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Amity Drake

Spiritual Champion
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User name: Qiz

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Amity Drake

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Cevanti

Character Behavior:
Amity Drake is the Spiritual Champion.

Amity is Spiritual in that he is concerned greatly about the matters of one's soul. He always seeks the most morally upright path and does his best to lead others such that their spirit lives would be preserved and grow. Amity would never ask anyone to do something that they are morally uncomfortable, but physical, emotional, and intellectual discomfort are not off the table. Being Spiritual, he does not have as great of a regard for matters of the Flesh (Body), Heart (Emotions), and Mind (Thoughts).

Amity is the Champion of the Angel of Strength, Mir'eyel Yvvanix. He faces his threats head on with honor in the name of his patron, and refuses to fight those who do not pose a threat to him or his allies. In a fight, he combines his physicality, martial prowess, and the power of his patron to strike down his opponent. He is strongest in one-on-one contests, but struggles against multiple opponents without assitence.

Physical Description:

Amity Drake Reference - Credit to Dongho Kang​

Amity Drake is a 30 year old Dragonkin male, being the son of a Dragonkin father and a Soulbound Draconic mother. He normally does not appear any different from humans, but possesses greater aptitude for Soulbound Abilities and higher physical potential than humans. He stands at an average 5'8" (1.73 m) and weighs in at 168 lbs (76.2 kg) with snow white hair and a clean shaven face. Amity's eyes are naturally brown, but glow teal when he channels the power of his patron. Despite being the SpiritualChampion of the Angel of Strength, Amity maintains an athletic physique such that he is always ready to fight for his champion.

The
SpiritualChampion's choice of dress usually involves a crisp black dress shirt, freshly ironed tan slacks held up by a dull gold buckle, and a clean teal and tan vest. Over this he always wears an overcoat filled with pockets and lined with teal, decorated with dull gold buttons and an pins. On his feet are meticulously polished dress boots and on his arms, black leather bracers. On his left hand, he wears a gold ring inlaid with a teal crystal as a sign of his devotion to the Angel of Strength.

Character History:

Amity Drake's father was a Dragon Slayer and his mother, the Ice-Aligned Soulbound Dragon that claimed Amity's father as her champion. The union between the two was completely inappropriate for the relationship between patron and champion, so Amity's mother could not stay leaving the responsibility of raising Amity to his father. Father and son had to retreat to the wilderness, away from prying eyes and the domains of those who disapproved of Amity's existence, so Amity would have a chance at life.

Since an early age, Amity was trained in the as a Dragon Slayer, just like his ancestors. It was under his father's tutorage that he learned to fight, survive, and most importantly, tend to the Soul. If there was one thing Amity learned before he turned 14, it was that one's soul laid the foundation for their Mind, Body, and Heart; fail keep your Soul healthy, and all others with fail along with it.

In his teenage years, Amity managed to convince his father to allow him to venture out into the world so that he could live his life. After much debate and no small amount of hesitation, Amity was allowed to live as a normal teenager, making friends and going through high school. It was during these years at the age of 18, that Amity first encountered the Angel of Strength, Mir'eyel Yvvanix. The young angel was seeking a champion to represent her and her interests in the physical world, and Amity couldn't help but catch her eye, being the son of a Soulbound Dragon. Mir and Amity met in the latter's dreams, where the Angel of Strength inaugerated Amity as her champion.

Now, 12 years, later, at the age of 30, Amity is still Mir'eyel Yyvanix's champion, fighting for her interests, defending the weak, and slaying dragons. However, the relationship between angel and champion was muddled over the years, and Amity fell into the same trap as his father. The two had a child that should've never been, forcing Mir to leave and leave Amity with his child in hiding.

One day, Amity felt the calling of his patron to an unknown place, and knowing he couldn't refuse, he left his young child with trusted friends to follow his patron's will. He was confronted by Mir, who, with a heavy heart, rescinded all but the basics of her blessing. Under pressure from her peers, she had to eliminate Amity, but instead, she chose to spare him and cast him away to mysterious new dimension where he could hope to start a new life. Though she was supposed to cut ties with Amity, she keeps a close eye on her champion as he fights in a new world.

Abilities/Skills:

Draconic Riptide - Icy Retiarius (Total Cost: 600E)
Move Object, Rank 3 (300)
++Affects Multiple, Rank 3 (150)
++Ranged, Rank 3 (150)
--Indiscriminate, Rank 3 (-150)
--Limited, Rank 3 (-150)
Debuff, Rank 2 (200)
++Affects Multiple, Rank 2 (100)
++Ranged, Rank 2 (100)
--Indiscriminate, Rank 2 (-100)
--Limited, Rank 2 (-100)
Damage, Rank 1 (100)
++Affects Multiple, Rank 1 (50)
++Ranged, Rank 1 (50)
--Indiscriminate, Rank 1 (-50)
--Limited, Rank 1 (-50)

Amity creates an icy whirlpool centered around himself that drags in everyone within 20 feet. Everyone within the radius of the whirlpool with be coated with ice as they are dragged in, restricting their movements and inflicting mild frostbite on them as they are dragged in. Amity can only perform this move if there is a significant amount of water or ice within his vicinity to manipulate into a whirlpool.

Draconic Stream - Glacial Cestus (Total Cost: 500E)
Damage, Rank 4 (400E)
Debuff, Rank 1 (100E)

Description: Amity encases his fist in ice as he delivers a powerful punch capable of smashing concrete. Whether the strike connects or not, the ice around his fist explodes into shards of ice that will coat an enemy right next to the fist in frost, slowing their movements and inflicting moderate frostbite.

Soulbound Dragonkin's Scales (Total Cost: 350E)
Adaptation (Incredible Cold Environments) (100E)
Protection, Rank 2 (200E)
++Ongoing, Rank 2 (200E)
--Weakness, Rank 2 (-50E)

Description: Amity, being the son of an Ice-Aligned Soulbound Dragon, possesses naturally enhanced durability and resistance to even the coldest of environments with need for extra clothing. However, his durability does not extend to fire and extreme heat, rendering about as durable as a normal human in those circumstances.

Soulbound Dragonkin's Sight (Total Cost: 50E)
Sense (Sight), Rank 1 (100E)
--Concentration, Rank 1 (-50E)

Description: Being attuned to the Soul, Amity is able to concentrate to sense the locations of nearby souls, whether they be human or beas. He is only able to discern the location of souls, meaning he cannot glean information such as their identity or their orientation.

Soul's Spiral (Total Cost: 200E)
Damage, Rank 2 (200E)
--Ranged, Rank 2 (100E)
--Removeable, Rank 2 (-100E)

Description: The Soul's Spiral is a unique weapon crafted for the Spiritual Champion. It is forged of Singing Steel, a metal known for resonating with the Soul and channeling magic. Though its general shape resembles a sword, its function is closer to that of a spear, with the twisted blade being able to extend itself and shoot out in a straight line to strike targets further away. It is the perfect weapon for hunting dragons between its ability to strike airborne foes and its thin metal tip is able to slip between hard scales. (Soul's Spiral Reference - Credit to Lucas Taillard)

Knowledge (Dragons) Rank 3 (300E)
Description: Trained as a Dragon Slayer, Amity is well acquainted with the behavior, anatomy, and habitats of dragons. However, he did not dedicate himself to the trade to the same level as his father, so his knowledge pales in comparison to those who have dedicated their lives to the study of dragons.

How much Essence did you spend? 2000

How much Essence do you have left? 0

Were you referred by an existing member? Aqua
 
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Gilgamesh

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Hi there. Welcome to the Crossroads! Just a few things before you get started.

1) The two word descriptor should be a description of your character when they talk, and then their combat style. A soulbound champion sounds cool, but I am not sure what that means in terms of how they act. I would assume they are similar to a paladin?

2) Souldbound Dragonkin's Sight:
For this senses, make sure you state what specific type you have. In this case I'm assuming Sight but make sure you put that in the effect, e.g. Senses (Sight)

The rest of it looks good! Let me know if you have questions and/or you make those changes
 
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