Nishana Hoss Character Switch

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Are you spending 50 Tokens? No

Has it been at least 6 months since your last switch? Yes

How much essence will this new character have? 2000

New Character Name: Ace

Is this character an OC or a Canon character? Original Character

Starting Location? Opealon

Physical Tendencies:
N/A

Personality Tendencies:
Ace D. Portgas is an Impulsive Fireslinger. He is a pirate who ate the Devil Fruit; Mera Mera no mi (Flame Flame fruit). This gave him the ability to control the element of fire, which he has mastered. He is a capable pirate, having risen in the rank of Whitebeard's crew to become the commander of his 2nd division. He's no stranger to violence and never backs down from a fight.

Physical Description:

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Character History:

I'll post an actual backstory in the profile when/if I'm approved to avoid spoilers, just in case! I'll be taking Ace from after the events at Marineford.

Abilities/Skills:

Fire Fist (Hiken)
Damage Rank 3 (300E)
-- Ranged (+150E)
-- Affects Multiple (+150E)
Debuff (Burn) Rank 2 (200E)
-- Ongoing 2 (+200E)
Total Cost: 1000E

Ace's apparent signature attack and the source of his nickname "Fire Fist Ace". Ace turns his fist into flames and launches a column of fire at his target.

Fire Gun (Higan)
Damage Rank 2 (200E)
-- Ranged (+100E)
-- Concentration (-100E)
-- Finite (-100E)
Total Cost: 100E

Pointing the index and middle fingers of both hands at an opponent like guns, Ace turns his fingertips into flames and shoots bullets made of fire from them. Currently, Ace must concentrate on aiming at his target. He can fire the fiery bullets a total of 12 times, 6 bullets from each hand.

Flame Flame Fruit (Mera Mera no mi)
Adaptation (200E)
-- Incredible Heat Environments (100)
-- Incredible Cold Environments (100)
Protection Rank 3 (300E)
Total cost: 500E

The Flame Flame Fruit is a Logia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create, control, and transform into fire at will. The fruit's major strength, like other Logia types, is that it allows the user to produce as well as become the element they control. With this in mind, Ace can create devastating fire-based attacks and gain a high resistance towards most heat-based attacks and environments. The user is also able to avoid normal physical attacks by turning into fire and allowing the attack to harmlessly pass through their fiery body.

Rigorous Training
Damage Rank 2 (200E)
Endurance Rank 2 (200E)
Total Cost: 400E

Aside from the powers granted by the Devil Fruit he consumed, Ace possessed immense physical strength and endurance which he attained from the extremely rigorous training in the harsh environment of Mt. Colubo mainly from hunting and fighting wild beast since childhood.
 

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Hey there! Your character switch is approved, I'll update your Essence and username in a moment. Would you like your new name to be Ace, Ace Portgas, or Ace D. Portgas?

There are only a few things I would suggest for your abilities, they're just description adjustments so you can add them at your leisure/go ahead and post your profile:

For 'Fire Fist' -

Just add a little note in the description that the burns are a thing. I feel like some people might overlook that part in your modifiers so it'd be a good idea to say "hey, this leaves burns that are ongoing and affects other characters for a while."

For 'Fire Gun (Higan)' -

In regards to the Finite modifier, please describe how Ace can replenish the fire gun and how long it takes for him to do so. Note that it must take a narratively significant amount of time where your character is focused exclusively on replenishing their ammo. In order for it to qualify as Finite, Effects that are continuously used should need to be "recharged" at least once per scene.

Awesome character! :)
 
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