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Orion

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User name: Seto Prime

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Torvus

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Cevanti

Character Behavior:
Adventurous Opportunist

Physical Description:

6' 1", short cropped brown hair, circle beard (moustache that connects to a goatee), blue eyes, muscular build

Character History:

Torvus was raised by his mercenary mother, moving ceaselessly to planets and space stations or wherever his mother's next assignment took them. He idolised her and her profession, seeing the freedom and excitement that a detached, dangerous job of bounty hunting involved. When he spoke up about his future prospects, she encouraged it, helping him develop his skills to become what he always wanted.

When he came of age, Torvus struck out on his own and launched himself into the mercenary role he always pined for. His world was one big exciting party for him until a job went wrong - a job he refuses to speak about - where he lost his ship and almost lost his life.

At least, that's what he told Cien, a fellow mercenary, who met Torvus in a space station bar looking for work. HIs affable nature and demonstrable skill in getting in and out of trouble (proven when he punched a patron and had to get them both out of there fast), along with the poor choice of other candidates, drew them together on Cien's next job. They worked so well together that they decided to team up permanently, a surprising choice for both of them.

Torvus likes to keep an air of mystery about him, especially if he's asked directly. Cien isn't sure how much of Torvus' purported past is real but she trusts him, and she can rely on him to get the job done.

Abilities/Skills:

Plasma Rifle
Damage 3 (300)
+ Ranged (150)
- Removable (150)
Total: 300
Description: Torvus' main weapon fires bolts of plasma at a rate of about 3 or 4 a second. The bolts are about the size of a man's fist.

Combat Armour
Protection 3 (300)
+ Ongoing (300)
Total: 600
Description: Torvus' body armour.

Hot-Knife
Damage 1 (100)
- Removable (50)
Cost: 50
Description: A knife that acts like a switch blade, except it is activated by a button which extends a neon orange blade from the handle like a light saber. Named after the expression 'like a hot knife through butter' when applied to its usage in flesh.

Q-Sight
Sense 1 (Sight) (Thermal/Zoom) (100)
+ Ongoing (100)
Cost: 200
Description: Short for Quantum Sight. When Torvus blinks three times in succession, it activates his Q-sight – an orange holographic overlay that appears over his vision that provides both a zoom feature and thermal vision. This holographic display is internal – the technology is wired into his brain.

Q-Comm
Communication (Voice) (100)
Cost: 100
Description: The same unit that handles Q-Sight also activates Torvus’ communicator, Q-Comm. Once a link is established, Torvus must speak and his words will be transmitted over any distance.

Flashbang
Debuff 5 (Sight/Sound) (500)
+ Ranged (250)
+ Affects Multiple 1 (250)
- Indiscriminate (250)
- Finite (3) (250)
Cost: 500
Description: Torvus carries around a small satchel on the back of his belt that holds three flashbangs - small round balls that, when thrown at a hard surface, detonate in a blinding flash of light and an ear piercing sound. The resulting output assaults the ears and eyes for anyone in a twenty foot radius.

Fitness
Endurance 1 (100)
Cost: 100

How much Essence did you spend? 1850

How much Essence do you have left? 150

Were you referred by an existing member?
 

Klarion

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Hey there, in the future, please use the Character Changes form for changing your character. It hasn't been updated with the Character Behavior section yet, but other than that, this is the form to use for character changes. We prefer that this form be used so we can know what method of switching you're using. In this case, I'm assuming you're not paying 50 Tokens and instead opting to start fresh with 2,000E. If I'm wrong about that, please let me know.

That being said, there's only a few things with your abilities that need looking at:

For Q-Sight, since you want to have two different senses included here, it would cost 200E for Thermal and Zoom. Adding Ongoing to that would increase the cost by 100E. This puts the total cost for Q-Sight at 300E.

For Flashbang, you need to add a note in your description about how Torvus' supply of flashbangs can be replenished and how long it takes. This must take a narratively significant amount of time where he is focused exclusively on restocking.

Please reply here to let me know if you've made any changes. Thanks!
 

Orion

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I can't see my whole post on mobile so I can't edit.

Yes I'm not using tokens so starting with 2000.

For Q-Sight I'll remove zoom and keep thermal.

I'll update flashbang to say that he needs to return to a weapons dealer or his spaceship to resupply, is that acceptable?
 
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