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Gilgamesh

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Do you have 10 Tokens? Yes

Are you above Level 3? No

If above Level 3, how much Essence does this New Character have?

New Character Name: Caelus Aurelius

Is this character an OC or a Canon character? Original Character

Starting Location? Cevanti

Physical Tendencies:
  • Power(P): 60%
  • Toughness(T): 10 %
  • Quickness(Q): 0 %
  • Skill(S): 30 %

Personality Tendencies:
  • Aggression(A): 80 %
  • Cunning(C): 0 %
  • Diplomacy(D): 0 %
  • Support(S): 20 %

Physical Description:

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About 6'4 feet tall, 160 pounds. 23 years old.

Character History:

Caelus was born on the main Turian planet of Palaven and lived his life constantly getting into trouble. He would roughhouse with all of the children during his time during schooling and as a result, he would be sent from school to school. His parents weren't in the picture much, as they were traditional Turians serving the army. The onset of his biotics didn't help either as they only allowed him to get into more trouble. The social structure of the schoolyard always bothered him. The bullies and thugs that thrived gave him an upset stomach, he couldn't stand their tyrannical rule over the other kids. He spent his short time at each school, dethroning each of the "kings" of the schoolyard followed shortly by a suspension.

When he finally graduated from school, there was no question of where he was to go. Without hesitation, he enlisted in the army but he couldn't endure the procedures he needed to follow to get the job done. On a mission, he directly disobeyed a direct order from his superior officer, going out on his own, assassinating an enemy commander and delivering a heavy blow to the opposition. He was then discharged from the military immediately and was sent back to the private sector. He has since worked as a mercenary until he was pulled into the crossroads.

Abilities/Skills:

Phaeston
Damage (100) Rank 4
Modifiers: Ranged (+50), Removable (-50)
(100 x 4) + (50 x 4) + (-50 x 4) = 400
Cost: 400 Essence

350


The Phaeston is the general assault rifle for the standard Turian light-infantry assault rifle. It has an excellent rate of fire and accuracy with subpar bullet penetration. It's very lightweight and there is an inherent dampener reducing the effect of recoil against the user making it a very friendly firearm.

Throw
Move Object (100) Rank 4
Modifiers: Ranged (+50), Finite (-50)
(100x4) + (50x4) + (-50 x 4)
Cost: 400 Essence

Caelus extends his hand and tosses an enemy or an object in the air with a biotic blast, throwing them across the room. This move doesn't inherently do any damage but ma deliver some minor damage from hitting a wall or other objects. If used in succession on the same target, the force gets weaker and weaker until the target feels nothing more than a weak shove.

Pull
Move Object (100) Rank 3 Debuff (100) Rank 3
Modifiers: Ranged (+50), Ongoing (+100), Concentration (-50), Limited (-50), Side Effect (-50)
(100x3) + (100x3) + (50x3) + (100x3) + (-50x3) + (-50x3) + (-50x3)
Cost: 600

Caelus clenches his fist and a nearby object (or person) is pulled at a distance of 5 feet in front of him and are held in that position until Caelus releases his grip. They are suspended above the ground and bound as if they were tied by rope. This limits Caelus to only one hand so he cannot use any that requires two hands and he cannot use any other biotics as long as he is maintaining it. This effect is only maintained until he releases his grip or takes some form of physical damage. The person is affected for up to half a minute if they don't struggle. If they do struggle, they can release depending on their strength. Upon breaking the biotic bond, Caelus takes mental backlash and gets hit with a severe migraine. Caelus cannot use this ability if he has taken damage recently, as it takes a lot of mental strain.


Total Essence Spent: 1400
 

Yuuka Kazami

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Heyyyyyy, welcome back.

Everything up to Pull: looks perfect.

On Pull, however, you're going to need to separate the effects in the description and apply the modifiers to each effect individually, as opposed to just generally on the whole ability. The description looks good, if quite specific for our standards.
 

Gilgamesh

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Okay, thanks. Let me know if I fixed it.

Pull

Move Object (100) Rank 3
Modifiers: Ranged (+50), Ongoing (+100), Concentration (-50), Side Effect (-50), Limited (-50)
(100x3) + (100x3) + (50x3) + (-50 x3) + (-50 x3) + (-50 x3)
Cost: 300 Essence

Debuff(100) Rank 3
Modifiers: Ranged (+50), Ongoing (+100), Concentration (-50), Side Effect (-50), Limited (-50)
(100x3) + (100x3) + (50x3) + (-50 x3) + (-50 x3) + (-50 x3)
Cost: 300 Essence

Total Cost: 600 Essence

Caelus forms a fist and pulls a person (or object) towards him. The person stops and then floats in the air as if they were bound by thick rope. This requires constant concentration and Caelus has to maintain his hand as a fist. He can't use any other biotics during this duration. The person remains bound for about thirty seconds. They can struggle and break free and when broken free, it causes a mental backlash on Caelus giving him a large migraine.
 
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