Sightless Character Application

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Vincent Seoracis

User name: Sightless

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Vincent Seoracis

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Kraw

Character Behavior:
Rational Dreamer


Rationality, both as a feature of personality and as an activity , for Vincent serves as a means for testing ideas, as they come to light, determines there cogency, and then tends, protects, affirms and directs intuition's offspring, fully equipping them for fulfilling and useful lives. In this way Vincent is both a dreamer, and probably one of the most rational beings you will ever meet.

Physical Tendencies:

  1. Power(P):15%
  2. toughness(T):10%
  3. Quickness(Q): 20%
  4. Skill(S): 55%


Personality Tendencies:

  1. Aggression(A):15%
  2. Cunning(C):25%
  3. Diplomacy(D): 30%
  4. Support(S):30%
Physical Description:

He was not what she expected at all.

First she expected him to be taller, closer to two meters at least rather than the eleven inches over five feet that he was. He was gaunt too, so lean that he was almost skeletal. Well, perhaps not that, there were hints that he possessed a kind of sinewy strength,enough perchance to surprise even her. At least that was what she had thought when she wasn’t mesmerized by her own reflection in the silver orbs that passed for his eye, and fortunately he had spoken, before her mouth could open in the slack jawed look of stunned amazement on how a being could accumulate so many mutilations, he bowed low, the faultless half bend acknowledging her as his superior, perfectly correct in the engagement of the decorous act, as if he had been well trained in the mannerly arts.

“It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance Mistress avoír Astucieu”

How something sounding so melodious, so full of rich dramatic suaviloquence, could come out of a face so hideous she would never know. Even without the scars, Vincent Seoracis had a face where all excess flesh seemed to have been boiled away, leaving taut flesh over profuse musculature and dense bones. His nose was too broad and flat, his mouth too non-existent for any woman to call him handsome, and yet there was that marvelous voice, and those eyes. Still she wasn’t even certain that his own mother could love that face.

Character History:

For those that don’t know, and care, Vincent is the only son born to Agatha & Steven Seoracis, and he almost didn’t live to be born at that. You see, some fellows that didn’t like Edward policies, that’s the lad’s grandfather, and didn’t care for the matriarch, Odette Seoracis to you, thought that about trying to assassinate one of the trios during the end of the year revelry. Some say they used a chemical weapon, while some say it was an enchanted explosive, while still some others say it was an old disruptor grenade that didn’t go off right. Whatever it was, the only one it seemed to hurt was the lad: blinded him and weakened his bones. They fracture easily. Anyhow, to make a long story short, in spite of a lot of things he made it into the university, and during a break signed on as an assistant medic aboard the Stellar Swan, which was traveling from Erde Nona to Kraw. The vessel was attacked by craft belonging to the Desolate Lord during transit across the void, and while the Swan made planet fall, it made it in the worst way possible, streaking in like a meteorite to smash against a harsh unyielding mountain’s side. Alaric doesn’t know exactly where on the Karajah mountain change he is currently located, but he knows that time is against him. The weather is against him. The War Band of the Desolate Lord is against him. The flora & fauna are against him. To say nothing of the health and welfare of the Swan’s remaining crew: all in stasis chambers, while they recover

Abilities/Skills:

Personal Attributes

Senses

[*]Effect | Cost per rank | Number of ranks | Total

Sense (olfactory) | 100 | 1 | 100

Sense (auditory) | 100 | 2 | 200

[*]Types of modifiers | +/-

Ongoing | +100

[*]Calculation & Total

(Olfactory 100)+(Audiotory 100 x 2)+(ongoing 100)=400[/list]



Equipment

Portible Medical stretcher & Medical suite

  1. Effect | Cost per rank | Number of ranks | Total

    Healing | 200 | 5 | 1,000
  2. Types of modifiers | +/-

    • Activation | -100

    • Concentration | -50

    • Finite, power & supplies -50

    • Transferable | +50
  3. Calculation & Total

    (200+50 -100 -50 -50)=50 x 5 = 250

This unit can easily be collapsed down into something that can fit in the average backpack, but requires roughly thirty-seconds to assemble, with additional time required for medical scans. The unit consist of a stretcher as well a series of plaststeel panels, as well as scanners; micro & Nano surgical tools; an assortment of pharmaceutical’s; tailored bacterial agents; and everything necessary to conduct complex surgery and treatment on a single patient in the field.



Ocular Replacement Gear

[*]Effect | Cost per rank | Number of ranks | Total

Sense (ocular), Thermagraphic vision | 100 | 1 | 100

[*]Types of modifiers | +/-

NA | NA

[*]Calculation & Total

(vision 100 x 1)= 100[/list]

A pair of mirrored silver lenses where Alaric’s eyes should be is often the first thing others notice about the technician: requiring no great leap in thought that they are entirely mechanical. Indeed, even when modifying the data gleamed from said devices, their outward appearance never alters.



Loretta (sidearm)]

  1. Effect | Cost per rank | Number of ranks | Total

    Damage (bullets, fired from over receiver and barrel) | 100 | 3 | 300
  2. Types of modifiers | +/-

    • Removable | -50

    • Finite | -50

    • Range | +50

    • Ongoing | +100
  3. Calculation & Total

    (Damage 100 +100 + 50 -50 -50)x 3= 450
  4. Effect | Cost per rank | Number of ranks | Total

    DE buff(, stun probes fired from under receiver and barrel) | 100 | 2 | 200
  5. Types of modifiers | +/-

    • Removable | -50

    • Finite | -50

    • Range | +50

    • Ongoing | +100
  6. Calculation & Total

    (de buff 100+ 100 + 50 -50 -50)x 2= 300
  7. Calculation & Total

    (450+300= 750

Loretta is a Wyatt Defender 2100 semi-automatic bullpup style handgun. Over under double barreled, with twin climps side-by-side at the rear. The triggers are side-by-side too, but Jordan is used to this and can switch between the two with ease. The right trigger is currently loaded with your standard plastic explosive charged bullets — will go off in a complete vacuum — the other are your garden variety Taser probes: rail launched.



Trama tunic and pants

  1. Effect | Cost per rank | Number of ranks | Total

    Protection | 100 | 2 | 200
  2. Types of modifiers | +/-

    Weakness (blunt force trama) | -25
  3. Calculation & Total

    (protection 100 – 25)= 75 X 2= 150

Dark brbrown pull over and pants designed to protect against bodily trama from knives and other stabbing weapons, as well some protection from bullets. However, given that Vincent has slightly weaker bones than his peers, the armor provides less protection from large heavy blunt objects.



Skills & knowledges

  • 5 250
    150
  • (Technical) 1 50
  • (arcana & crafting) 1 50
How much Essence did you spend? 2,00

How much Essence do you have left? 0

Were you referred by an existing member? no[/spoiler]
 

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This is great! The only correction I'd suggest is within your first Ability, the Senses one.

You want Olfactory Rank 1 and Auditory Rank 2. With the Ongoing modifier applied to both, though, Ongoing would cost 200E, because one of your Senses is Rank 2.

If you were to to change Ongoing's cost, however, this would increase the price of your ability to 500 Essence. This wouldn't be ideal, since you're already sitting at 2,000 spent Essence overall. So, what I suggest is reducing Auditory Rank 2 to Auditory Rank 1, which will reduce the Ability's total cost to 300 Essence.

Once you've decided what you would like to do, drop a reply here and I'll review your app again!
 
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Vincent Seoracis

I'll do that, and leave the hundred left over unspent, if that works for you?
 
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