Ability Approval I

[Rukia Kuchiki]

User name: Weiss Schnee

Name of Ability?
Hollowfied body

Ability Effects:
Damage 1 (100)
Need for sleep (50)
Endurance 1 (100)
Chemical or Toxic environments (50)

Descriptor: Weiss is a hollow, and this has given her body a naturally higher limit than the average human being. She does not tire as quickly, does not need to sleep, and hits abnormally hard even with her bare hands. it also allows her to avoid natural toxicity to a reasonably high degree, though concentrated attacks will hit just as hard as ever.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Mickey Mouse]

User name: Mickey Mouse

Name of Ability?
Counter Shield

Ability Effects:
Protection 5 (500)
— Removable (-250)
Damage 5 (500)
— Triggered: After Attack (+250)
— Removable (-250)

Descriptor: Mickey’s keyblade has the ability to transform into the Counter Shield, a great instrument of protection crafted by the gods of Olympus themselves! The shield can protect against mighty blows, and when struck dead on, will also immediately launch a counter-attack: a great stone fist will burst forth from the center of the buckler, launching at the origin point of the attack it just defended the Mickster from and threatening to sock it to whoever is there, though it can’t reach farther than ten feet,

Essence Cost: 750

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Summer]

Username: Summer

Name of Ability?
Swift as the Wind, Strong as the Storm

Ability Effects:
Speed 1 (200)
-- Limited (Storm) (-50)

Damage 2 (200)
-- Limited (Storm) (-100)

Move Object 3 (300)
-- Limited (Storm) (-150)

Descriptor: The storm-bearing Summer’s being is imbued with that which they embody, granting them an innate speed and strength.

Essence Cost: 400

STAFF EDIT: If the Effects of this ability are innate, it is not Limited. The Limited modifier applies when you can say that an Effect “only works when (something specific happens)/only works on (something specific).” Can you explain how this ability is Limited?

Approved!

 

[King Shark]

Username: Katsuki Bakugo

Name of Ability?
Super Crown

Ability Effects:
Shapeshifting (1500)
Modifiers:
-Limited/Single Form (-500)
Protection – Rank 7 (700)
Modifiers:
+Ongoing (700)
-Limited (-350)
Adaptation: Hot/Cold Environments (200)
Modifiers:
Limited (-100)
Damage – Rank 7 (700)
Modifiers:
Limited (-350)

Descriptor: During the Death Game competition in which he was a competitor Katsuki Bakugo acquired a unique crown. Upon placing the Super Crown on his head he was transformed into a female – a Princess to be precise – with vastly increased durability and super strength. In addition, this provided Princess Bakugo with the ability to breathe fire through her mouth (a small hop to make from her Explosion Quirk), to endure harsh environments, and to breathe fire. It also granted her a large, spiked turtle shell that sat upon her back, horns which jutted from her skull, sharp fangs and claws, and a rockin’ feminine bod. This transformation takes place when she places the Super Crown above her head after which point only she can remove the accessory.

Essence Cost: 2500

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Scylla]

Username: Scylla

Name of Ability?
Horror of the Deep

Ability Effects:
Adaptation - Need to Breathe (200)
-- Limited (Can breathe underwater) (-50)

Adaptation - Nonbiological anatomy (300)

Speed I (200)
-- Limited (Only underwater) (-50), Ongoing (100)

Descriptor: The curse that twisted Scylla, turning her legs into four vicious wolf-snakes, drove her to the ocean out of shame. Eventually, she accepted her title of monster and terrorized the sea with a newfound ability to swim, and to breath underwater.

Essence Cost: 700

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Scylla]

Username: Scylla

Name of Ability?
Sic ‘Em

Ability Effects:
Damage 3 (300)
-- Affects Multiple 1 (+150)

Move Object 3 (300)
-- Affects Multiple 1 (+150)

Descriptor: With a harsh command, Scylla orders her wolves to attack, sicing them on up to 4 foes near her. They lash out quickly with large fangs, grabbing, shaking, and throwing their chosen prey.

Essence Cost: 900

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Scylla]

Username: Scylla

Name of Ability?
Sentinel

Ability Effects:
Senses 4 (Smell) (400)
-- Ongoing (400), Chaotic (-200)

Descriptor: Scylla’s wolves have quite acute senses, and are trained to sniff out prey or danger, and alert her to it as well. Of course, since it isn’t Scylla herself with the senses, and since she can’t perfectly understand her wolves, this system isn’t perfect.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Dr. Caustic]

Username: Dr. Caustic

Name of Ability?
Nox Gas Grenade

Ability Effects:
Damage (400) Rank 4
Modifiers: Ongoing(+0), Affects Multiple (+50), Finite (-50), Indiscriminate (-50), Ranged (+50)

Debuff [Paralysis] (400) Rank 4
Modifiers: Ongoing(0), Affects Multiple (+50), Finite (-50), Indiscriminate (-50), Ranged (+50)

Descriptor: An small cylindrical gas grenade, marked with safety red and yellow and stored on Caustic's bandolier. He can only mix and carry one grenade at a time, however he can immediately cook up another and have it "marinate" on his bandolier until it's ready to be thrown.

The Nox Gas in this grenade has been tweaked with jungle venom and chemical reagents to enhance pain and induce motor paralysis in addition to it's usual effect. This removes the blinding debuff of the Nox in his traps, and ups the Damage and Debuff (Slow). Biological organisms will feel their muscles lock up and freeze as they choke and cough, intense pain wracking their bodies as their respiratory systems fail. Mechanical or nonorganic foes will experience system failures due to the corrosive effects and electrodisruptive properties of the chaff fiber he includes in his Nox Gas.

Essence Cost: 800

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Dr. Caustic]

Username: Dr. Caustic

Name of Ability?
Nox Vision

Ability Effects:
Sense 1 (Sight + X-Ray) (Ongoing, Limited: Must be affected by Nox Gas)

Descriptor: Caustic laces his gas with electrodetectable nanofibers, painting targets that have inhaled it in his view. After someone inhales his Nox Gas from any source, Caustic can see the victim as outlined in bright green on his goggles. He can see through walls or anything in the way while viewing with Nox Vision, which can greatly add to his accuracy and ability to blindside targets.

Essence Cost: 100

STAFF EDIT: Needs Indirect for seeing through objects!

 

[Beatrix III]

Username: Beatrix III

Name of Ability?
[Jaina] Arcane Barrage

Ability Effects:
Damage 3 (300)
Ranged (150)

Descriptor: A focused shot of twin arcane bolts that spiral over one another until impact.

Essence Cost: 450

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Solomon Grundy]

Username: Okuyasu Nijimura

Name of Ability?
Space Erasure - Banishment

Ability Effects:
Protection 4 (Limited: Projectiles)
200 Essence

Debuff 5 (Banish) [Finite]
250 Essence

Descriptor: The existentially terrifying ability of The Hand, it's right hand can remove items from reality. This is supremely helpful against any sort of projectile weapon (spears, arrows, bullets, fireballs, etc ) but its real power is in its ineffability. Unattended items and random props are removed from reality forever, never to be recovered. Items that result from another Character's Abilities are instead banished for a short while before returning in the same spot they were before erased.

Using Focus on this move allows Okuyasu to remove an entire person from reality for about 10 seconds, but the effort is taxing and dulls The Hand's ability for a while. The banished individual is sent to a blank void, filled with everything Okuyasu has ever erased. Time has no meaning, and the transition is disorientating on the way back.

Essence Cost: 450

Staff edit: The protection side of the ability looks good. The banishment side will need ongoing for ten seconds. Some elaboration weakening of the hand and the finite modifier would be appreciated. Currently it seems that Side Effect would be more appropriate.

 

[Summer]

Username: Summer

Name of Ability?
Life-Bringing Light

Ability Effects:
Healing 5 (1000)
-- Affects Multiple 1 (+250)
-- Ongoing (+500)
-- Activation 1 (-250)
-- Concentration (-250)
-- Indiscriminate (-250)
-- Limited (Sun) (-250)
-- Side Effect (immobile) (-250)
-- Weakness (non-organic life) (-125)

Descriptor: The sun-bearing Summer’s prized skill. Standing still and holding their hands together, they slowly call forth a healing light from their body, emitting a warm glow that constantly heals all within short-range. Though undoubtedly useful, the immobility can make it unwieldy, and the fact it doesn’t patch up non-organic life narrows its effectiveness a bit.

Essence Cost: 375

STAFF EDIT: Please mention how long this ability takes to activate in your description. Also, clearly mention in your description how this Healing Effect is only usable while your character is in their Sun form.

 

[Summer]

Username: Summer

Name of Ability?
Life-Bringing Light

Ability Effects:
Healing 5 (1000)
-- Affects Multiple 1 (+250)
-- Ongoing (+500)
-- Activation 1 (-250)
-- Concentration (-250)
-- Indiscriminate (-250)
-- Limited (Sun) (-250)
-- Side Effect (immobile) (-250)
-- Weakness (non-organic life) (-125)

Descriptor: A light-bringing spell only available to the Sun-possessed Summer. The Sun comes to a standstill and clasps their hands together in a prayer-like stance, harnessing their innate light over 15 seconds. For as long as they’re allowed to hold still, they glow with warm, healing light, quickly patching up the wounds of all who come close to them. While undoubtedly useful, its effectiveness is limited by their need to keep still, and its inability to mend possible inorganic allies.

Essence Cost: 375

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Shinku]

Username: Shinku

Name of Ability?
Orochi

Ability Effects:
Damage Rank 6 [600]
Debuff Rank 6 [600] - > Ongoing [0]

Descriptor: Shinku wields a black steel 60cm katana that he got from his father as a gift while still a child. The katana is able to inflict poison to whoever is cut by its blade. Within the blade, a shadow demon of the name Orochi was sealed. The demon resembles a large snake, stretching up to four times the height of an average man. With the shadow demon awakened, the sword's quality has significantly increased and even allowing its user the utilization of some of its power. The sword can now be exclusively used by its owner, latching some chains onto its user the moment it is drawn. The sword also has the ability to resist the grip of anyone else who tries to take a hold of it.

note: Upgrade from Fang of Abyss

Fang of Abyss - 500 Essence

Orochi - 1200 Essence

1200 - 500 = 700 Essence

Essence Cost: 700

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Leonardo]

Username: Leonardo

Name of Ability?
Donatello

Ability Effects:
Summon (300)

Descriptor: The brains of the family, the bo wielding Donatello loves science and technology and is often responsible for many of the turtles' plans.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Leonardo]

Username: Leonardo

Name of Ability?
Donatello: Bo Staff

Ability Effects:
Damage 3 (300)
-Removable (150)
Protection 3 (300)
-Removable (150)

Descriptor: Donatello's weapon of choice is the wooden bo staff, capable of striking with greater range than his brothers, and works great as a defensive weapon.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Leonardo]

Username: Leonardo

Name of Ability?
Donatello: Fitness

Ability Effects:
Endurance 1 (100)
Agility 3 (600)

Descriptor: Donatello has great stamina and almost peerless agility.

Essence Cost: 700

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Shinku]

Username: Shinku

Name of Ability?
Orochi

Ability Effects:
Damage Rank 6 [600] - > Ranged [300]
Debuff Rank 6 [600] - > Ongoing [0]

Descriptor: Shinku wields a black steel 60cm katana that he got from his father as a gift while still a child. The katana is able to inflict poison to whoever is cut by its blade. Within the blade, a shadow demon of the name Orochi was sealed. The demon resembles a large snake, stretching up to four times the height of an average man. With the shadow demon awakened, the sword's quality has significantly increased and even allowing its user the utilization of some of its power. The sword can now be exclusively used by its owner, latching some chains onto its user the moment it is drawn. Also with the latched chains, Shinku is able to throw the sword and swing the chain to cut enemies from a distance. The sword also has the ability to resist the grip of anyone else who tries to take a hold of it.

Note: Ability Upgrade

New Ability - 1500
Old Ability - 1200

Essence Cost - 300

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Orion]

Username: Orion

Name of Ability?
Ki Beam

Ability Effects:
Damage 6 (600)
+ Ongoing (0)
+ Ranged (300)
--- Concentration (300)
Total: 600

Descriptor: Description: Orion forms his ki into a streaming column of energy to attack his targets. The beam deals damage on impact and Orion can continue the attack as long as he pumps energy into it. However while maintaining the beam, he must concentrate. Upon ending the ki beam, a small explosion occurs (this is just for visual flair and does not increase the effective radius of the attack). It can be fired from either his hands or his mouth.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Orion]

Username: Orion

Name of Ability?
Upgrading - Physical Training

Ability Effects:
Damage 6 (600)
Protection 6 (600)
+ Ongoing (0)
Endurance 1 (100)
Adaptation: Falling (100)
Total: 1400 (+200 on top of old cost)

Descriptor: Increasing Damage/Protection from 5 to 6.

Essence Cost: 1400

STAFF EDIT: Approved!