Angus Character Application

[Hayle]

User name: Angus

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Hayle

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Physical Tendencies:
Physical Tendencies (Total should be 100%, only multiples of 5% please)
Power(P): 20
Toughness(T): 30
Quickness(Q): 20
Skill(S): 30

Personality Tendencies:
Personality Tendencies (Total should be 100%, only multiples of 5% please)
Aggression(A): 30
Cunning(C): 35
Diplomacy(D): 10
Support(S): 25

Physical Description:

Physical Description (Or an Image):

Hayle has a stern face, not unattractive, but with lines of age beginning to creep in. He is beginning to show some grey hairs in his short hair and beard, though they are more a result of stress rather than age. When not wearing his steel plate mail, it is clear to see that he is incredibly strong and tall, his height being six foot one inch, and his muscles straining the fabric of his skintight undershirt.

Character History:

Profession: Warlord
History (Are they native? Non-native?): Hayle is a knight in a grouping of nations located on the largest island in a circular archipelago. There is constant infighting between the local lords, and the self proclaimed kings, but he seeks to change that, and he will use whatever resources he can to reach that end. Hayle is native to Erde Nona, having been raised into the warring nations and snapped up into a life of military service at the age of 11. His life before had mostly included heavy farmwork from parents who, while in the low nobility, believed that higher classes should be examples to the peasants rather than overlords.

Abilities/Skills:

Abilities/Skills: You have 2,000 Essence to spend on your Starting Abilities or Master Skills.

Steel Plate Mail
Protection - 3, 300, ongoing +300, (600)
Steel plate armour that he pulled off of his knight, after the battle had ended, him defending the corpse, then later being given his position.

Combat Hardened
Endurance 3, 300 (300)
Constant combat, coming and going by the day, he has become quite enduring in the face of hardship.

Steel Longsword
Damage – 2, 200, removable -50*2, (100)
Hayle's steel longsword, he uses it generally as an implement for grappling his foes to the ground and ending them with a quick stab in an armour break.

Refined Strength
Move Object - 2, 200, ongoing +200 (400)
He often helps farmers on his downtime, this includes lifting entire hay bails by himself and lofting them into the barns, and dragging ploughs through the soil.

Honed Hearing
Sense (Hearing) - 1, 100, concentration, -50, (50)
Hayle is highly aware of his surroundings, able to pick out footsteps though they are attempting to be silent, and able to hear the movements of those who are not trying to hide, even if they are not within his field of view. He is unable to do this in the heat of combat or when he is not at the very least merely walking in a mostly quiet environment.

Battle Prowess
Agility - 2, 400 (400)
His combat experience and let's, be honest, luck, have allowed him to evolve into a finer warrior than most, as he leads from the front and fights with fervor while there.

How much Essence did you spend? 1850

How much Essence do you have left? 150

Were you referred by an existing member? ridley

 

[Yuuka Kazami]

Hey, nice to see a new member, just a few minor things.

1. Could you mention in his history if the nation he's a warlord for is on Cevanti, or if he's from an alternate universe?
2. You don't have to change it, but just to let you know, if you want to lift and carry heavy objects, you'll want to add the "ongoing" modifier to your move object. Without it, it's more of a "lift and quickly throw" thing.
3. Above your abilities, could you give them names? For example, your protection could just be "Armor" and your damage could just be "Longsword." The rest, since they're mostly ongoing, you are welcome to combine into one big ability just titled "Physical Traits" or something.

 

[Hayle]

I have edited the post, I have also changed the world to Erde Nona, as I believe that was the planet I was reading about, then I changed tabs to Cevanti, and thought that was the world I was reading about by mistake.

 

[Yuuka Kazami]

Then it looks like you're all good. I'll change your username and you're ready to post what you have in Profiles.