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Guideon Scott

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Username: kookookachoo

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Guideon Scott

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Mesa Roja

Character Behavior:
Guideon is an Obnoxious Brute. Guideon has an immense enjoyment of everything loud, barbaric, violent, and just generally anything that'll put hair on your chest and make your neighbors call the police on you. As a result he can be incredibly obnoxious to most people with intact brain synapses, a fact which he enjoys very much as he antagonizes most people he comes across and does his best to drive them up a wall

Guideon is also a Brute. Though he has some knowledge on the basics of fisticuffs, he instead chooses to rely on his gargantuan alien strength and feral temperament to overpower his foes. Punches, grappling, bites, and kicks aimed to the groin, nothing short of ripping his own arm off and tossing it as someone is too much for Guideon.

Physical Description:


(6'6'' Feet tall, 196 lbs heavy, eyes actually green.)

Character History:

Despite his crude behaviour, borderline vegetable brain activity, and general hooligan attitude, Guideon's life is one of cosmic scale. Though as flattering as that sounds, its more easily compared to a ketchup stain on the face of reality. You see, Guideon's existence repeats itself throughout different universes with very little differences. In them he is always a man clad in a purple, sporty outfit, hellbent on grinding his fists against anything that crosses his path in a fit of rage and screaming at the top of his lungs about nonsense like how much he hates most primates and how people with odd hair colors with a passion for eastern media should "BE TOSSED INTO THE SUN", and other such tomfoolery. Though his background usually changes a tad it always somehow results in him turning out to be an obnoxious purple wart with the constitution of a brick and the intelligence of one to match. Even odder yet, Guideon seems to be connected to each and every one of his infinite instances throughout the fabric of reality, being able to recall events happening to other Guideon's as "SHIT ASS DREAMS", sometimes even vividly remembering feelings they've felt and thoughts they've thought. However it seems that this multiversal connection with his other selves, despite granting him vast power, have overloaded his mind so much that it has stunted his intelligence to the point of him acting like nothing more than a gorilla that happens to know the english language well enough to formulate sentences so stupid they'll make you think that maybe he doesn't understand the english language after all. In one of the many universes one of Guideon's friends had theorized that perhaps at some point, at the very beggining of existence, some impossibly powerful being had tried to split itself evenly onto every instance of reality, to possibly try to achieve some form of inmortality, but the decay of having to split itself evenly with infinity had somehow resulted in a man who eats rocks for breakfast and sets himself on fire to try to punch ghosts.
This instance of Guideon was walking towards his trailer park home before falling into a manhole and mysteriously waking up in a vast red desert, to his utter annoyance. Perhaps he will find answers out there, in the world of Multerra.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Immortal

Abilities/Skills:

Herculean Physiology (1975E)
Guideon's existence as a cosmic shishkebab of morons has led to him having superhuman strength and endurance, as he taps into the collective strength of all Guideon's throughout the multiverse. This particular Guideon is yet to fully tap into the potential of his wellspring of power however, so his power is still limited. He can use his super strength to beat the snot out of baddies or move heavy objects, however due to his reckless nature and lack of restraint he's likely to break everything and everyone around him accidentally. He's also got a regenerative factor but has terrible control over it, so he has to actively focus on it, on top of it working very slowly.

+Damage 5 (500)
--Chaotic 5 (-250)
+Move objects 5 (500)
--ongoing 5 (500)
+Endurance 5 (500)
+Healing 1 (200)
-- Concentration 1 (-50)

How much Essence did you spend? 2000

How much Essence do you have left? 0

Were you referred by an existing member? Masahir N'air
 
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Arthur Morgan

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Hello and welcome to Multerra! Let me take a look at your app real quick...

Your current ability looks really good so far, but there are a few things I need to point out! For one thing, the Endurance Effect is always Ongoing, meaning you do not need to purchase Ongoing as a modifier. So, you have 400 extra Essence to use when building your abilities now!

In addition, could you elaborate on why you have "Self Target" listed as a modifier under Healing? There is the Self/Other modifier-- meaning your character can heal either yourself or others, but this doesn't seem like what you're wanting here, since you have described a self-targeting regeneration factor.

Again, welcome, and if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask!
 

Guideon Scott

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Hello and welcome to Multerra! Let me take a look at your app real quick...

Your current ability looks really good so far, but there are a few things I need to point out! For one thing, the Endurance Effect is always Ongoing, meaning you do not need to purchase Ongoing as a modifier. So, you have 400 extra Essence to use when building your abilities now!

In addition, could you elaborate on why you have "Self Target" listed as a modifier under Healing? There is the Self/Other modifier-- meaning your character can heal either yourself or others, but this doesn't seem like what you're wanting here, since you have described a self-targeting regeneration factor.

Again, welcome, and if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask!
Thank you for your pointers! I've corrected my sheet and I think everything should be in order
 

Arthur Morgan

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The last thing I see is that the Chaotic modifier on your Damage 5 Effect should be -250E, rather than just -200E. Just change that and you’re all good.

That being said, you’re approved! You can go ahead and copy your character information here to a thread in the Character Profiles section of our forum. Welcome, and happy writing!
 
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