Chungchangching Character Application

Vitan Armerstrannie

Don't fuck with me. I will cry.
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User name: Chungchangching

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Vitan Armerstrannie

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Character Behavior:
Delusional Improviser. Vitan's mindset operates on Murphy's law, refusing to trust anything even if the situation has little chances of going wrong.

Ms. Amerstrannie also likes to fight at the seat of her pants because "plans are for fuckers" according to her.

Physical Description:

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Character History:

Vitan has been cursed with terribly bad luck for as long as she can remember. She is the most unlucky person to grace her city from childhood to adulthood. Something simple like returning a book from the library becomes a life or death situation and people don't want to be associated with her because of her reputation as a jinxed person. Thanks to the curse, she's been put through a lot of undesirable situations such as thugs mugging her, a bank robbery happening when she's inside and a brawl starting in a bar she's hanging out in for a few examples. And because of this, she spends most of her days cooped up inside her home. The occasional moment she gets sent to another dimension by some portal is the only time she actually comes out of her apartment to socialize.

Abilities/Skills:

Unlucky Misses
Description: Vitan activates her ability with a snap of a finger, making the enemy's attacks against her miss entirely. Their punches? Miss! Their spray of bullets? Miss! Any attack, really. It only works for 5 seconds. Of course, she has to actively try to dodge.
Protecting Rank 3 (+300)
Ranged (+150)

Hapless Stumble
Description: When running or doing any type of footwork, the enemy has a chance to stumble or even trip depending on how fast or complex they're moving their feet around. It is also activated by a snap of a finger.
Debuff Rank 2 (+200)
Ranged (+100)
Ongoing (+200)

Attack Backfire
Description: With yet another snap of a finger. She can make the enemy's own attacks backfire against them. Such as a ricochet bullet bouncing back to the enemy, accidentally screwing up an attempt to catch their own boomerang. Any weapon that has the risk of hitting them right back.
Damage Rank 3 (+300)
Ranged (+150)

Butterfingers!
Description: Vitan likes to do this little thing to start off fights. When she activates the ability (You know the drill). She has a chance of making people drop their weapons by startling them with a surprise jump and many more.
Debuff Rank 2 (+200)
Ranged (+100)

How much Essence did you spend? 1700

How much Essence do you have left? 300

Were you referred by an existing member? Thatguy sent me!
 
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Gilgamesh

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Hi! Welcome to the crossroads!

Your application looks good, but your abilities aren't quite clear.

1) You should have a description of what the abilities does so that people can incorporate it themselves!
2) Since you are only level 1, you are limited to the max rank of 5. As you level up, this rank will increase.
 

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Hey!

That does look a lot better, but abilities her on Multerra are pretty specific, so the kind of bad luck you want to have happen needs to be specific. If you want them to constantly trip, that would have to be its own thing. Want them to bite their tongue? It's own thing. It makes moves kind of expensive, but thats the system we have here! Additionally, you should use the 'Ongoing' modifier if you'd like it to last longer than a couple of seconds. If you want them to trip for about a minute, that would require ongoing.
 

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These abilities are much better!! Though there are some changes!

"Unlucky Misses"
-So since you're 'protecting' yourself from these moves (even though it sounds like a debuff) you'll need protection for these instead!

"Hapless Stumble"
-This looks likes it's going to need 'Ongoing' unless you intend for a single fumble when you snap your fingers.

"Attack Backfire"
-Same comment as Unlucky Miss. This would damage an opponent, so you would need Damage rather than debuff.

"Butterfingers"
-This looks good!
 
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