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Ahana Varma

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User name: Ahana Varma

Name of Ability?
Burning Heart of the Divine Conflagration

Ability Effects:
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UPGRADING THIS (old):

Adaptation: Incredible Cold Environments (100)
Adaptation: Incredible Heat Environments (100)
Endurance 1 (100)
Protection 1 (100)
--Ongoing 1 (100)

Total Cost: 500



TO THIS (new):

Adaptation: Incredible Cold Environments (100)
Adaptation: Incredible Heat Environments (100)
Endurance 3 (300)
Protection 1 (100)
--Ongoing 1 (100)

Total Cost: 700

Descriptor: .
UPGRADING THIS (old):

This ability has no visual effect. Thanks to the magic within her body, Ahana is more resilient than most people, with her bare skin being resistant to knives and other light damage. She also has substantially more stamina than the average person and is unaffected by even the most extreme temperature fluctuations.



TO THIS (new):

This ability has no visual effect. Thanks to the magic within her body, Ahana is more resilient than most people, with her bare skin being resistant to knives and other light damage. She also has about as much stamina as a normal human can possibly get and is unaffected by even the most extreme temperature fluctuations.

Essence Cost: 700

Jeff Edit: (y)
 
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Ahana Varma

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Name of Ability?
The Cursed Sword of b’Akphiyr

Ability Effects:
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UPDATING THIS:

Damage 4 (400)
--Ongoing (400)
--Indiscriminate (-200)
--Chaotic (-200)
--Removable (-200)

Total Cost: €200


TO THIS:

Damage 4 (400)
--Indirect (400)
--Indiscriminate (-200)
--Chaotic (-200)
--Removable (-200)

Total Cost: €200

Descriptor: .

UPDATING THIS:

A cursed sword inhabited by the soul of a demon, the blade is much less tiring to wield than it ought to be given its size (160cm long in total), and so would be an excellent weapon, were it not for its unfortunate habit of frequently attempting to murder or maim anyone within reach, including its wielder. Injuries dealt by this sword also bleed much more fiercely than normal… to such an extent that even a shallow cut can result in its victim bleeding to death within a minute if they don’t receive immediate medical attention. This effect doesn’t in any way prevent healing of their injuries, however.


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A cursed sword inhabited by the soul of a demon who goes by the name "b'Akphiyr" (pronounced like "backfire"). This weapon is much lighter and less cumbersome to wield than it ought to be given its size (160cm long) and weight, yet hits just as hard as would be expected of such a large sword. On top of that, its blade also possesses the ability to (partially or wholly) take on a smoky, shadowy, ethereal form whenever the demon wishes for it to do so, enabling it to pass through solid objects such as walls.

As a result, it would be an excellent sword to own, were it not for the fact that whenever it is swung, b'Akphiyr will decide to target whomever he feels like cutting, regardless of his wielder's intentions. In many cases, this results in the wielder themselves (or their allies) being the ones harmed, rather than their foes. B'Akphiyr has also been known to sometimes turn his blade ethereal when his wielder attempts to use him to block an incoming strike.

Essence Cost: 200

Frisco Edit: APPROVERINO
 
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Name of Ability?
Creation (Mundane Items)

Ability Effects:
Variable Creation 1
Activation (30 Seconds)

Descriptor: Creation is a Quirk that allows the user to materialize mundane, basic items so long as they are small. It is one of the Quirks that Izuku still has. This can be used for example to materialize clothes, for Izuku or maps of the surrounding area should the need arise for such.

Essence Cost: 100

Edit: Approved
 
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Name of Ability?
Sound Bullet

Ability Effects:
Communication

Negative Modifiers: Concentration

Descriptor: With proper concentration and focus, Zebra can tune his already superhuman hearing to such an extent he can actually hear specific signals and forms of energy transmitted through other communications mediums, and in turn project his own voice at a matching frequency and transmit it back, allowing him to communicate with those who might 'call' him up.

Essence Cost: 50

Frisco Edit: YUP APPROVE
 
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Name of Ability?
Machine Gun Voice

Ability Effects:
Damage 3 (300)
-- Ranged (150)
-- Finite (-150)
-- Side Effect (-150)

Positive Modifiers: Ranged

Negative Modifiers: Finite, Side Effect

Descriptor: Zebra inhales a deep breath, before proclaiming the attack’s name and unleashing a deep, reverberating staccato shout that forms into hundreds of ‘bullets’ of sound, which bombard a target with a storm of impacts. Each individual sound bullet is roughly the size of a normal human’s fist, producing a small explosion on impact. Individually each shot is not very powerful, but their sheer number and rate of fire makes them rapidly add up.

The attack has an onslaught of only a few seconds, and while it is one of Zebra’s easier attacks to manage it still drains energy faster than normal, burning through stored calories from food at an accelerated rate if overused. It also runs the risk of damaging his vocal cords and ruining his voice, preventing any other sound-based attacks, requiring moderation in its use.

Essence Cost: 150

Frisco Edit: YES ANOTHER. APPROVE.
 
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Name of Ability?
Deltmont Dewdrop

Ability Effects:
Debuff [Rank 5] + 500

Positive Modifiers: Affect Multiple, Indirect, Ongoing

Negative Modifiers: Activation, Finite, Limited, Nondiscriminating, Removable

Descriptor: This dewdrop is a flower with a blue outer lining to it that has white covering the inner petals, mixing between a cat-tail plant and a dewdrop plant. Created by Ricter, the flower is special in that once fully grown all those with in a certain area are hit with a sensation of muscle relaxation, leaving those afflicted slow, unable to move as effectively, and sluggish. Victims can expect a lowered control over their body as the flowers pollen is made to paralyze the muscles of living creatures. However the sensations vanish once it is destroyed, yet the pollen will pass through anything that's not air tight.

He holds the means to grow this flower via pouches of pollen, which can be dumped over soil and be made to grow a single flower per pouch. Given it originates from a flower and its grown from pouches of pollen he owns it is a removable object. Once the spores are planted it takes thirty seconds before the flower grows fully and the aroma spreads through out the area around it, being indiscriminate on who it effects, besides himself. The pollen can only be planted in soil, and he can only carry two pouches of this flowers growing pollen at a time, if he wishes to replenish the pouches he needs to harvest the pollen from the flowers which takes well over a minute or two of time.

Essence Cost: 250
Frisco EDIT: APPROOOOVE.
 
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Name of Ability?
Fire Blast App

Ability Effects:
Damage - Rank 3 (300 Essence, 100 per rank)
--Activation (45 seconds) - 100
Debuff - Rank 1 (100 per rank)
--Side Effect (Burns him, as well) - 100
--Limited (Does not work under water) - 100
--Ongoing (+100)

Descriptor: A fireball that travels at the speed of an arrow. This must be manually activated by Izuku, and takes about 45 seconds to charge up. It is weak to water elemental attacks, and air elemental attacks, as well as Earth elemental (Rock / Dirt) attacks. It has the side-effect of making him weak to such attacks when he is using this particular Quirk.

Essence Cost: 200

Staff -- Approved.
 
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Name of Ability?
Infinite Gravity

Ability Effects:
Damage(Gravity) - Rank 5(500)
-Affects Multiple(250)
-Ongoing(500)
-In-discriminating(-250)
-Side Effect - Tiredness(-250)
-Activation(-500)

Descriptor: Description: A slow start up spell with immense power but a big cost of energy... but once started it's a Gravity Well with equal suction to a black hole with immense destructive energy. This is the weaker version of her mother's Infinite Void. One use used to drain Kokonoe, but the effect will stick around until she forces it to turn off. She's trained this ability over time, to make a small controlled gravity well similar to a black hole however it's still tiring and has a long start up.

Essence Cost: 250

Jeff Edit: You don't need to include the "damage type" in the Effects. Do so via the Description. You'll probably want to include "Debuff" if you want it to draw people into it. State how long the "start-up time" is for your Ability. You have the second level of Activation, so it'll need to be 30 seconds or longer. Otherwise, this Ability is good to go.
 
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Name of Ability?
Half-Cat Movement

Ability Effects:
Speed - Rank 1(200)
Concealment(Hearing) - Rank 1(Already Bought, but I'm more so moving it into a real ability. Not sure how to state it otherwise or where else to put this. So -100 moving it right?)
-Ongoing(100)

Descriptor: Description: As a half-beastman Kokonoe is faster than the average person, as well as more quiet in movement.

Essence Cost: 300

Jeff Edit: The Cost of this ability will be 400, and make sure you state that. Just remove the old one and add in this one, with the appropriate prices.
 
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Name of Ability?
Communicator (Brooke)

Ability Effects:
Communication - Rank 1

Negative Modifiers: Removable

Descriptor: Brooke has a small phone for contact with other team members. It comes with a wireless earpiece that allows her to talk discreetly if needed.

Essence Cost: 50

Edit - Approved
 
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User name: Brooke Stryker

Name of Ability?
Communicator (Baldur)

Ability Effects:
Communication - Rank 1

Negative Modifiers: Removable

Descriptor: Baldur has a wireless earpiece he can use to communicate remotely with primarily Brooke, but also any members of his team as needed.

Essence Cost: 50

Edit -- Approved
 
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User name: Kokonoe

Name of Ability?
Magi-Tech Freeze Ray

Ability Effects:
Debuff, Frozen Solid - Rank 5(500)
Ongoing - Freezing Effect(500)
Ranged(250)
Indiscriminate(-250)
Weakness - This skill freezes the air but beings with no form like a Ghost or a being made of purely Plasma can't be frozen.(-250)
Removable(-250)

Descriptor: A simple freeze ray that replaces Kokonoe's Wrench in combat occasionally. Kokonoe made it herself. How? She won't tell.

Essence Cost: 500

Jeff Edit: Indiscriminate would only apply if this Ability could affect more than a single person at a time. Price will be 750 Essence, and bear in mind that there will be others ways than just being a ghost to avoid this, such as hiding behind obstacles, or a buff dude flexing his way out. Debuff allows for narrative counters.
 
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User name: Kokonoe

Name of Ability?
Infinite Gravity; Upgrading

Ability Effects:
Name of Ability?
Infinite Gravity

Ability Effects:
Damage - Rank 5(500)
-Affects Multiple(250)
-Ongoing(500)
-In-discriminating(-250)
-Side Effect - Tiredness(-250)
-Activation(-500)

Adding:
Debuff - Rank 5(500)

Descriptor: A slow start up spell with immense power but a big cost of energy... but once started it's a Gravity Well with equal suction to a black hole with immense destructive energy. This is the weaker version of her mother's Infinite Void. One use used to drain Kokonoe, but the effect will stick around until she forces it to turn off. She's trained this ability over time, to make a small controlled gravity well similar to a black hole however it's still tiring and has a long start up of thirty seconds. Making her attack even in her own series slow.

Essence Cost: 750

Jeff Edit: (y)
 
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Name of Ability?
Reign of Chaos

Ability Effects:
Damage 2 (200)
--Removable (-100)

Descriptor: A purple and gray sword that is a recreation of a blade Warren once had at his disposal in the Omniverse. While not an exact replica he believes the blade to be sufficient for his intended purposes.

Essence Cost: 100

Jeff Edit: (y)
 
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User name: Kokonoe

Name of Ability?
Ignition Fireball Volley

Ability Effects:
Weak Fireball Volley
Damage Rank 1(100)
-Ranged(50)
-Affects Multiple(50)
Total Cost: 200

Description: A weak round of fireballs, from her practice in magic. Why is it weak when she can summon meteors? Energy budget cuts would be her answer.

--Upgrading to;
Ignition Fireball Volley
Damage Rank 1(100)
-Ongoing(100)
-Ranged(50)
-Affects Multiple(50)
-Limited(-50)

Descriptor: Description: A weak round of fireballs, from her practice in magic. Why is it weak when she can summon meteors? Energy budget cuts would be her answer. Now it can continue to burn by reigniting itself from the burned area, however water and ice creatures are immune to such an effect and are only hit the initial time from the fireball.

Essence Cost: 250

Staff Edit: Sadly the new version of this will not qualify for Limited, as it only does not work on certain things as opposed to only working on certain things- You could give it Weakness, though. But either way, the effect would need to not work at all to qualify, as opposed to only part of the effect not working.
 

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Jericho Missile

Ability Effects:
Damage (100) Rank 3
Range: Far - Duration: Instantaneous
Modifiers: Ranged [50]; Affects Multiple [50]; Indiscriminate [-50]; Finite (8) [-50]

Descriptor: A missile fired from the Iron Butler's wrists. It denotates once more in the air, scattering smaller explosives in the direction the missile was originally fired. The resulting explosion is rather powerful.

Essence Cost: 300

Staff Edit: Aside from no longer needing the Range and Duration fields (and needing some clarification that listed costs for mods and effects are per rank and not total), this is approved.
 

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Eldritch Blast

Ability Effects:
Damage (200) Rank 2
Ranged 2
Modifiers: Ranged(-100)

Descriptor: Kahnzee speaks in an ancient tongue, her eyes and fingertips begin to light up with a sickly green glow as she performs a short ritual that involves writing words in the air. From the center of these symbols sparks to life a primordial blast that when properly prepared can attack from a distance as well as close encounters.

Essence Cost: 100

Staff Edit: Ranged is a positive modifier, so it would actually add 100 to the cost of this ability instead of subtract, making it 300 total. It's approved at the intended cost, though!
 

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Name of Ability?
Master skill: Social (political speaker

Ability Effects:
Minion and Casualty Discount 2 (-10% less minions/casualties cost)

Descriptor: Kane is an exceptionally powerful speaker that asserts his views with confidence and carefully thought out logic. combined with his natural charisma, Kane does not find it difficult to find people willing to fight for him.

Essence Cost: 600

Staff Edit: Approved!
 
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