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SpartanB242

User name: SpartanB242

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Matsu B-242

Character Source: Halo (OC)

Starting Location: Mesa Roja

Physical Tendencies:
Physical Tendencies
Power(P): 15%
Toughness(T): 15%
Quickness(Q): 40%
Skill(S): 30%

Personality Tendencies:
Personality Tendencies
Aggression(A): 20%
Cunning(C): 40%
Diplomacy(D): 10%
Support(S): 30%

Physical Description:

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Without helmet
Height: 7'1
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Black Medium length (Wild)
Ethnicity: Asian

Character History:

Spartan-III Matsu B-242
During Beta company selection teams were formed shortly after there first night time jump. Spartan B-242 Matsu Kiyoshi while the initial leader for his tactical thinking and aggressive disposition was demoted to general team member. Those suspected with the potential of being Category Two were formed into teams first; Category Two being a match of personality, physique and intelligence matching those of Spartan-IIs. Tortoise Team was often forced to be kept away from other teams due to aggression for minor slights against their team.

B-242 was the teams general support, psychological crutch and overly aggressive protector. The only male member of Tortoise Team looked after his more agile companions by using his raw strength. Before Augmentation he would often be reprimanded for staging ambushes on rival teams. In the field he kept a cool professional tone and always jolly persona, trying to keep things light despite tactical or numerical disadvantages. While Tortoise team was seen to be stoic even by spartan standards, B-242 made up for his teams lack of displayed personality.

Tortoise Team was split up after the leader of the team B-108 assaulted, hospitalized, and nearly killed a rival team leader in the cafeteria. The splitting and disbandment of the team was seen as a positive, due to the increase of personal scores. B-242 fit well with his team and for the next year, was seen as fully integrated. Secretly B-242 with the help of an Alpha Company Spartan Cadre member (Tulip-A033) collected his team and hatched a plan to bring them back together.

Near the end of the program after augmentation at the aggregate age of 11 Tortoise Team assaulted their own teammates capturing them with stolen restraints. With the help of Cadre member Tulip-A033 they used stolen live ammunition to kidnap the Cadre members incharge of the exercise. After a long negotiation Tortoise Team would be reinstated but removed from the program and flagged for special training.

Tortoise Team was deployed on missions using augmented SPI armor often working behind enemy lines. They were also given a fifth team member in this time Tulip A-033 who fit into the teams dynamic with little difficulty. Spartan B-242 continued to keep the psychological health of his team, especially after learning the results of Pegasi Delta. B-242 was an aggressive soldier who had learned patience in the field. Second in command on the team and incharge of small unit tactics he would wait for the enemy to get lazy before striking in a heavily aggressive fashion.

Despite being deployed against the Insurrection Tortoise Team would be assigned to land on a snow based planet. There mission would to eliminate a local Insurrectionist leader tied to the trafficking of weapons. As Matsu B-242 entered the Long Range Stealth Orbital Insertion Pod he had no clue how wrong his deployment was about to go.

Abilities/Skills:

Spartan-III Senses
Sense Rank 1 (100 Essence)
Spartan-III have color sharpness, perfect vision, close to night vision. B242 is a veteran to the war with the insurrectionists as well as the covenant threat.

Spartan-III Physiology
Speed Rank 1 (200 Essence) + Ongoing (100 Essence)
Protection Rank 3 (300 Essence)
Endurance Rank 3 (300 Essence)
Damage Rank 3 (300 Essence)
Move Object Rank 1 (100 Essence)
Spartan-III Physiology while weaker than their Spartan-II counterparts, still possess incredible physique, with carbide ceramic bones, increased muscle density as well as improved neural pathways.

How much Essence did you spend? 1500

How much Essence do you have left? 0
 

Conrad Jamboy

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Sorry for the delay.

The first Ability is good. For the second Ability, it seems like you'll also want Ongoing on your Protection ranks. From the blurb, it sounds like they're uncommonly durable at all times, not just in short bursts. I'm assuming the Damage ranks refer to increased strength for things like kicks and punches?
 
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SpartanB242

No worries.

Yeah for the second ability I plan on doing that, but I can't afford it at the start. So B-242 is starting pretty banged up to represent that he can't really take very much for very long. Yes the damage ranks refer to increased strength for things like kicks and punches.

Any other suggestions or things i should know? First time in a long time trying a play by post.
 

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Personally if that were the case I would go for a lower rank of Ongoing Protection (you could only afford rank 1, but it's better than nothing) as opposed to a higher rank of temporary protection. Protection without Ongoing is usually in the form of something like an energy shield.
 

Conrad Jamboy

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Personally if that were the case I would go for a lower rank of Ongoing Protection (you could only afford rank 1, but it's better than nothing) as opposed to a higher rank of temporary protection. Protection without Ongoing is usually in the form of something like an energy shield.

Yeah, this is probably the best solution. It protects you all the time, but isn't as durable. You can add ranks as you go just like you can add modifiers, so the end result will be the same.

You asked if there's anything else you should know... other than what's in the rules pages, I don't think so. A good read-through of those pages should have you right up to speed!
 
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SpartanB242

User name: SpartanB242

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Matsu B-242

Character Source: Halo (OC)

Starting Location: Mesa Roja

Physical Tendencies:
Physical Tendencies
Power(P): 15%
Toughness(T): 15%
Quickness(Q): 40%
Skill(S): 30%

Personality Tendencies:
Personality Tendencies
Aggression(A): 20%
Cunning(C): 40%
Diplomacy(D): 10%
Support(S): 30%

Physical Description:



Without helmet
Height: 7'1
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Black Medium length (Wild)
Ethnicity: Asian

Character History:

Spartan-III Matsu B-242
During Beta company selection teams were formed shortly after there first night time jump. Spartan B-242 Matsu Kiyoshi while the initial leader for his tactical thinking and aggressive disposition was demoted to general team member. Those suspected with the potential of being Category Two were formed into teams first; Category Two being a match of personality, physique and intelligence matching those of Spartan-IIs. Tortoise Team was often forced to be kept away from other teams due to aggression for minor slights against their team.

B-242 was the teams general support, psychological crutch and overly aggressive protector. The only male member of Tortoise Team looked after his more agile companions by using his raw strength. Before Augmentation he would often be reprimanded for staging ambushes on rival teams. In the field he kept a cool professional tone and always jolly persona, trying to keep things light despite tactical or numerical disadvantages. While Tortoise team was seen to be stoic even by spartan standards, B-242 made up for his teams lack of displayed personality.

Tortoise Team was split up after the leader of the team B-108 assaulted, hospitalized, and nearly killed a rival team leader in the cafeteria. The splitting and disbandment of the team was seen as a positive, due to the increase of personal scores. B-242 fit well with his team and for the next year, was seen as fully integrated. Secretly B-242 with the help of an Alpha Company Spartan Cadre member (Tulip-A033) collected his team and hatched a plan to bring them back together.

Near the end of the program after augmentation at the aggregate age of 11 Tortoise Team assaulted their own teammates capturing them with stolen restraints. With the help of Cadre member Tulip-A033 they used stolen live ammunition to kidnap the Cadre members incharge of the exercise. After a long negotiation Tortoise Team would be reinstated but removed from the program and flagged for special training.

Tortoise Team was deployed on missions using augmented SPI armor often working behind enemy lines. They were also given a fifth team member in this time Tulip A-033 who fit into the teams dynamic with little difficulty. Spartan B-242 continued to keep the psychological health of his team, especially after learning the results of Pegasi Delta. B-242 was an aggressive soldier who had learned patience in the field. Second in command on the team and incharge of small unit tactics he would wait for the enemy to get lazy before striking in a heavily aggressive fashion.

Despite being deployed against the Insurrection Tortoise Team would be assigned to land on a snow based planet. There mission would to eliminate a local Insurrectionist leader tied to the trafficking of weapons. As Matsu B-242 entered the Long Range Stealth Orbital Insertion Pod he had no clue how wrong his deployment was about to go.

Abilities/Skills:

Spartan-III Senses
Sense Rank 1 (100 Essence)
Spartan-III have color sharpness, perfect vision, close to night vision. B242 is a veteran to the war with the insurrectionists as well as the covenant threat.

Spartan-III Physiology
Speed Rank 1 (200 Essence) + Ongoing (100 Essence)
Protection Rank 1 (100 Essence) + Ongoing (100 Essence)
Endurance Rank 5 (500 Essence)
Damage Rank 3 (300 Essence)
Move Object Rank 1 (100 Essence)
Spartan-III Physiology while weaker than their Spartan-II counterparts, still possess incredible physique, with carbide ceramic bones, increased muscle density as well as improved neural pathways.

How much Essence did you spend? 1500

How much Essence do you have left? 0
 
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SpartanB242

Ok i think i did my math right this time, Last time i shorted myself 100 essence. (someone please double check my math) Are these changes good? Also I wrote a bit of a backstory that takes place right before coming to multerra, do I just post that in my character thread?
 
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