Marcus Wright Character Application

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Marcus Wright

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Username: Marcus Wright

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Marcus Wright

Character Source: Terminator: Salvation: Final Battle

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Character Behavior:
Marcus is a remorseful inflitratitor.

Marcus is a ex-criminal sentenced to death to be remade into Dr Serena's pet project to expand Humanity. Project Angel.

Over time, Project Angel got taken over by the corporation Cyberdyne and expanded into military research for machine warfare.

As he reforms, his personality changes. He is a guilty, angry and self-sacraficial. He is also loyal to his friends and allies, he has a hidden sense of guilt and has a sense of justice.

Physical Description:

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Character History:

*Marcus spends his final days in prison debating his life and is quiet.

*Marcus kisses Dr. Kogan and signs away his executed body to Cyberdyne Systems for a kiss.

*Marcus dies in prison for the first time.

*Marcus’s body is carted off and made into a unique mix of terminator and human, a Terminator Hybrid and Infiltration unit. Project Angel was the project’s name run by Dr. Serena Kogan. Project Angel was originally used as a project where humanity could be expanded into something more but then Cyberdyne bought the project, using terminators like Marcus as military weapons instead and eventually Skynet took over.

*15 years later- As Marcus wakes up from being revived, he finds out he’s alone and in a hellish like the landscape of destroyed Los Angeles in 2018.

*Marcus runs into a teen named Kyle Reese and Star, who by coincidence are the only survivors of the la branch of the Human Resistance.

*Marcus shows Kyle how to handle a weapon after Kyle Reese literally points it at him.

*Marcus refuses to listen to go back to Skynet territory after Kyle, Star begs him not to go, but reluctantly accepts only to get captured by a giant terminator.

*Marcus finds a woman named Blair Williams that helps him find the Human Resistance after he falls in love with her. They enjoy each other's company while sitting around a fire. After fighting off survivors, they go find the Human Resistance HQ.

*Marcus steps on landmines meant for war machines and he blows up, revealing his terminator side.

*As he is revealed to be a terminator, he is strapped on a missile silo where he is shot at by Barnes and his girlfriend, Blair. He has feelings of betrayal there.

*Blair helps Marcus to escape being trapped and John and the Resistance follow. Blair is captured and interrogated and Marcus volunteers to go find Kyle Reese

*John is wary at first but allows him to find him with help. John goes with Marcus and Marcus goes to rescue Kyle and Star from the facility but ends up fighting a T-800. Marcus gets knocked out and John gets a pole shoved in his heart and survives. John revives Marcus with electricity and Marcus beats the T-800 with Kyle and John’s help.

*John is rescued along with Marcus.

*Marcus gives away his second chance and gives his human heart up

*Marcus dies for the second time

*Marcus’s third chance begins when Skynet needs John’s help against the forces of Parnell and the bloody terminators.

*Skynet revives Marcus and Marcus’s heart can grow back via regeneration and his backup systems.

*Marcus is alive again and leads the Resistance while John does what he needs to do to fight Parnell’s bloody machines.

*Skynet and John make peace and end the war.

Marcus finds himself in the middle of a new verse called Multerra after finding his life in the Omniverse had considerably slowed down for years.

Trying to make a new start takes a while after landing on a foriegn planet named Erde Noma.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Specialized

Abilities/Skills:

Terminator Regeneration


Healing- 3
(200X3)= 600
Ongoing (0)-Have the Specialized Affinity
Allows Marcus to regenerate his skin and heart.

Half Human/Half Terminator (Cyborg)

Adaptions

-Adaptable to extreme heat conditions 100
-Adaptable to extreme cold 100
-Adaptable to Sleep (Doesn't need sleep) 50

Skills
-Driving (Cars)(50X4)=200
-Knowledge (Weaponry) (50X4)= 200



The Resistance M25 series of Phased Plasma Assault Rifle

Damage 4 (400)
-- Removable (-200)
-- Ranged (200)

400 Essence

A Plasma gun that shoots molten hot plasma. Takes about 2 seconds per shot.

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How much Essence did you spend? 1650

How much Essence do you have left? 350

Were you referred by an existing member?
Nope
 
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Arthur Morgan

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Just a few quick notes before I really delve into this application:

- Please explain how your character came to be in the Crossroads in the Character History section!

- Please also give your Abilities descriptions. For example, explain why his gun has the Ongoing modifier and Affects Multiple. Things like that.

- Healing is 200E per rank of Effect, not 300E. That would mean Marcus’ regeneration ability costs 600E in total and not 900E.

- It seems like you may have confused Master Skills and the Adaptation Effect for Abilities. The Extreme Heat/Cold Adaptations are not Master Skills, but Marcus’ Driving skill is. I would separate your character’s Abilities (the Adaptations) from his Skills (Driving).

- Adaptation Effects do not have Ranks. They are a single rank with a flat cost! This means that your Heat/Cold Adaptations cost 100E each, not 150E.
 

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Thanks for making those changes! Here are a few more things I noticed:

Half Human/Half Terminator (Cyborg)

Adaptions

-Adaptable to extreme heat conditions 100
-Adaptable to extreme cold 100
-Adaptable to Sleep (Doesn't need sleep) 100

Adaptation (No Need for Sleep) is only 50E!

The Resistance M25 series of Phased Plasma Assault Rifle

Damage 4 (400)
-- Removable (-200)
-- Ranged (200)

600 Essence

A Plasma gun that shoots molten hot plasma. Takes about 2 seconds per shot.

The total cost of this Plasma Gun would be 400E, since the Essence cost of your two modifiers cancels each other out.
 
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