Rubra Lupus Character Application

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Username: Rubra Lupus

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Rubra Lupus

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Mesa Roja

Character Behavior:
Quiet Hunter: Lupus is a silent assassin who hides in the shadows to surprise her prey. She comes off cold and wordless on the surface like one without emotion. Really, she is just hard with words, not having much in the way with linguistics. Lupus is tactile in her combat methods, suggesting that her lack of proper speech doesn't necessarily imply ineptitude. That being said, her distant and cold aura might make it difficult to approach her casually.

Physical Description:

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Rubra Lupus - A self-appointed title that would remind someone of a bloody wolf. Lupus appears to be of humanoid descent with more canine features than your average person. She dons fangs, animalistic wolf ears and a disheveled tail. Beyond those extremely notable features, she is small and short, yet agile and precise. Her common wear includes a massive red coat, a grey dress, as well as black pants and boots. Hidden within her coat are several knives used for throwing or close quarters combat.

Character History:

Lupus is a special case. Upon waking on Multerra, her memory of her former life was stripped of her. Probably for the best considering her dark past of hunting down and murdering her own kind. Bloody civil war created through sickness caused many to go mad with bloodlust. The wolf pack was effected heavily by this, leaving many of her kin dead in the process. She is likely one of the very few remaining Lupus within her own world. Others that did survive were not as lucky as her, however. Driven mad by an infectious virus spread amongst themselves. She is infected, slightly, but how contagious her condition is probably won't apply to many other around this world considering it passes easily through those with animalistic genes.
Lupus will only remember her life as a hunter, an assassin bred to destroy those who oppose her.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Specialized

Abilities/Skills:

Kage Kara! | Concealment R2 (Sight, Hearing)
Ongoing(Specialized)
Cost: 400E

The infectious virus dormant in Lupus' body has mutated her slightly to affect her own natural abilities, make her much more dangerous than a normal melee specialist. With these powers, she's able to conceal her presence quite well.

Niyoiga Suyoi | Sense R1 (Sight, Hearing, Smell)
Ongoing(Specialized)

Cost: 300E
The simple intricacies of being part wolf have heightened the hunter's sensory abilities to outrageous proportions compared to her average human counterpart.

Kakkimi desu! | Debuff R2 (Blinded Sight)
Affects Multiple | Indiscriminate (100-100)
Cost: 200E

Appearing from nowhere, Lupus can draw energy from her special powers to blind anyone, including a friendly, in a small radius when coming out of her stealthed mode. This works very much like a flash bang grenade, assaulting the target's vision and leaving them open for a surprise attack.

Kono Naifu | Damage R3
Ranged; Ongoing(Specialized) | Limited; Finite (75*2)+(-150*2)
Cost: 150

Poison daggers coated in a substance made from Lupus' blood. Blood infected from the virus has dissolving properties especially toxic to skin. These knifes can be thrown from a distance, however, the poison cannot effect those made of non-biotic material. Lupus only has enough room in her coat to hold 10 of these knives at any given time, but they can just as easily be used as a melee weapon for personal defense... or vice versa.

Mou Nigebanai!
Speed R1 (200)
-- Concentration (-200)
Agility R3 (600)
Cost: 600

The combination of Lupus' infectious mutation and her wolf heritage allows her to pull of some amazing feats of agility and speed. Putting her concentration forth to upkeep her speed, it's one of her most important assets as a fighter.

Master Skill: Assassination/Hitman R5
Cost: 250
Lupus' entire life has been centered around what she calls 'The Hunt'. No one could escape her blades when her eyes laid sight on them. She was well known and feared as an assassin in her home world and will likely continue that reign of dominance in this new world as well, even with her fragmented memory.

How much Essence did you spend? 1850

How much Essence do you have left? 150

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Hello and welcome to Multerra! Let's take a look at your app real quick...

For "Kage Kara!" -- Since you have Sight and Hearing Rank 2, the total cost of this Ability would be 400E, not 200E.

For "Kakkimi desu!" -- Please mention in your description that this ability can affect multiple targets and potentially blind allies!

For "Kono Naifu" -- If my math is correct, this ability would only be 150E with all the modifiers you have applied, not 300E.

For "Mou Nigebanai!" -- In the future, I would suggest formatting Abilities with more than one Effect more like below. It makes it a lot easier to figure out what Effect certain modifiers are being applied to. As it is, this ability is fine, though.

Mou Nigebanai!
Speed R1 (200)
-- Concentration (-200)
Agility R3 (600)
-- [Modifiers]
Cost: 600
 

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Everything has been adjusted accordingly. Apologies for the math mistakes. I included Ongoing in my calculations for Naifu cause I'm dummy. Also changed the format for Mou, simply so I remember that for next time.
 
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