descriptor: The Twisted Scepter
The Staff of Office of the Last Emperor, and the only part of the catalyst Regalia not wholly consumed by the transformation. As the Emperor, Rory carries it secured to one of his luxury-condominium-sized flippers by a small length of tentacle no thicker than a man's belt- it's just hard to see because it's a normal-sized scepter, crusted with cracked and blackened jewels and twisted at an odd angle as though by intense heat, whereas the creature holding it is a ludicrous behemoth. What power remains within it may be consumed in order to exact a tax upon one that might defy the Emperor's authority, a burst of green aurora that sears the target's soul - and transfers the stolen life-force to Rory, whereupon the Scepter falls apart.
The scepter can be taken away, if a person were to realize Rory were holding it, and somehow manage to overcome both his massive size and power as the Last Emperor and obvious unwillingness to relinquish the item.
Coin to be deducted: 3000
STAFF EDIT: I do believe Rory’s DG winnings were added to your Ghidorah account and he has enough to cover it, so this purchase should be fine.
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
V.I.P. Card (Life Insurance)
Descriptor: Description: A metallic gold-plated card with the letters V.I.P. pressed onto it. The card is warm to the touch and stinks of sulfur. Good for one free pass back to the land of the living.
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
Name: Cockatrice's Eyes
Damage 11 (1100)
Positive Modifiers: Ongoing (1100), Ranged (1100)
Negative Modifiers: Indiscriminate (-600), Limited - Only Against Organics (-600)
Debuff 11 (1100)
Positive Modifiers: Ongoing (1100), Ranged (1100)
Negative Modifiers: Indiscriminate (-600), Limited - Only Against Organics (-600)
Descriptor: The Cockatrice's Eyes reside within Amalia's eyelids. Once manifested her eyes become reptilian and the next organic thing she gazes upon suffers the Cockatrice's Curse and begins to turn to solid stone. While the effect has an initial "punch" the lingering effects prove to be quite difficult to endure with all but the strongest of opponents turning to stone within minutes.
Coin to be deducted: 4200
Staff edit: The ability itself looks fine but there are a couple things that need to be touched on. First, without the Exceptional affinity, consumables are represented by an outside force of some kind such as a physical object while this is more of an innate power. Additionally, the math is a little off on the modifiers. Ranged is only 50 per rank and your negative modifiers would be deducting 550 rather than 600. All in all this comes out to a total cost of 3300 instead it 4200. If you make some minor changes to adjust for these then it should be good to be approved.
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
Furious Shard
Concealment (Sight) - Rank 2 (200)
Transferable (100)
Ongoing (200)
Affects multiple (3) (300)
Limited (Must be used on a true dragon) (-100)
Indiscriminate (-100)
Damage - Rank 5 (500)
Transferable (250)
Ongoing (500)
Affects multiple (3) (750)
Limited (Must be used on a true dragon) (-250)
Indiscriminate (-250)
Weakness (Dragons) (-125)
Descriptor: A physical piece of Yucatan’s draconic magic, crystalised and covertly gifted to Eszter by Dr Orchid. When crushed in her hand, it unleashes a rush of magical energy into her body that embodies Yucatan’s destructive wrath. This energy is so potent that Eszter cannot physically use it herself without destroying herself in the process, and as such it has to be channeled through a larger dragon. When she does, a massive, choking cloud of volcanic ash spreads out from her target, hiding them from their enemies and scalding friend and foe alike, baring other dragons, (of which Eszter is included, of course)
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
Revive - Freeze’s Chill Tank
Descriptor: A bacta tank that is kept at a very specific temperature in order to help facilitate Freeze’s recovery from serious or even lethal injuries.
Descriptor: Amalia carries a petrified cockatrice eye set into a ring. With her powers as a Spirit Host she can rouse the eye bringing it out of its inert state. Once active the first thing she points its gaze towards suffers the Cockatrice's Curse. Whoever is struck by the curse rapidly turns to solid stone. Only exceptionally resistant targets can endure the curse's lasting effects. Once used the ring becomes inert and Amalia must perform an expensive and time consuming ritual before it can be used again.
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable
Effects
Refined Enkephalin
Healing X (2000C)
—Side Effect [Dependency] (-500C)
—Concentration (-500C)
Descriptor: A powerful narcotic distilled into a pale blue liquid, administered via syringe. Blissful euphoria washes over the user, soothing physical and mental scars, at least for a time. When the numbing of their trauma wears off, however, they will undergo acute withdrawal. They will refuse all other forms of healing, as only a dose of the same drug can satisfy their addiction. Additionally, the user must focus intently on injecting the syringe, leaving them susceptible during the process. How the substance is harvested is best left unknown.
Descriptor: A gift from Dolloki. This elaborate looking dollhouse occupies roughly 50 cubic feet of space. This gothic-era style mansion is completed with very minute details upon the exterior, including a functioning door and numerous windows.
This, despite its micro size, is Malloki’s base. To enter, one must delicately use the knocker, then push open the door (quit the intricate process on this scale). As the door opens, the entering party is reduced in size greatly, with height in feet becoming height in inches with a hard minimum of 3 inches in height. Anyone can perform this ritual, as no means of locking the door have currently been installed.
The inside of the mansion is a spacious design, with plenty of rooms and several floors for this new height adjustment. Furniture, food, and pretty much anything one might ask for is created upon request. However, nothing may leave the dollhouse. Food has sustenance and flavor but provides no nutrients. Weapons are brittle, as well as armor when created by the mansion’s magic.
Once a guest leaves, the shrinking effect wears off immediately once clear of the door frame and any overhang. Before entering again, the guest must perform the reentering process.
One might find it odd how this house moves… Whenever it is ready to go mobile, it grows long, spindly spider legs from either side and scurries along the ground like a macabre Monster House. No matter the jostling outside, the contents and people within feel nothing, which is good when it takes to climbing walls and other obstacles.
Basically just reclaiming an already approved base 'cause I was silly and lost it. Here's the link to the original!
User name: Mugen What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable Effects Revive (Single Use) Descriptor: The Cherry Blossom Compact - A small, flat case containing cherry blossoms pulled from a magical tree. Mugen collected these many years ago in an attempt to bring his mother back to...
Descriptor: Celestial Dolphin - The spaceship Gizmo and Gadget ride in that managed to come to the Crossroads too along with their crew/allies. The spaceship resembles a dolphin and moves like one throughout space giving it the appearance that it's swimming.
Coin to be deducted: 8,000 Coins
STAFF EDIT: The costs for this one look kind of...off. Check the following:
If there were any other features being added to account for the extra costs, then make note of those somewhere. Otherwise, make sure to get the costs adjusted appropriately and we can get you approved.
Descriptor: Celestial Dolphin - The spaceship Gizmo and Gadget ride in that managed to come to the Crossroads too along with their crew/allies. The spaceship resembles a dolphin and moves like one throughout space giving it the appearance that it's swimming.
Mobile Base (1000)
Flight 4 (800)
-- Ongoing (+400)
Protection 4 (400)
-- Ongoing (+400)
Healing 4 (800)
Damage 4 (400)
-- Ranged (+200)
Communication (100)
Sense (IFF Radar) 5 (500)
Concealment (Sight) 4 (400)
Total 5400
x Size Modifier (x3) = 9600 +6600 = 16,200
After Enterprising Discount - 12,150
Descriptor: This comfortably sized research shuttle is outfitted with everything Caustic needs for his private lab to produce and experiment with any type of sample he needs. It can hold a maximum crew of six, but that's when things feel a bit crowded. There is a spartan kitchen that will support a full crew complement for several months. Additionally, there are well stocked medical facilities and a small armory that holds the weapons Caustic has gathered. It is equipped with a regenerative shield system, can land and fly in an atmosphere, and is space worthy. The Tonegawa has been equipped in preparation of the True Heir's rescue of Caustic, with new systems and armaments. It has two medium range Plasma Disruptors, a new sensor array to detect incoming ships, and an experimental cloaking device that can fade the ship from the visible light spectrum.
With Caustic's extended incarceration Anders has since taken control of the Tonegawa and is currently using it as a base of operations for the Heralds.
Coin to be deducted: 12,150
STAFF EDIT: Everything here looks good to go. You're all set! Coin deducted.
Descriptor: A simple, but effective Mass Teleport Scroll. The caster of this scroll must channel the spells energy for 30 seconds, then all entities within 10 feet of the caster are teleported to any random safe space up to a mile away. Side effects may include minor nausea or dizziness.
Coin to be deducted: 750 (50% from using Masahir's Thrifty discount, Thread interaction here)
