Kurusu Akira Character Application

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Username: Kurusu Akira

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Ren Allen

Character Source: Original Character

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Character Behavior:
Ren is an Intuitive Trickster. He doesn't think much of his surroundings when dealing with immediate events, he just reacts based on what worked in the past and split decisions he makes in the moment.

Ren is also a Trickster. He toys with his foes, not intending to deal much harm, but to annoy them instead. He doesn't like injuring other people, but he does enjoy messing up with them, dancing around instead of fighting. If he doesn't have the luxury of acting like this, or if his enemy is a mindless foe, he goes straight to incapacitate them.

Despite his playful actions, he's not one to talk much, mostly just to respond to others if they say something. He bothers people by being annoying to fight, not by verbally taunting them.

Physical Description:

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Character History:

Ren is a water spirit from the mountains of Erde Nona, born in a spring between the wilderness. The water from the spring is magical, healing anyone who drinks it, as well as soothing those who bathe in it. However, a group of people from a nearby settlement invaded the spring, killing Ren's parents when he was too little to remember them, to take the place for themselves. They didn't kill Ren though – they adopted him into their ranks, raising him to be a hunter like them.

But there was always friction between Ren and his new family. He was aware of what happened, resenting the other hunters for what they did, but at the same time, he can't remember his parents or how living in the spring was, leaving in his heart a void he can't fill. At the same time, the hunters never liked Ren that much – many were not thrilled to have a creature from the wilderness among them, keeping their distance from him if only to respect the decision of the elders, with a few exceptions. Ren copes with this by being playful and trying to appear unbothered by everything, but deep down, he’s seething with a rage he suppresses.

In spite of all this, Ren has been trained well and worked hard for the skills he possesses. He’s currently 19, and recently has been given permission to go into dangerous missions through the ruins and wilderness surrounding the town to protect the people.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Specialized

Abilities/Skills:

Rainfall (1400)
-Agility 2(400)

-Speed 2(400)
--Ongoing 2 (0)

-Concealment 2(sight, hearing)(400)
--Ongoing 2(0)

-Sense 2(extrasensorial)(200)
--Ongoing 2(0)

Ren can conjure rain wherever he is, in a variable area around him, although not larger than 40m nor smaller than 1m in diameter, and not higher than 20m. The rain itself has no effect, except damping what it touches. But, while under it, Ren receives a myriad of bonuses – he's faster and more agile, as well as harder to perceive. He can also feel what the rain touches as a whole, limited by his Sense level, giving him an edge when it comes to being aware of his surroundings.

He can keep the rain falling as long as he wants, within reason (he can't if he's too tired or unconscious), as well as move it if he needs to. Ren can also make it be as gentle as a drizzle, or as hard as a downpour. He doesn't get wet from the rain, but everything else does.

Ren receives these bonuses under regular rain as well.


Water Walking (200)
-Movement 1(water)(200)

Ren can walk and run over water, or sink if he pleases.


Dew (200)
-Damage 4(400)
--Ongoing 4(0)
--Removable 4(-200)

A thin sword, 70cm in size for its blade, with a surprisingly sharp edge and sturdiness for what one may expect from such a weapon.

How much Essence did you spend? 1800

How much Essence do you have left? 200

Were you referred by an existing member? No

What is your Discord name? blur
 

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Hello there! Welcome (back?)!

Looking over your abilities, a couple things stand out.

For Rainfall specifically, the wording of it reads like it would have some extra modifiers, to the tune of Concentration or maybe Limited, given how it works. Those are, of course, optional, but would save you some essence. Just a thought.

Other than that though, everything looks alright, so you're good to go. I'll get your name changed and everything reset for you here shortly.
 
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