Deverruss Character Application

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Deverruss

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Character Name: Deverruss

Character Source: Original Character

Starting Location: Mesa Roja

Character Behavior:
Chaotic Beast
Deverruss is a Chaotic individual, being born a half demon caused him to grow a love for chaos and disasters. He loves to play tricks as well as create issues wherever he goes. Instigating and giving people attitude are his favorite past time activities.

He was called a beast by many since his dragon side loves to terrorize others. He loves to charge headfirst into battles and doesn't care about negotiations, if there's a fight he will be there. Sometimes if he is having too much fun, he tends to lose control of himself causing many reckless events.

Physical Description:

Deverruss is a 7-foot-tall half dragon. Having a demonic blood line caused him to have a violet luminescent eye color. HIs eyes resemble those of a reptile. Thanks to his dragon and demon sides he was born with horns, a tail, and a pair of bats like wings. His hair is pitch black and he uses a short style haircut. Well built, athletic body.

Character History:

Being the only son of a poor couple who lived far up in the mountains cause his life to be a little complicated. He was one of the first Demonic dragon to be born in his world. It was not unusual for dragons to procreate but it was never allowed with a demon. It was said that both species where unable to create a child since the heat of the dragon would be too much for the demon half causing the child to die before it was born. His parents tried many times but where never successful, Wich caused them to lose hope. They researched and tested many things but all failed, instill one day a passing dragon talked to them. Hearing their stories, he mentioned something about an abysm where it was cold enough to maybe allow a child to at least be born. They researched and traveled everywhere trying to find the entrance. Once they found the entrance, they waited till it was time and took an egg with them, since only dragons where capable of entering certain areas only the father was able to go in. Taking his dragon form he entered and waited, the area was all pitch black nothing was visible. The Noice of cracks echoed as the egg began to hatch, cracks filled the egg but then it suddenly stopped. His dad carefully made a hole in the egg, and he feared the worst another failed attempt the child was born dead, he slowly reached in the egg and took the body out the cave where his mother was waiting. Seeing the sadness on his husbands' eyes broke her, she cried and ran to hug him. His only clue to having a child crumbled as it failed. They hugged for few seconds when out of nowhere a small cry appeared, they quickly looked down. They were in shock, the baby was alive, a beautiful baby boy Wich they named Deverruss. They quickly ran back home and made sure everything was ok with the baby, he seemed to be healthy and strong, the only issue was he was born with a strange marking on his chest. It turned out that since he was born in the abysm some dark energy was able to get inside of him. As years past his mark grew with him, he was raised to hunt, attack and survive. He was taught how to read, write, and how to use magic. Everything was going well until one day a group of dragons reached his house, it turned out that since Deverruss was born in the abysm many bad things began to happen. They gave them two options, they could either kill the child and throw him back to the abysm or they could send him somewhere else. Since they were only given two options, they quickly agreed to send him away since they wanted him to live his life. As soon as that happened, they walked inside his house and packed his things, telling him everything will be fine. Once he was all ready to go, they all walked to a wall near his house and they began to shan't, from their words a storm appeared, lighting roared, and the winds picked up. One of the lightnings hit a symbol on the ground and a strange portal appeared, his parents walked him near it and stopped Infront of it. They said their goodbyes, his mother hugged him hard and asked him to find his way home one day. His father hugged him and kissed his forehead, and told him "You are strong my son, fight for what you believe...we will not stop looking for you, I promise" Deverruss nodded and headed to the portal, looking back before entering and waved at his parents one last time. Once inside the portal he couldn't see anything at first, but after few seconds bright lights began to flight past him. A strong heat filled his body and then he hit a hard floor, sand entered his mouth causing him to slightly look up. As he got up, he used his hand to cover the sun as it inflicted with his vision, having no idea where he was. He began to move since he knew what needed to be done, grabbing all his things and heading forward, as he was ready for whatever came his way.

What starting Affinity does your character have? Persuasive

Abilities/Skills:

“Shadow ball” (750E)
- Damage V (500)
  • Range V (250)

Deverruss fires small projectiles made from shadows from the palms of his hands. These shadowy orbs explode on contact, blasting away at whatever targets they manage to hit.

“Healing flame” (350E)
- Healing II (400)
  • Self/Other II (50)
  • Activation II: 10 secs (-100)
  • Concentration II (-100)
- Protection II (200)
  • Concentration II (-100)

Deverruss needs to concentrate and create a small flame that appears at his chest region, expanding outwards as it covers his body on flames, the full heal lasts 5 seconds. As his body is on fire, he heals a portion of his heath as well as gains a small amount of protection.

“Claw Swipe” (400E)
- Damage II (200)
  • Ongoing II (200)

Deverruss gets in a fighting stance, his long and sharp nails appear. Getting hit by his claws will cause the target to take damage as well as apply a bleeding effect.

“Smokescreen” (200E)
- Concealment I: Sight (100)
  • Ongoing I (100)
  • Range I (50)
  • Affects Multiple I (50)
  • Finite I (-50)
  • Indiscriminate (-50)

This ability is used to disorientate a target, as Deverruss opens his mouth and releases large amounts of black gas, causing the target to lose track of his movements and allow for a hasty escape or time to set up a counterattack against any foes caught within. This can be recharged by eating.

“Steam” (100E)
- Adaptation: Incredible Heat Environments (100)

This ability allows Deverruss to release a small amount of steam from his body allowing him to outlast hot environments.


How much Essence did you spend? 1,800E

How much Essence do you have left? 200E

Were you referred by an existing member? Masahir

What is your Discord name? Deverruss
 
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Sigmund Vrell

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Hi there and welcome to Multerra! Your app looks mostly good, though there are a few points to raise about your abilities.

Healing flame: This seems to be a continuous effect and would require Ongoing. If this is not the case, please elaborate on the duration of the flames in the description.

Smokescreen: It is not clear how this is Finite. Please specify a number of uses and a recharge/replenish time for the modifier to be applicable.

Shadow trap: This would need the Triggered modifier.

Finally, your spent essence is an issue. You have spent 2200 essence, which is over your starting essence of 2000. As a result, you’ll need to cut at least 200 essence worth of abilities (you can purchase them later once you have the essence you need) and, preferably, record the amount of essence you have spent and have left by editing the respective sections.
 

Deverruss

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Hi there and welcome to Multerra! Your app looks mostly good, though there are a few points to raise about your abilities.

Healing flame: This seems to be a continuous effect and would require Ongoing. If this is not the case, please elaborate on the duration of the flames in the description.

Smokescreen: It is not clear how this is Finite. Please specify a number of uses and a recharge/replenish time for the modifier to be applicable.

Shadow trap: This would need the Triggered modifier.

Finally, your spent essence is an issue. You have spent 2200 essence, which is over your starting essence of 2000. As a result, you’ll need to cut at least 200 essence worth of abilities (you can purchase them later once you have the essence you need) and, preferably, record the amount of essence you have spent and have left by editing the respective sections.
Thank you,
I added the changes you talked about and for now i got rid of the "shadow trap", will wait till I collect more essence then ill add it again.
 

Sigmund Vrell

Cosmic Brain
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Level 6
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Apologies for the delay.
Everything looks good to me now, you’re approved!
You can go ahead and post your character sheet in the character profiles section and start writing whenever you like.
 
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