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<blockquote data-quote="Arthur Morgan" data-source="post: 7501" data-attributes="member: 29"><p>Hi there and welcome to Multerra! Just a few things to note about your app!</p><p></p><p><strong>Character History</strong> - How was your character brought to our setting, the Crossroads? Via an inter-dimensional portal? Maybe he just went to sleep one night and woke up here? The choice is yours, but you'll need to let us know how he ended up here!</p><p></p><p><strong>For " Sclash Driver + Robot Jelly"</strong> - I'm not sure why you have listed a few of these modifiers here. Specifically, the "Self" modifier and the "Transferable" modifier. There is no Self modifier, but a "Self/Other" modifier, which allows you to target either yourself <u>OR </u>others at will. This modifier is usually meant for, for example, healing spells that can either be used to heal you <u>OR</u> heal your friend, but not both at the same time. However, I see no reason for your ability to need this modifier in your description.</p><p></p><p>As for the Transferable modifier, it's the same issue. Can your character "loan" the ability to shapeshift into Kamen Rider Grease to others? Adding the Transferable modifier to your ability means they gain not only the benefits of an Effect (such as being healed by somebody using the Healing Effect) but also the ability to activate it on their own (such as them being capable of healing others). If you want this ability to have this function, please mention this in your description and how it would be transferred to someone else.</p><p></p><p>Your Finite modifier also needs to be more specific and you need to mention it in your ability description. Can Kazumi only use this ability for a certain amount of time? If so, how long can he use it for? And how does he "recharge" this ability when it runs out/loses effectiveness? Remember, in order for it to qualify as Finite, Effects that are continuously used should need to be "recharged" at least once per scene.</p><p></p><p>For the Activation modifier, please mention in your description how long it takes for this ability to activate. This should be 10 seconds or more.</p><p></p><p>Also, keep in mind that if the Protection, Damage, and Agility Effects only activate when Kazumi is in his Kamen Rider Grease form, then they will need to have the exact same modifiers as the Shapeshifting Effect.</p><p></p><p><strong>For "Scrap Finish"</strong> - In the future, whenever you want to make updates to this ability, all you will need to do is use the <a href="https://multerra.zulenka.com/index.php?form/purchase-an-ability.8/select" target="_blank">ability purchasing form</a> and resubmit it with your changes. Just note somewhere in the form that you are making updates to an already existing ability.</p><p></p><p>If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask them!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Arthur Morgan, post: 7501, member: 29"] Hi there and welcome to Multerra! Just a few things to note about your app! [B]Character History[/B] - How was your character brought to our setting, the Crossroads? Via an inter-dimensional portal? Maybe he just went to sleep one night and woke up here? The choice is yours, but you'll need to let us know how he ended up here! [B]For " Sclash Driver + Robot Jelly"[/B] - I'm not sure why you have listed a few of these modifiers here. Specifically, the "Self" modifier and the "Transferable" modifier. There is no Self modifier, but a "Self/Other" modifier, which allows you to target either yourself [U]OR [/U]others at will. This modifier is usually meant for, for example, healing spells that can either be used to heal you [U]OR[/U] heal your friend, but not both at the same time. However, I see no reason for your ability to need this modifier in your description. As for the Transferable modifier, it's the same issue. Can your character "loan" the ability to shapeshift into Kamen Rider Grease to others? Adding the Transferable modifier to your ability means they gain not only the benefits of an Effect (such as being healed by somebody using the Healing Effect) but also the ability to activate it on their own (such as them being capable of healing others). If you want this ability to have this function, please mention this in your description and how it would be transferred to someone else. Your Finite modifier also needs to be more specific and you need to mention it in your ability description. Can Kazumi only use this ability for a certain amount of time? If so, how long can he use it for? And how does he "recharge" this ability when it runs out/loses effectiveness? Remember, in order for it to qualify as Finite, Effects that are continuously used should need to be "recharged" at least once per scene. For the Activation modifier, please mention in your description how long it takes for this ability to activate. This should be 10 seconds or more. Also, keep in mind that if the Protection, Damage, and Agility Effects only activate when Kazumi is in his Kamen Rider Grease form, then they will need to have the exact same modifiers as the Shapeshifting Effect. [B]For "Scrap Finish"[/B] - In the future, whenever you want to make updates to this ability, all you will need to do is use the [URL='https://multerra.zulenka.com/index.php?form/purchase-an-ability.8/select']ability purchasing form[/URL] and resubmit it with your changes. Just note somewhere in the form that you are making updates to an already existing ability. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask them! [/QUOTE]
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