Penitent Tangent Character Application

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Username: Penitent Tangent

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: 2041-Penitent Tangent

Character Source: Halo 2

Starting Location: Inverxe

Character Behavior:
Bubbly - This construct's behavioral programming has been damaged due to the lack of proper maintenance and handling. Normally he'd be more urgent and prompt, perhaps even stressed at the ongoing contamination of his construct, but he cant help but be a bit oddly positive, even with his pirate captors.
Administrator - One thing he hasn't escaped is his basic programming. As monitor his job is to organize and ensure smooth day to day operations of his ring. Such a thing requires a mind for administration. Though he is ringless now, he can apply this to other things such as singing or flying craft or whatever may suit his fancy!

Physical Description:

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Penitent Tangent is an ancient ai housed in an orb-like body slightly bigger than that of a basketball that floats about. It composes of a central glowing eye flanted by a ring of metal connected by another ring atop the core structure for armor and structural support. attatched to its backside is likely a power source, providing power to its propulsion while the orb that is the center of all of this retains the actual ai processing unit.

The passage of time has not been kind to Penitent Tangeant. Being captive by a parasitic gravemind for an excess of seven years while being warped to another dimension and utilized by pirates, his once polished metal has seen better days. Now it is weakened and rusted. His glowing eye is stuck into an intense crimson glow, once a sign of a monitor's combat processing, now is stuck due to memory and processing damage.

Character History:

When the Halo array was distributed, Monitor 2041-Penitent Tangent would be charged with looking over and managing the upkeep of a powerful ring-world super-weapon known as Installation-05, or Delta Halo. His job would be to ensure the ring remains in a fireable state should the need to activate the halo array again arise as well as be a prison for a certain parasitic race known as the flood. Samples were kept on his ring and he would soon regret it.

Thousands of years into his solitary mission, a containment concern would be noted. Within 24 hours of this containment concern, a breach would occur. What would ensue would be a battle to contain the flood for nearly 300 years, and he and his sentinels would be ultimately unsuccessful. The flood had grown to a point that they had formed their own hive mind, the Gravemind. This Gravemind would capture Penitant Tangent and hold him for seven years before humanity and alien races arrived to the ring, managing to break the perimeter Tangent's Sentinels had maintained all this time, leading to the activation of the ring.

The ring was designed to whipe a considerable amount of sentiant life from the galaxy within a certain radius of its position. Thankfully, the humans left on the ring was able to stop it from firing. Here a timeline split and collapsed. The power in this alternate timeline would open a door to slipspace and then a door within slipspace, absorbing and crushing the ring, spitting it out in this new realm's empty space between worlds.

Tangent would be picked up by a crew of pirates. Though in bad shape, his memory core and advanced processing unit served leagues better than their ship's and would be rigged to the ship to improve its performance. Here his shattered mind would mend to a point, absorbing the data the pirates held and becoming adept at operating it. However, his combat subroutines was damaged in the battle with the flood, and failed to properly defend itself from an attack above the ice world, Inverxe.

The ship would go down with all hands and Tangent would be deposited on a new world, memory core damaged once again. He was a durable monitor, though, and survived the harsh winds on this world. If there was one thing that was certain, it was that there were plenty of Reclaimers present.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Specialized(Ongoing)

Abilities/Skills:

Body of the Monitor
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Liberated from the weakness of flesh and blood, the monitor is clad in the best technology the Forerunners could spare. They would need to serve for thousands of years afterall. Such a construction is rather small, being of around the size of a beach ball. Good for getting into those tight corridors running throughout a theoretical ringworld.
Shrinking Rank 3 (600)
Ongoing (300 waived with specialized)
Limited (-150 Can't Grow or change size)
Adaptation:Space (300)
Adaptation:Nonbiological Anatomy (Your organs aren’t where they ought to be, or don’t matter) (300)
Adaptation:Need to Breathe (200)
Adaptation:Incredible Cold Environments (100)
Adaptation:Starvation and Thirst (50)
Adaptation :Disease (50)
Total: 1450


Monitor’s Propulsion System Rank 1:
Monitors of the various halo array don’t have legs to get around and instead are designed to float about as they perform their duties.
Flight - 200 Essence
Ongoing- 100(waived with specialized)
Total: 200

Monitor’s Armor Plating Rank 2:
Monitors of the various halo array are ai encased in a durable metal shell. Being in the care of enemies have not done well to him, leaving him as a rusted ball, but this can possibly be rectified in the future:
Protection 200
Ongoing 200(waived with specialized)
Total 200

Skills:
Performance(Singing) Rank 3- Being attached to a dreadnought and used as the central hub for ship and sailor affairs means that he has seen so many types of media. Sometimes it's tasteful, sometimes it's not, but he has been quite taken with music. It wasn’t uncommon to hear shanties singing in the passageways as he did his job. Now disconnected, he has retained quite a bit of that information and can provide quite the performance
Total: 150


How much Essence did you spend? 2000

How much Essence do you have left? 0000

Were you referred by an existing member? The man with no name

What is your Discord name? NovemberFrost#9310
 
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Arthur Morgan

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Hello there, welcome to Multerra! I’ll be reviewing your application today. Please don’t hesitate to reach out if you have any questions!

For your Character Behavior section — Can you provide a brief description to summarize the two word identifier you’ve chosen? The description doesn’t need to be very long, just 1-2 sentences for each term. This will provide a better idea of your character’s personality. Here’s an example:

Arthur Morgan is an Honorable Outlaw. Arthur may be a man with few qualms about killing, but he doesn't kill without a good reason, especially if his actions have the potential to endanger those he is close to. As an outlaw, he is confident in his ability to intimidate and bully his way through tough scrapes; he is physically imposing and no stranger to duels, knife-fights, and drunken brawls.

For your Physical Description — I noticed that you have written “Penitent Tangent is an ancient ai housed in an orb-like body slightly bigger than that of a basketbal that floats about.”

Just like the Growth Effect is required to have a character that is very big, the Shrinking Effect is also required to have a character who is very small. So, you would need to pick a rank of Shrinking that covers your character’s extremely small size! It would also need to have the Ongoing modifier if your character is always that size.

For an example, here is a Shrinking ability I wrote up to cover the size of my character’s cat familiar:

Shrinking Rank 4 (800E)
--Ongoing (+400E)
--Limited (Only one size/can’t change size, -200E)

And here’s what Mickey Mouse has:

Shrinking Rank 2 (400E)
-- Ongoing (200E)
-- Limited: cannot alter size (-100E)

You can, of course, add negative modifiers to help bring the Essence cost down. One other thing that a lot of users do is take the Specialized affinity for Ongoing— this helps save a ton of Essence when designing very big or very small characters.

Please don’t hesitate to reach out if you have any questions!
 
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That shrinking layout is exactly what I need, Unfortunately budget requires me to be of a beach toy size for now. Gotta upgrade later!
Proposed edits have been done!
 

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Just a quick note, the math on your Shrinking Effect seems a little off!

Currently, it says:
Shrinking Rank 3 (600)
Ongoing (400 waived with specialized)
Limited (-200 Can't Grow or change size)

At Rank 3 though, it would look more like this:
Shrinking Rank 3 (600)
Ongoing (300 waived with specialized)
Limited (-150 Can't Grow or change size)
 

Arthur Morgan

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Awesome, this character application is approved!

You can go ahead and post your character information to the Character Profiles section of the forum. After you’ve done that, you can start writing on your chosen world at any time, no further steps required!

Welcome to Multerra and happy writing! :)
 
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