Okuyasu Nijimura Character Switch

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Solomon Grundy

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Are you spending 50 Tokens? No

Has it been at least 6 months since your last switch? Yes

How much essence will this new character have? 2000

New Character Name: Spider Jerusalem

Is this character an OC or a Canon character? Canon Character

Starting Location? Opealon

Character Behavior
Cynical Wildcard

Spider is Cynical. A bitter journalist who has seen the worst of the world and come out the other side with some small shred of idealism locked away in his heart. He doesn't trust most people to do the right thing, because most poor schlubs just want tomorrow to be exactly like today. It takes people like him to shoulder the burden of Truth and he can only throw what he finds to the masses like pearls before swine.

A Wildcard, Spider will use every trick in the book to get to the Truth. This includes physical violence, piercing questions, strange behavior, massive amounts of drugs, or something called a Bowel Disruptor. You can never be sure how he will approach any situation, since he's capable of both extreme violence and heart-wrenching empathy (usually towards kids).

Physical Description:

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Spider is completely hairless (due to an accident with a shower-unit) and is covered in various tattoos, most prominently being the one on his forehead. They're also usually visible due to his penchant for exhibitionism (either during drug binges or simply because he was too lazy to put on pants). When he is clothed, he typically wears a simple black suit and no shirt. He almost always wears an iconic pair of glasses that were designed by a Maker Machine (that was also on drugs).

Character History:

Spider Jerusalem is from Earth's far far future, having worked as a journalist and famous political columnist. He achieved fame by writing several books on the presidential election, and having achieved fame, retired to a secluded life on the Mountain near The City. However, still contracted for two more books, he is forced to return to the bright, noisy City and begin writing once more. Covering all sorts of subjects from Alien Transient Riots to the next presidential election, Spider accidentally gets a psychopath put in the White House and makes it his mission to right this wrong.

During the course of defeating the new President (known as the Smiler), he contracts a rare infection from nano-pollen, which will slowly kill him through neural degeneration. Fighting the Smiler and getting him exposed as the monster he is, Spider returns to his retirement once more and hides the fact that he is in the 5% of people who go into remission from the I-Pollen infection, securing his peaceful solitude.

With the arrival of Darkseid to the Crossroads, it appears Spider was swept up in the release of multiversal energies, and is transported to Opealeon, where he made his name somewhat recognizable once more by covering the Nausicaa incident, and focusing columns and investigations on the tyrannical rule of Comstock and Andrew Ryan....

Abilities/Skills:

I-Glasses

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Spider's shades are high tech, able to serve as a reliable and covert telecommunications device. They can take pictures, video, record audio, and link with nearby technology to display the things stored in their memory on screens and viewports.

Communication 1 (100)



Armed with the Truth

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Spider is adept at turning anything around him into an instrument of violence. He is able to use most objects to hurt, smash, and intimidate, as well as use them to protect himself. However, he is limited to what might be reasonably found where he is.

Variable Creation 3 (600) [300-50=250] 750 Essence
Damage 3 (300) [100-50=50] 150 Essence
Protection 3 (300) [100-50=50] 150 Essence

Limited: Only What Is Appropriate For The Setting (-50 per rank)
Total Essence: 1050


Bowel Disruptor

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Exactly what it sounds like. This is a futuristic, non-lethal weapon that is illegal in the City. It has variable settings from "loose" to "watery" to "prolapse", but the effect is mostly the same: having an immediate and painful bowel movement. The effects of evacuating your bowels are technically non-damaging, but dealing with the aftermath is sure to throw anyone off their game.

Debuff 5 (Shit Your Pants) (100 per rank)
-Ranged (+50 per Rank)
-Limited: Organic Beings (-50 per rank)
Total Essence: 500


Master Skills

Spider digs at whatever resources and weak links he can to find out things those in power want hidden, mostly by inserting himself into the thick of events he's covering in a wild and unpredictable manner.
Investigation (Gonzo Journalism) 5 - 250 Essence

Spider is adept as asking questions, sometimes nonsensical, sometimes cutting, as well as pushing past people or bowling them over wit his force of personality.
Social (Fast-Talk) 4 - 200 Essence

Affinities: Influential

Total Essence Spent: 2000
 

Sigmund Vrell

Cosmic Brain
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Your history, description, and behaviour are all fine. The I-glasses and master skills are all good too. "Armed with the Truth" is fine mechanically but some reworking of the format is needed. The variable creation's price is listed wrong (it's correctly 600 at first but then becomes 300 - 50, so the move is actually 450 essence rather than 750). Additionally, Limited inserted under each effect would be preferable. Finally, something along the lines of "what is on hand" might fit better than "what is appropriate for the setting", but that's a minor gripe.

The Bowel Disrupter, however, is a move that we have decided will not be approved. This type of ability is something that we believe has too much potential to be used in an unpleasant and disrespectful way, so we will not be allowing it to be used against other characters. It is, however, allowed if used as a fluff ability in a personal storyline.
 

Solomon Grundy

GRUNDY LOOKING FOR FRIENDS
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Armed With The Truth

Spider is adept at turning anything around him into an instrument of violence. He is able to use most objects to hurt, smash, and intimidate, as well as use them to protect himself. However, he is limited to what might be reasonably found where he is.

Variable Creation 3 (600)
Limited: What is On Hand (-50)

Damage 3 (300)
Limited: What is on Hand (-50)

Protection 3 (300)
Limited: What is on hand (-50)

Total Essence: 750


The Bowel Disrupter will be replaced with this

Triat "Air Jesus" Sports Shoes

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These commercially available sneakers are equipped with far-future technology that allows anyone wearing them to fly, walk on walls or water, or simply stay on the ground in supreme comfort.

Flight 1 (200)
Ongoing (+100/rank)
Movement: Water Walking (200)
Movement: Wall Walking (200)



Total Cost: 700 Essence
 

Arthur Morgan

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Alrighty, everything here looks good to me! This character switch is approved. Your Essence/Coin totals have been reset and your username is now Spider Jerusalem.

Post your character profile whenever you're ready in the Character Profiles forum!
 
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