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Voss Eierkuchen

Voss Craves Violence
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User name: Yamperzzz

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Voss Eierkuchen

Character Source: Tembo the Badass Elephant OC

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Character Behavior:
Voss Eierkuchen could be best described as a selfish warmonger. Voss typically puts himself first and won't consider helping others unless they provide a benefit for him. He's greedy and is on a constant search for more power, status, amenities, and above all, wealth. There has been more than one occasion where Voss has made a poor decision and foolishly went after a risky opportunity for riches.

Voss is also a warmonger and encourages conflict... Unless he happens to get the short end of the stick when it comes to damage and power in a fight. Regardless, Voss is known for bullying those who are unable to defend themselves so well. In worse-case scenarios, Voss may even up and murder someone if it means easy pickings for valuables. Anything for a quick buck!

Physical Description:

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Character History:


Voss Eierkuchen was a ruthless sea captain back in his world for an evil organization known as the PHANTOM. Originally serving the navy to defend his home of Shell Island, he quickly switched sides once the PHANTOM made their presence known. Voss was unable to resist the chance for wealth and power and so betrayed his own crew. The action cost him his leg, but he survived and was awarded by the PHANTOM a high status for proving his loyalty.

He assisted the PHANTOM in the near successful invasion of Shell Island by being the one of many enlisted to terrorize the island's coast, ensuring that no one can leave or enter the island. However, the PHANTOM fell once its leader, Commander Denmoore, was arrested. Ex-PHANTOMS who weren't arrested or killed such as Voss were now forced to roam alone to avoid capture and prosecution.

Voss simply patrolled the far seas where he became a pirate. He'd harass small boats, threatening to harm its occupants if they don't comply with his requests. On top of that, Voss was still fiercely loyal to the PHANTOM and its legacy. He was determined to find a relic known as the PHANTOM STONE, which was the source of the organization's technology that was way ahead of its time. It was abandoned after Commander Denmoore threw it into the ocean shortly before his arrest.

With it, Voss could revive the PHANTOM and become its new leader. He spent years searching and forcing his crew to comb the seafloor to no avail... Until recently. Voss seemed to have pinpointed the stone's general location. Unlimited power was just within his grasp, but he hadn't taken into account as to why it took everyone so long to find the powerful relic.

The PHANTOM STONE had a habit of summoning rough thunderstorms to protect it. Not only that but, as Voss swiftly found out, it was also capable of summoning wormholes; portals that would lead him to a universe different from his. Voss's ship was destroyed in the storms, leaving his crew to likely drown. He might've shared the same fate if he hadn't been forced through one of these portals.

At present, Voss is dumped absolutely drenched in the Hinterlands of Erde Nona. With none of his crewmates there to do his bidding, Voss is now forced to defend himself in this unfamiliar place. The PHANTOM STONE has just escaped his grasp, but perhaps in this land of new opportunities, our sea captain here can find an alternative to great power and wealth...

Abilities/Skills:

Flexibility:

Agility Rank 4 (+800)
-Finite (-200)
-Removable (-200)
Total Essence: 400

Voss is incredibly agile for his age, even if you take into consideration his cartoony appearance. He is capable of performing impressive acrobatics and balancing acts... But only for a finite amount of time. After a while, Voss will begin to tire and his agility rank will begin to decrease. Eventually, his agility's effectiveness will decrease so much that he must stop and rest.

Voss could rest for less time if he were to stop before he overexerted himself. His weakness is his prosthetic leg. Should it be removed or damaged somehow, his movement is significantly incapacitated.


Saber:
Damage Rank 2 (+200)
-Removable (-100)
Total Essence: 100

Voss' trusty sword is the same one he had during the hay day of the PHANTOM navy. It's a one-handed saber that Voss has found to be rather skilled with. However, it can be grabbed and taken away from him.


Deflection:
Damage Rank 3 (+300)
-Affects Multiple (+150)
-Limited (-150)
Protection Rank 3 (+300)
-Affects Multiple (+150)
-Limited (-150)
Total Essence: 600

Voss, if a sword is equipped, can wildly swing it in the air to deflect small-arms attacks. He can also choose who to deflect the attacks at.


Strength:
Damage Rank 1 (+100)
Total Essence: 100

Voss is a little stronger than the average man and can fight one-on-one with his fists if he chose to do so.


Speed:
Speed Rank 2 (+400)
Total Essence: 400

Voss can maintain an increased speed for a short period of time.


Prosthetic Leg:
Flight Rank 1 (+200)
Removable (-50)
Total Essence: 150

Voss' left prosthetic leg allows him to leap far distances. It is removable.

How much Essence did you spend? 1,750

How much Essence do you have left? 250

Were you referred by an existing member? Ya boi Thatguy summoned me here
 
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Hi there and welcome to Multerra! Alrighty, let's take a look at your app...

For "Flexibility" -- Your Weakness would actually be Removable, since removing the prosthetic reduces his Agility.

For "Deflection" -- I would also add a Damage Effect onto this ability, and apply Affects Multiple to that instead of your Protection Effect.

For "Prosthetic Leg" -- Flight Rank 1 is only 200E.
 

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Great, thank you for implementing those changes. There’s just one more thing!

For “Deflection” - What I meant was that, in order for this ability to both defend your character from attacks and inflict damage, it needs both the Damage and Protection Effects with the same modifiers applied to them. It would then be written like this, though you could of course change the ranks and whatnot:

Deflection:
Damage Rank 3 (+300)
-Affects Multiple (+150)
-Limited (-150)
Protection Rank 3 (+300)
-Affects Multiple (+150)
-Limited (-150)
Total Essence: 600
 

Voss Eierkuchen

Voss Craves Violence
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Oh, thank you! I wasn't sure if I was able to add more than one effect on an ability... Though now that I look at it now, I don't see any reason why I shouldn't be. ^-^'

After editing the form one last time, I'm assuming that all the issues have been fixed and I can go ahead and copy/paste the form in character profiles?
 
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