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Solomon Grundy

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Are you spending 50 Tokens? No

Has it been at least 6 months since your last switch? Yes

How much essence will this new character have? 2000

New Character Name: Okuyasu Nijimura

Is this character an OC or a Canon character? Canon Character

Starting Location? Erde Nona

Character Behavior
Impulsive Brawler

Okuyasu is impulsive, almost childish in how much he is ruled by his emotions. He is quick to anger and to attack, frequently rushing in with no regard to consequences. Additionally, he's not very smart as he himself would say, and frequently hamstrings himself strategically.

Okuyasu is also a brawler, a teen delinquent just as proficient in kicking ass as he is in using his stand.

Physical Description:

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Character History:

Twelve years prior to Diamond is Unbreakable, the Nijimura family's matriarch died, leaving the father in depression. On top of that, Japan had been going through a tough time economically and the family soon fell into poverty. The father constantly abused his sons as a result.

Two years later, the patriarch started to receive letters with money and jewels. Much later in his life, his older son Keicho would realize his father had sold his soul and heart to Dio Brando, who, at that time, was scouring the globe for a Stand user capable of recreating reality.

Dio, however, distrusted the Nijimura patriarch and implanted a seed of his undead body within him. When Jotaro defeated Dio, and when his younger son Okuyasu was only 7, the seed burst, causing the father to slowly mutate into a monstrous form, and later lose his ability to speak. This form would automatically heal any wounds inflicted. Searching with his brother Keicho Nijimura for a way to kill their father and put him out of his misery, they started using the Bow and Arrow in possession of Keicho to find a user capable of killing him.

In their search for a Stand capable of killing their father, the Nijimura brothers end up shooting Koichi Hirose, giving him Echoes. This attracts Josuke Higashikata's attention and a fight ensues. Okuyasu, due to not being very bright, ends up causing his own defeat. After explaining his story, Keicho is killed by the Stand Red Hot Chili Pepper, who steals the Bow and Arrow. Okuyasu then joined Josuke to find the Stand user who killed his brother.

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『T H E H A N D』
Okuyasu's stand is a quasi-ethereal being that has physics warping powers. It can manifest anywhere beside Okuyasu in a 1.7 meter radius, or it can directly manifest over him to allow him to use it's special power. Just being a power type stand user makes Okuyasu a bit more durable and perceptive than the average person. He's capaple of precise and accurate movements with it (although not as much as Star Platinum), and he is more than able to keep up with Crazy Diamond in an all out attack rush.

Endurance 3 - 300
Protection 3 - 300
Sense 1 [Vision] - 100

The Hand's signature ability is being able to cut the space between objects, rejoining them as if the erased space never existed. Okuyasu himself says that the cut space disappears from the face of the Earth and it's impossible to recover. The range and the size of his erase move depends on Okuyasu's will, and he has been able to use it for erasures as large as a car and as precise as a single pencil line. Once something is swept over, it's erased, regardless of if it's something got in the way that Okuyasu didn't intend.

When used against a living target, space is not 'erased' so much as it is "disrupted". Enough consecutive erasures could easily completely wipe a target from existence, however it would take multiple hits over a very short period of time.

Damage 5 (Indiscriminate) - 450

Okuyasu's favorite move is to "scrape" away empty space in front of himself. This will teleport himself hurtling forwards a good distance, or draw in anyone else caught in the rush of negative space. However, it will teleport both Okuyasu/a Target and any other small objects in their immediate vicinity, such as flowerpots or debris. There's no limit to how much or how often this ability can be used, as long as Okuyasu can move his arm to swipe.

Teleport 2 (Self/Other) - 650
Speed 1 - 200
 
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Hey there! This looks good for the most part, just a few things to note...

For all of your abilities listed here, please mention the Rank of Effect you have chosen (you did this on some, but not all). You can write this as "Speed 1 - 200" or "Sense 1 [Vision] -100", for instance.

Okuyasu's favorite move is to "scrape" away empty space in front of himself. This will teleport himself hurtling forwards a good distance, or draw in anyone else caught in the rush of negative space. However, it will teleport both Okuyasu/a Target and any other small objects in their immediate vicinity, such as flowerpots or debris. There's bo limit to how much or how often this ability can be used. He's even used it to effectively fly by contiuously swiping forwards to rocket through the air after a fleeing opponent.

Teleport 2 - 600
Self/Other - 50
Speed - 200

So just be clear, you want to be able to teleport both Okuyasu AND others at the same time? If so, that would be Affects Multiple and not the Self/Other modifier. The Self/Other modifier is different in that it allows you to target either yourself OR others, not both.

In addition, if you want him to be able to fly you should add the Flight Effect.
 

Solomon Grundy

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Ah, no, it's an either/or for the teleport. He can't do both at once.

Also, I'm eventually going to be purchasing fly, for now it's just going to work as long, rapid teleports, like an infinite turbo dash.
 

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Unfortunately right now you're sitting at 2,050 total spent Essence when you've only got 2,000 to spend. If you think it's possible, I'd suggest adding a negative modifier somewhere to reduce the total cost by -50E.
 
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