RippleStarShards Character Application

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Ribbon

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User name: RippleStarShards

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Ribbon

Character Source: Canon, Kirby series

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Character Behavior:
Ribbon is a loyal pacifist. Ribbon will go through thick and thin for anyone she places her trust in, and usually stays by their side in a literal sense as well.

Ribbon is also a pacifist. She doesn't like conflict, and prefers to stay on the sidelines, unless a member of her circle of trust is threatened, or she's faced with an evil being of darkness, as she and her race have a vendetta against dark entities.

Physical Description:

Ribbon is a very small fairy, no larger than a foot tall. She has short pink hair, which she keeps a red ribbon tied into. She's very pale, and her eyes are an ocean blue colour. Her normal outfit is a red dress with white trim and golden buttons, and standard brown shoes. Her wings are ellipsed in shape and pale pink in colour.

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Character History:

Ribbon comes from the distant planet Ripple Star, inhabited entirely by fairies. She's had one experience in her lifetime that has caused her to have a heavy grudge against anything affiliated with an evil force of darkness, because Dark Matters have caused way too much havoc where she came from, and never wants to see them, or anything related to them, or anything similar to them, again. She had woken up ready for a new day when she had found herself on a strange planet, with no one in sight. Now, she just wants to get to know new people.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Specialized

Abilities/Skills:

Fairy Flight:
Flight - Rank 1 (200 essence)
Modifiers: Ongoing (100 essence)
Cost: 300 essence
Ribbon is a fairy, and thus is able to fly without bounds, however, not that fast compared to other flight-capable beings.

Flight Transport
Move Object - Rank 2 (200 essence)
Modifiers: None
Cost: 200 essence
Ribbon is able to carry heavy things at least twice her size, as she has carried her human friend Adeleine, as well as a quite heavy crystal, with no impedance to her flight.

Crystal Gun
Damage - Rank 3 (300 essence)
Modifiers: Removable (-150 essence)
Cost: 150 essence
Ribbon has a weapon that fires sharp crystalline shards. It does quite a bit of damage to normal beings, and more to beings of darkness, however it could be easily taken away from her if she's not paying attention.

Small Height
Shrink - Rank 4 (800 essence)
Modifiers: Ongoing (400 essence), Limited (cannot change size) (-200 essence)
Cost: 1,200 essence
Ribbon is a foot tall, and cannot change this aspect.

How much Essence did you spend? 1,650

How much Essence do you have left? 350

Were you referred by an existing member?
 
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Arthur Morgan

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Hi there, welcome to Multerra! Things look pretty good here, I have just one thing to point out:

The total cost of an Ability cannot go below 50E per rank of Effect, even with negative modifiers! So, for Crystal Gun (which has Damage 3), the total cost of this ability would be 150E. You can remove one of the negative modifiers from that ability if you’d like, since more than one cannot make the Essence cost any lower.

Other than that though, your application is stellar. Once you’ve made that update, feel free to paste the information from your app into the Character Profiles section of our forum!

Also, usernames on this forum generally match character names, so I’ll be changing your username to Ribbon!
 

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Oops, just noticed something! In order for Ribbon to be one foot tall all the time, you will need an ability with Shrink 4, Ongoing. That would be about 1200E. You can definitely afford that with the starting 2000E!

For an example, here’s Mickey Mouse’s ability that keeps him at a single height (the important bits are bolded/italicized):

"Mouse Traits" (800E)
Sense Rank 2 (200E)
-- Concentration (-100E)
-- Ongoing (200E)
Shrinking Rank 2 (400E)
-- Ongoing (200E)
-- Limited: cannot alter size (-100E)

Mickey is a mouse, which means he has a diminuative size and big ears that may give him an advantage in certain circumstances.
 
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