Edelwyn Character Application

Edelwyn

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Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Edelwyn Overbright

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Character Behavior:
Edelwyn is a Idealistic Healer. Edelwyn dreams of helping people, and of changing things, even when this is entirely unrealistic and unlikely. She has a thousand dreams; and she believes she can put them into practice.

Edelwyn is also a healer. Rather than actually partake in combat, she devotes herself to healing those around her who have been injured. She is happy to heal any side of a battle.



Edelwyn is quiet and dreamy. She is mild-mannered and gentle, caring and kind. Easily distracted, a bit of a wanderer, untidy. It often surprises people when they first see the depths of her passion — when they realise that Edelwyn is not the mild girl they thought she was.

Edelwyn dreams of changing the world. She knows she can do it. At least, she thinks she knows she can do it. She’s a dreamer in every sense of the word, and makes up little stories to entertain her siblings.

She also loves horses, and if she sees one will always pet it. She loves nothing more than galloping, unless perhaps jumping, so cross-country is her discipline of choice.

Physical Description:

Edelwyn is a tall, rather lanky young girl of not-quite twenty, with long, red-gold hair, usually pinned up out of her face, and green-blue eyes that are usually fixated on some object in the far distance. She really looks at the person she’s actually talking to.

She is quite pale, and burns with ease. Her cheeks always have quite a high colour to them, and her head is rather brachycephalic, but fairly narrow. Her nose is quite small, and fairly upturned, and shares the pink of her cheeks.

She is long-limbed indeed, like a tree in winter exposing it’s too-long, too-thin branches. She can generally be found clad in kirtles and chemises; usually green, blue or brown kirtles, and white chemises. They’re generally covered in horse-hair.

Character History:

Edelwyn lived a quiet, happy life in an equestrian centre in the mountains. She had a lovely family: a kind, firm mother who could do seemingly anything, and loved Edelwyn — and the other children— with all her heart.

Her biological father died when she was just a baby, but she loved her stepfather: a gentle, soft-hearted man who cared deeply about everything and everyone.

There was her stepsister, Eoli, who was fourteen and sweet, kind and good, but heart wrenching lay frail. There, too, was her ten-year-old half-brother, Rickin, who was reckless and bright and always optimistic, and her seven-year-old sister, Cathan, who loved everything and was always funny.

Edelwyn decided that her fate in life was to be an equine veterinarian at fifteen, and continued working towards this goal up until now.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Thrifty

Abilities/Skills:

Abilities:




Name: Avoid Fighting.

Healing, rank 3 (600).

Speed, rank 1 (200).

Total Cost: 800.

Description - Due to her healing abilities and ability to flee, Edelwyn can have as little chance of partaking in battle as possible.




Master Skills:

Sport/Athletics (Horseback riding), rank 5 (250).

Medical, rank 6 (300).

Craft (weaving), rank 4 (200)

Knowledge, (horses), rank 4 (200).

Humanities/sciences (Sociology), rank 4 (200).

How much Essence did you spend? 1,950

How much Essence do you have left? 50

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Hi there and welcome to Multerra! You have a really great character here, I love how detailed you’ve made your app. I just have a few notes on your app here for us to work on together, please don’t hesitate to PM me forum-side or on Discord if you need further guidance.

That being said, let’s get started!

In your Character History, can you mention if your character is a native to the Crossroads (our setting) or if they have been transported here by some mystical means?

For your “Avoid Fighting” ability, if you want your character to be capable of running at high speeds for longer than short dashes/bursts of speed, you will need to list the Ongoing modifier (+100E) under Speed. This is completely optional. It would be formatted like below:

Speed Rank 1 (200)
—Ongoing (+100)

In addition, for your character’s Healing Rank 3 Effect on this same ability, how does it work? Is it a magical spell, your character applying first aid to another, or something else? How many individuals can she heal at once? In short, I will need more specific details on how her Healing abilities function so I know what positive or negative modifiers you might need to add.

Here are a few examples of Healing Abilities with more detailed descriptions and modifiers. Feel free to use them as reference points for your own ability:

First Aid
Healing Rank 3 (600)
—Ongoing (+300)
—Self/Other (+75)
—Concentration (-150)

Total Cost: 825E

Ziral has a limited knowledge of healing, but it’s enough to patch up either herself or others under dire circumstances. With her trusty medkit, she is able to clean, stitch, and bandage up even the nastiest of physical wounds. This process requires her complete concentration and any active healing continues for as long as she is engaged in her task— an indefinite period of time. She can patch up either herself or a single target, but not both at once.

Healing Aura
Healing Rank 2 (400)
—Ongoing (+200)
—Affects Multiple (+100)
—Activation: 10s (-100)

Total Cost: 600E

Ziral utters a ten second incantation, after which a glowing green mist appears around her in a 20ft sphere. This aura applies active healing to any of her allies caught inside of it.

For your Master Skills - At Level 1, your character’s rank cap for Master Skills and Abilities is Rank 5. You have one listed here at Rank 6, so please update this!
 
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