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Fiya

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Erde Nona
Username: Siber

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Fiya Hanna Aquela

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Erde Nona

Character Behavior:
Fiya is an Mindful Defiant. Fiya cares about her surroundings and the feelings of others, even if she might not seem to show it. She prefers to think before acting, putting others' needs in front of her own. Fiya is also a Defiant, usually not one to follow orders and go her own route. She mainly uses magic and her bardiche to strike down foes.

Physical Description:

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Character History:

Fiya doesn't recall much from her past, only that she was teleported from her home - a strange place where fire burns eternally and monsters occasionally roamed - where she lived in a nomadic tribe. Though they weren't all her family, she called them as such. Before arriving to Erde Nona is where her memory gets blurred.
Colliding with damp ground, Fiya stumbled her way around a nearby woods before finding herself in Erde Nona.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Specialized

Abilities/Skills:

Scorch
Damage - Rank 2 (200)
Modifiers: Ranged (Specialized); Indirect (200); Weakness (-50)
Total Cost: 350
Description - A burst of flame extends from Fiya's hand, and Fiya's ability to influence flame allows it to swerve around obstacles and strike an enemy, giving them moderate burns. This attack does not affect creatures of fire .

Bardiche Attack
Damage - Rank 4 (400)
Modifiers: Transferrable (200); Removable (-200)
Total Cost: 400
Description - Fiya slashes with her bardiche towards a foe within melee range, dealing a good amount of damage to them. Fiya is able to give her weapon to others and let them use it.

Beast Speech
Communication - Rank 1 (100)
Modifiers: Concentration (-50); Weakness (-25); Activation (-50)
Total Cost: 50
Description - Using gestures and magic, Fiya can communicate with animals with effort on her part. It takes 10 seconds to communicate a sentence to an animal. This does not work with undead animals or monsters.

Healing Flame
Healing - Rank 2 (400)
Modifiers: Self/Other (50); Concentration (-100)
Total Cost: 350
Description - Fiya's family recognized that as much as fire destroys, it can also heal. Via magic and concentration, Fiya can heal others' or her own minor wounds with a yellow, harmless flame.

Heat Resistance
Adaptation [Incredibly Hot Environments] - Rank 1 (100)
Modifiers: Side Effect (-50)
Total Cost: 50
Description - Being born and raised in an underworld-like environment, Fiya's body has adapted to heat. However, she has a more difficult time breathing if she is laboring in a hot environment.

Cold Resistance
Adaptation [Incredible Cold Environments] - Rank 1 (100)
Total Cost: 100
Description - Using internal heat and magic, Fiya is able to hold her own in cold weather, including moderate blizzards and mountainous regions.

Fire's Wrath
Debuff Rank 1 (100)
Modifiers: Affects Multiple (50); Ranged (Specialized); Ongoing (100); Indiscriminate (-50)
Total Cost: 200
Description - Calling upon the forces of nature, scorched vines coil around a creature's ankle, potentially causing them to lose their balance. This can potentially trip both allies (including Fiya) and foes within the 20 foot radius.

Wooden Shield
Protection Rank 1 (100)
Modifiers: Removable (-50)
Total Cost: 50
Description - Fiya wields a wooden shield incapable of burning, providing some protection.

How much Essence did you spend? 1550

How much Essence do you have left? 450
 

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Hello there, welcome to Multerra! Great character concept here, I just have a few notes for your abilities to make sure everything's ready to go!

For "Scorch" -- With the Weakness modifier subtracting from the total Essence cost of this ability, the total cost of Scorch would only be 350E!

For "Beast Speech" -- The total cost of an Ability cannot drop below 50 per rank of Effect. For an ability with a Rank 1 Communication Effect, this would be 50E. You can still keep the negative modifiers you have listed here for flavor/fluff if you'd like, but the total cost cannot be reduced below 50E! Please also add a note to your description about how long the activation time is.

For "Healing Flame" -- Please note in your description that your character must concentrate in order for this ability to work. Also mention that she has the option to heal others!

For "Heat Resistance" -- There are no actual Ranks beyond Rank 1 required for Adaptation Effects (as in, there is no rank 2, 3, 4 etc). So, the flat cost for having resistance to Incredible Heat Environments is 100E!

For "Fire's Wrath" -- Please describe how this ability can indiscriminately target others in your description! For example, this could be a brief line such as "this ability could potentially harm friends and foes alike within 20 ft of Fiya."
 

Fiya

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Hello there, welcome to Multerra! Great character concept here, I just have a few notes for your abilities to make sure everything's ready to go!

For "Scorch" -- With the Weakness modifier subtracting from the total Essence cost of this ability, the total cost of Scorch would only be 350E!

For "Beast Speech" -- The total cost of an Ability cannot drop below 50 per rank of Effect. For an ability with a Rank 1 Communication Effect, this would be 50E. You can still keep the negative modifiers you have listed here for flavor/fluff if you'd like, but the total cost cannot be reduced below 50E! Please also add a note to your description about how long the activation time is.

For "Healing Flame" -- Please note in your description that your character must concentrate in order for this ability to work. Also mention that she has the option to heal others!

For "Heat Resistance" -- There are no actual Ranks beyond Rank 1 required for Adaptation Effects (as in, there is no rank 2, 3, 4 etc). So, the flat cost for having resistance to Incredible Heat Environments is 100E!

For "Fire's Wrath" -- Please describe how this ability can indiscriminately target others in your description! For example, this could be a brief line such as "this ability could potentially harm friends and foes alike within 20 ft of Fiya."
Done! And thank you so much! I'm glad to be here! Let me know if I need to edit in / add anything else!
 

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Wonderful, thank you! You’re approved and can go ahead and post your character information in the Character Profiles section of the forum. I'll also change your username to match that of your character, which is the standard our forum follows. I'll change it to Fiya for now, but if you'd prefer anything else, just let me know here!

Happy writing!
 
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