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ThePotatoGod

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User name: ThePotatoGod

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Kazumi Sawatari (Kamen Rider Grease)

Character Source: Kamen Rider Build

Starting Location: Opealon

Character Behavior:
Kazumi Sawatari, or better known as Kamen Rider Grease, is a Passionate Berserker. Kazumi is passionate when it comes to a lot of things. His allies, his friends, being an idol fan, and of course, the thrill of battle itself. Kazumi is a berserker because of this. He has the tendency to go wild and get riled up in battle, making him ruthless in battle and not afraid to resort to most lethal of attacks to the weakest of opponents.

Physical Description:

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Kazumi Sawatari is an asian man who stands at 5.74 ft and weighs approximately 90 Kg. He has brown, wavy hair hair and wears a thick jacket with a furred hood. In his Rider form, he is 6 ft tall and weighs 118 kg. As Kamen Rider Grease, he is a golden clad warrior with flat sided barrier shoulder guards as well as a translucent black chestplate and a horned exo-helmet with red compound bug-like eyes underneath.

Character History:

Kazumi was once the owner of a family farm in the region of Hokuto which, after the Sky Wall disaster which split the country of Japan into three, made all the farmland infertile. Kazumi was kind enough to use his own savings to help his employees rather than lay them off.

When his savings were depleted, Kazumi enlisted in a government project which made him into a test subject for an experimental new weapon. He was told to lie about losing his memories when the experiment was proven to be a success. After being given the weapon known as the Sclash Driver and Robot Sclashjelly, Kazumi was tasked to lead a strike team of four in order to invade Toutou. Unbeknownst to him, the members of this strike team were his former employees who felt indebted to Kazumi's supposed sacrifice.

The rest of his history are spoiler based, so I'll leave a wiki link here:

This iteration of Kazumi is post Build New World movie series.

Kazumi arrived at The Crossroads after the sleeping the night after the events that had occurred the day prior(Build New World: Kamen Rider Grease). Kazumi awoken at one of the planets, without knowledge of how he got there nor how to get back.

Abilities/Skills:

--Sclash Driver + Robot Jelly--
>Shapeshifting 1(1500)
>Protection 2 (200)
>Damage 2 (200)
>Agility 1 (200)
Modifiers: Transferable (+50) -50(Activation) -50 (Removable) -500(Limited; Shapeshifting Forms)
Cost: 1500 - (500 x 1) - (50 x 1) - (50 x 1) + (50 x 1) + (100 x 2) + (50 x 2) - (50 x 2) - (50 x 2) + 200 + (50 x 1) - (50 x 1) - (50 x 1)
= 1200

Kazumi transforms into Kamen Rider Grease by putting on the Sclash Driver onto his waist, a grey metallic belt wrapping around his waist. He then inserts the Robot Sclashjelly onto its slot, emitting a somewhat loud wrench turning and hissing noise as it awaits transformation. Afterwards, he pushes down the belt's wrench, causing the gauge on the side of the belt to hiss out steam as the clasps on the slot press down on the jelly pack's sides. The armor forms around Kazumi's body after 15 seconds. Activation is timed the moment Kazumi puts on the driver to the transformation proper is 25 seconds total.

It can be removed by pulling out the jelly from the Driver or removing the driver from his waist. Subsequently, destroying the driver itself with a powerful attack can also force the user out of the form as well as damaging Grease long enough.

The Driver and Jelly, due to them being physical objects in nature, is transferable if Kazumi wants to. If the Driver and Jelly are loaned to someone else, they will have access to Grease's effects as well as his Scrap Finish ability. In turn, Kazumi loses the ability to transform until they are returned to him.

Kamen Rider Grease only has 1 form with the Sclash Driver.

--Scrap Finish--
Damage 4 (400)

The Finisher of Kamen Rider Grease. Activates when the wrench on the belt is pressed down, allowing Grease to perform either a punch or a kick coated in golden energy, often resulting to an explosion. There are some aspects of this ability that is still locked.

--Twin Breaker--
Damage 3
Modifier: Ranged(+50) Removable(-50)
Cost: 300 + (50 x 3) - (50 x 3)
=300
The Twin Breaker is a hand held weapon that shifts between twin beam blasters and a singular small golden jackhammer. It is a weapon that can only be drawn when Kamen Rider Grease is active, however, if retained after detransforming, it's possible to keep the Twin Breaker until it's discarded.

Some of Grease's abilities and weaponry are severely inhibited.

How much Essence did you spend? 1900

How much Essence do you have left? 100

Were you referred by an existing member? Aqua
 
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Hi there and welcome to Multerra! Just a few things to note about your app!

Character History - How was your character brought to our setting, the Crossroads? Via an inter-dimensional portal? Maybe he just went to sleep one night and woke up here? The choice is yours, but you'll need to let us know how he ended up here!

For " Sclash Driver + Robot Jelly" - I'm not sure why you have listed a few of these modifiers here. Specifically, the "Self" modifier and the "Transferable" modifier. There is no Self modifier, but a "Self/Other" modifier, which allows you to target either yourself OR others at will. This modifier is usually meant for, for example, healing spells that can either be used to heal you OR heal your friend, but not both at the same time. However, I see no reason for your ability to need this modifier in your description.

As for the Transferable modifier, it's the same issue. Can your character "loan" the ability to shapeshift into Kamen Rider Grease to others? Adding the Transferable modifier to your ability means they gain not only the benefits of an Effect (such as being healed by somebody using the Healing Effect) but also the ability to activate it on their own (such as them being capable of healing others). If you want this ability to have this function, please mention this in your description and how it would be transferred to someone else.

Your Finite modifier also needs to be more specific and you need to mention it in your ability description. Can Kazumi only use this ability for a certain amount of time? If so, how long can he use it for? And how does he "recharge" this ability when it runs out/loses effectiveness? Remember, in order for it to qualify as Finite, Effects that are continuously used should need to be "recharged" at least once per scene.

For the Activation modifier, please mention in your description how long it takes for this ability to activate. This should be 10 seconds or more.

Also, keep in mind that if the Protection, Damage, and Agility Effects only activate when Kazumi is in his Kamen Rider Grease form, then they will need to have the exact same modifiers as the Shapeshifting Effect.

For "Scrap Finish" - In the future, whenever you want to make updates to this ability, all you will need to do is use the ability purchasing form and resubmit it with your changes. Just note somewhere in the form that you are making updates to an already existing ability.

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask them!
 

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Edits has been made.

-Removed the Self/Other and the Finite Modifier thanks to my misinterpretation of the modifiers.
-Elaborated on the Transferable modifier; due to Driver and Jelly being physical objects, Kazumi can loan them to others if he decides to.
-Recalculated the essence cost
-In light of new extra essences, added Twin Breaker weapon/ability
 

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--Sclash Driver + Robot Jelly--
>Shapeshifting 1(1500)
>Protection 2 (200)
>Damage 2 (200)
>Agility 1 (200)
Modifiers: Transferable (+50) -50(Activation) -50 (Removable) -500(Limited; Shapeshifting Forms)
Cost: 1500 - (500 x 1) - (50 x 1) - (50 x 1) + (50 x 1) + 200 + (50 x 2) - (50 x 2) - (50 x 2) + 200 + (50 x 1) - (50 x 1) - (50 x 1)

So, looking at this, I can see that you've applied all these modifiers to Shapeshifting, Agility, and one other Effect. What is the third Effect? You've listed both Damage and Protection, but only one of those is factored into the overall cost of this ability. Did you mean to remove one of them?
 
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