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You may edit and delete your own OOC posts as you see fit. In the IC forums, you have a fifteen minute grace period before you'll have to get staff approval for edits and deletions.

This is to prevent any tomfoolery with the canon or to prevent anyone from retro-editing posts for whatever nefarious reasons. Just post with a link to the thread, and a staffer will approve you. (requires no Tokens -- just click the button).

If you want a post or thread deleted, please request that here as well.
 

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So I put this in the thread and OOPSIE POOPSIE ITALICS TAG BROKE.
Can I get an edit to fix that up?
 

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Can my thread get an and [V] tag on the title?


Just realized I can't seem to turn that off in my brain, so here we go.
 

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Nyaaaah I forgot to add a detail. Can someone edit the most recent post in https://multerra.zulenka.com/index.php?threads/npc-flowers-for-the-dead.1515/#post-13371?

There's a bit that begins with "They don't like us very much" and ends with "but his hands were shaking." Can someone change it into this:
“They don’t like us very much,” Peter grinned.

“Yeah, looks that way,” Daisy said. She was shaking.

Suddenly, five gunshots rang from outside the lounge. Daisy and Peter stared at the backdoor uneasily as they heard John Doe yell something unintelligible.

Daisy turned back to Peter. “Oh God, what do we do?”

“We leave,” Peter said, putting his sunglasses on again. His face was calm, but his hands were shaking.

STAFF EDIT: Done
 

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The final post of my thread A Crisis of Aesthetics and Pride has an error in it that I've only just now noticed. The two-paragraph section beginning with 'Growing up on Cevanti...' and ending with 'miraculously unhurt' is still the draft version from before I'd done all my reading. The changes relatively minor, but will be important in the long run.
if some intrepid staffer could replace that section with this:

Growing up on Cevanti, the poorest of the poor, in a ruined Markovian slum just outside of the energy-barrier, Jewels had not exactly been a model citizen. In particular, she only remembered the week following her sixteenth birthday in flashes; on the happy day in question she had drank two liters of some wine a friend of hers had made from fermented fruit peels mixed with some kind of fluid that he claimed he’d found inside a dead zoid. That hadn’t felt good, so she’d chased it with some weird blue mushrooms she’d found growing on a busted barrier-node, and she was off to the races.

‘The races’ in this case, turned out to be a week of extremely irresponsible behaviour, fueled by the most vivid, and occasionally terrifying, hallucinations. She had, or so she was told, after doing a lot of things that subsequently made her a minor legend in the social circles she ran with at the time, jumped on a stolen hover-bike with a busted stabilizer fin and soared off into the forest singing a foul little song that she seemed to be making up on the spot. The next anyone heard of her it was six days later, when she was found wandering in a dehydrated daze about four blocks from her family’s squat, still hallucinating and miraculously unhurt.

I would be eternally grateful.


STAFF EDIT: Done!
 
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Thread: https://multerra.zulenka.com/index.php?threads/boned.1935/page-4#post-16837

Can Staff fix these? Please and thank you! (y)

while Sans was nervous about the who mindreading ordeal

Minor edit: Replace who to whole please?

Minor edit: Fix this from:
The light of the crystals were nice but the fact was that she couldn't stand it afterwhile and would want to cover herself from the light to a degree as she found more solace in such areas, given her history of being in such place that was the Uncanny Valley when it came to her little 'home'.

To:

The light of the crystals were nice but the fact was that she couldn't stand it over time, covering herself with her hoodie as she found more solace in the dark, given to how distracting the bright luminescent light was within Waterfall's caverns were.

Minor edit: Fix this from:

At that last one, Kagami's magenta eyes shot open as they would have a subtle glow in them before they would fade back to normal. She didn't move but the thing was that she was still awake and before long, she would turn to lay on her back, sighing.

To:

At the last intrusive thought, Kagami's magenta eyes shot open as they would have a subtle glow before her eyes would fade back to normal. She didn't move for awhile but as she was awakened, she would eventually remove her hoodie off of her while it limped over the bench.

Eventually, after a couple of seconds, she turned to lay on her back with an annoyed sigh while resting her arms on the side, momentarily crossing them across her waist.
 

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As Waterfall was silent and peaceful for the duo for awhile despite of what was going on, however, Kagami had physically shifted from being on her back to something akin towards sleeping toward facing the back of the bench.

The light of the crystals were nice but the fact was that she couldn't stand it over time, covering herself with her hoodie as she found more solace in the dark, given to how distracting the bright luminescent light was within Waterfall's caverns were.

However, while Sans was nervous about the whole mindreading ordeal, she kept out from messing with him on such powers because she wanted to form something that wasn't 'forced' as Booker would bring up. She would instead wait it out and reap the benefits by keeping it at a distance, however, subtle voices started to plague her mind.

'Don't you find it suspicious that he's hiding things from you?'

'He didn't believe you with the entire mysterious force claim. He thinks you're just some crazy bean girl like all the rest! You should ditch him and teach him a lesson!'

'He's just going to abandon you once he's finished and you will be all alone all over again. You can't get a break at all, can you?'

'You'll always be alone.'


At the last intrusive thought, Kagami's magenta eyes shot open as they would have a subtle glow before her eyes would fade back to normal. She didn't move for awhile but as she was awakened, she would eventually remove her hoodie off of her while it limped over the bench.

Eventually, after a couple of seconds, she turned to lay on her back with an annoyed sigh while resting her arms on the side, momentarily crossing them across her waist.

[ * Kagami was looking up to the crystal ceiling above in silence, unaware of what was out there regardless. Though, before long, she looked down at Sans from nearby as he was still asleep. ]

Alright, here it is.
 

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Another fix post request required @ Thread , please and thank you. :)

"Let's see.." she replied before she continued, "Usually I do carry around something electronic with me whenever it involves instances like this. Just hope I didn't forget it."

Soon to remove her hoodie for a brief moment, she would dig her hand inside the central hoodie pocket, eventually pulling out a small notepad, a pencil and finally, a battery powered pocket radio in the process.

"It's a good thing that I still do have this stuff with me. Let's see if it works.."

Eventually, while she briefly put aside the notepad and pencil to the side, as she would click on the pocket radio to see if it was working. When she heard the static noise, she nodded as everything was going well as she hoped, thank goodness.

"Alright, we're good to go. Yeah, I know, I'm old fashioned with this but it works and besides, I don't care about the fanciness of something since I care more on the means if it working."

The pocket radio would be enveloped with a telekinetic magenta aura as Kagami would get the pencil and notepad ready while looking at the Tall Man before she would straighten her glasses a bit, eventually looking over to Sans while she passed the pocket radio.

"Hey Sans, can ya hold onto this in the meanwhile?"
 

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* i think she is now, actually. nice guess, considering you don’t even know who she is.

Or maybe she did and wasn’t telling Sans. He hardly knew much about her outside of what her species was, some of her powers, personality, and why she was here in the first place. He felt like he was, to put a pun in it, spilling too many beans compared to her.

But if she knew much more than she was letting on…

He continued walking forward, the cold winds of Snowdin blowing through his hoodie like he was wearing a cape.

* so, where you from? i don’t think i got that. there beanish on erde nona?
 

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Thread: https://multerra.zulenka.com/index.php?threads/npc-thread-of-boos-and-gears.1978

The Boo was reminded of Kagami as his eyes lit up a bit but it would be long before he shook his head. "You almost remind me of a particular individual I know of, well more or so someone I view as reckless but she does have a good heart. If you're curious, she goes by Kagami and she is a bit of an eccentric young Beanish."

Eventually, he bowed politely to the duo, "However, it is a pleasure to meet you Gadget and Gizmo."

As the duo were talking about their desire to not only get their errands done, he wondered a bit of this Gaiterra place as he heard of it and when Gadget spoke of return, he froze up a bit. Nobody has ever returned back to their original home from the Crossroads, well not that he knows of especially in the history of the Crossroads. It's practically unheard of.

"While it is noble of you to run such an errand yet to an extent, dangerous, I'm afraid in terms of your origin, there has not been a recorded known way to ever return from the Crossroads. Once you are here, you're more or so have to adjust outside to what you deem as normal to life before coming here." he sighed before he closed his eyes. "This means that whatever condition that wherever this planet is last, all you can hope there's not, metaphorically speaking, an overlooming threatening influence or something has taken hold of it in your absence."

Of course, Booker doesn't know of the conditions of this Gaiterra as he was merely assuming the circumstances.

"I do not know the circumstances of outside the Crossroads nor I ever will unless told of, but if anything, I wouldn't be surprised if said influence comes around into the Crossroads itself since it's a possible chance of such an occurrence especially when there has been instances of outsiders being brought in."

Eventually, he reopened his eyes, furrowed before lowered his head as he continued, "I'm sorry but it is how it is."

He perked up to look at the duo directly again, returning to his normal expression. "However, I can help provide assistance when I can while you are here since it's the least I can do, especially in terms of finding a humble soul that would help you settle in somewhere safe."

A sigh.

"Well, if it's not too crowded, we already have outworlders settling on Nos'Talgia and other planets to avoid the current crisis as we speak."
 
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