Izaneusphortea Character Application

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Izaneus Phortea

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Username: Izaneusphortea

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Izaneus Shaltrou Phortea

Character Source: Original Character

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Character Behavior:
Easygoing, Strategist


Izaneus has a fairly laid back attitude, becoming generally bored when left with nothing to do.

However, when something interests or intrigues him, he becomes jovial, or serious. Easily Excited at the prospect of learning more. He's a kind soul, and generally hates hurting others. However his time on the roads have shown him, the world isnt always kind enough to let you choose.


Physical Description:

Golden blond hair, sky blue eyes, pale white skin, 5'10

Character History:

Izaneus was born to a declining noble house. His obsession and interest in the arcane was prodigious, and thus he began making amazing discoveries in the art.

His mother took this as an opportunity, and flaunted her son's talent, making him fufill orders and arcane services. Which ultimately burnt him out, more than he was willing to admit.

He fled his home, with nothing but a few clothes and bits of food.

He is native to Earde Nona

What starting Affinity does your character have? Gifted

Abilities/Skills:

Rituals/Arcana rank 5
Research/investigation; rank 5
Knowledge (Arcana); Rank 5
Craft (Art); rank 5
Craft (Alchemy); rank 5
Cost:250

Name: crafty illusion

Illusion (sight and sound); Rank 2 (500)

+ Ongoing (200) Concentration (-100)

Total cost: 600

Description: A small illusion of the users desire appears near them and persists until they dismiss it. Concentration required

Name: Firebolt

Damage - Rank 2 (200)

Ranged (100); weakness (-50);

Total cost; 250

Description: A hand sized blast of fire shot at the target (damages everything but fire)

Name: Minor Telekinesis

Move object; Rank 1 (100)

Ranged (50) Ongoing (100)

Total cost:250

Description: the user moves an object without touching it, wherever they please

How much Essence did you spend? 1,350

How much Essence do you have left? 650

Were you referred by an existing member? No
 
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Hi there, and welcome to Multerra!
Your join application looks pretty good overall. If you could elaborate on your character’s personality (a small paragraph describing the word choices would be good) and specify if they are a native, that would be ideal. Other things to note is that if you want to manipulate objects for more than a few moments at a time, you should get ongoing on your telekinesis, and that your illusion should be more expensive (two ranks of illusion for two senses is 500) and specify that concentration is required in the description. Also, it is preferred that your abilities have a new line for each modifier, but that’s a pretty minor issue.
 
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Izaneus Phortea

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Hi there, and welcome to Multerra!
Your join application looks pretty good overall. If you could elaborate on your character’s personality (a small paragraph describing the word choices would be good) and specify if they are a native, that would be ideal. Other things to note is that if you want to manipulate objects for more than a few moments at a time, you should get ongoing on your telekinesis, and that your illusion should be more expensive (two ranks of illusion for two senses is 500) and specify that concentration is required in the description. Also, it is preferred that your abilities have a new line for each modifier, but that’s a pretty minor issue.
Ohhh.. Yeah those are a problem.

I meant to add ongoing to the telekinesis. But I guess I didn't, and the illusion should be more expensive. I'll right that in a moment.

But i read in the rules you were supposed to do two words for the personality, the first for their behavior. The second for their fighting style.

I also thought that the concentration modifier essentially explained that lol. But I can still do that if you'd like me to. I will also specify if they're a native. So just a moment please!
 

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Ok, looking better. Your character’s description does use the two words like you said, but those words also have a small paragraph accompanying them to explain them. Also, Illusion is too expensive now, it should just be 500 rather than 550.
 

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Ok, looking better. Your character’s description does use the two words like you said, but those words also have a small paragraph accompanying them to explain them. Also, Illusion is too expensive now, it should just be 500 rather than 550.
Thank you once more for helping with this! I'll be sure to keep it in order this time around.

But thank you for telling me about these things!!
 

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Ok, that all looks pretty good to me. The last things is that your spent essence should be 1350, not 1500. Fix that up and you should be all set!
 

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Alright! Everything looks to be in order. You’re approved! You can go ahead and post your character sheet in the character profiles sections of the forum and then you’re free to start roleplay. Welcome again to Multerra!
 
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