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<blockquote data-quote="Klarion" data-source="post: 12779" data-attributes="member: 21"><p>Hi there and welcome to Multerra! You have a really great character here, I love how detailed you’ve made your app. I just have a few notes on your app here for us to work on together, please don’t hesitate to PM me forum-side or on Discord if you need further guidance.</p><p></p><p>That being said, let’s get started!</p><p></p><p>In your Character History, can you mention if your character is a native to the Crossroads (our setting) or if they have been transported here by some mystical means?</p><p></p><p>For your “Avoid Fighting” ability, if you want your character to be capable of running at high speeds for longer than short dashes/bursts of speed, you will need to list the Ongoing modifier (+100E) under Speed. This is completely optional. It would be formatted like below:</p><p></p><p>Speed Rank 1 (200)</p><p>—Ongoing (+100)</p><p></p><p>In addition, for your character’s Healing Rank 3 Effect on this same ability, how does it work? Is it a magical spell, your character applying first aid to another, or something else? How many individuals can she heal at once? In short, I will need more specific details on how her Healing abilities function so I know what positive or negative modifiers you might need to add.</p><p></p><p>Here are a few examples of Healing Abilities with more detailed descriptions and modifiers. Feel free to use them as reference points for your own ability:</p><p></p><p>[SPOILER]<strong>First Aid</strong></p><p>Healing Rank 3 (600)</p><p>—Ongoing (+300)</p><p>—Self/Other (+75)</p><p>—Concentration (-150)</p><p></p><p>Total Cost: 825E</p><p></p><p>Ziral has a limited knowledge of healing, but it’s enough to patch up either herself or others under dire circumstances. With her trusty medkit, she is able to clean, stitch, and bandage up even the nastiest of physical wounds. This process requires her complete concentration and any active healing continues for as long as she is engaged in her task— an indefinite period of time. She can patch up either herself or a single target, but not both at once.</p><p></p><p><strong>Healing Aura</strong></p><p>Healing Rank 2 (400)</p><p>—Ongoing (+200)</p><p>—Affects Multiple (+100)</p><p>—Activation: 10s (-100)</p><p></p><p>Total Cost: 600E</p><p></p><p>Ziral utters a ten second incantation, after which a glowing green mist appears around her in a 20ft sphere. This aura applies active healing to any of her allies caught inside of it.[/SPOILER]</p><p></p><p>For your Master Skills - At Level 1, your character’s rank cap for Master Skills and Abilities is Rank 5. You have one listed here at Rank 6, so please update this!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Klarion, post: 12779, member: 21"] Hi there and welcome to Multerra! You have a really great character here, I love how detailed you’ve made your app. I just have a few notes on your app here for us to work on together, please don’t hesitate to PM me forum-side or on Discord if you need further guidance. That being said, let’s get started! In your Character History, can you mention if your character is a native to the Crossroads (our setting) or if they have been transported here by some mystical means? For your “Avoid Fighting” ability, if you want your character to be capable of running at high speeds for longer than short dashes/bursts of speed, you will need to list the Ongoing modifier (+100E) under Speed. This is completely optional. It would be formatted like below: Speed Rank 1 (200) —Ongoing (+100) In addition, for your character’s Healing Rank 3 Effect on this same ability, how does it work? Is it a magical spell, your character applying first aid to another, or something else? How many individuals can she heal at once? In short, I will need more specific details on how her Healing abilities function so I know what positive or negative modifiers you might need to add. Here are a few examples of Healing Abilities with more detailed descriptions and modifiers. Feel free to use them as reference points for your own ability: [SPOILER][b]First Aid[/b] Healing Rank 3 (600) —Ongoing (+300) —Self/Other (+75) —Concentration (-150) Total Cost: 825E Ziral has a limited knowledge of healing, but it’s enough to patch up either herself or others under dire circumstances. With her trusty medkit, she is able to clean, stitch, and bandage up even the nastiest of physical wounds. This process requires her complete concentration and any active healing continues for as long as she is engaged in her task— an indefinite period of time. She can patch up either herself or a single target, but not both at once. [b]Healing Aura[/b] Healing Rank 2 (400) —Ongoing (+200) —Affects Multiple (+100) —Activation: 10s (-100) Total Cost: 600E Ziral utters a ten second incantation, after which a glowing green mist appears around her in a 20ft sphere. This aura applies active healing to any of her allies caught inside of it.[/SPOILER] For your Master Skills - At Level 1, your character’s rank cap for Master Skills and Abilities is Rank 5. You have one listed here at Rank 6, so please update this! [/QUOTE]
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