Veira Application

[Voideara]

User name: Voidaera

Have you read the rules? Yes

Character Name: Veira Weily

Character Source: OC

Starting Location: Somewhere in Deep Space

Physical Tendencies:
Power: 35%
Toughness: 15%
Quickness: 20%
Skills: 30%

Personality Tendencies:
Aggression: 20%
Cunning: 40%
Diplomacy: 30%
Support: 10%

Physical Description:

Large sliver eyes that look at those they could pierce your soul. Her head is shaved but the dark brown hair still shows. A tall thinner girl covered head to toe with various inscriptions and tattooes. Embelisments and jewels. Her ears long and pointed to a tip, pulled high to the side of her face. And her canines sharper than most. Veira is an exotic beautic if you ever get to lay and eye on her.

Character History:

Veira has always been what many would call a ruffian. Going from one place to another and never having a true place to call home. She usually works alone. This time she finds herself stranded on a planet after crashing her spacebike and not having the piece to repair it. Hoping for someone to come along Veira has learned well how to defend herself

Abilities/Skills:

Abilities

Concealment (Sense)
Shimmer Ward: Rank 5 (500)
Veira was often persued for her odd looks so seeing her now is a rare sighting. A Master at Dissapearing acts and camoflauge. A life running in the stars now lets her relfect it off herself making it nearly impossible to find her.

Summoning
Motobike- Rank 2(600)
While she can create it, doesnt me it is always going to work.Being on the run you need something to run in. Her motorbike is that thing. Featuring auto blasting Engiens and self-navigation AI. The Shooting Star is the best self Build Motorbike in the galaxy

Damage
Shattering Shreach- Rank 5 (500)
Known to be calm and collected Veira has a dark side. A horrific dissabling shreak known to kill some. It usually gives enough time for her to get away or at least hide.


Master Skills

Technical- Mechanic Having built most of her own shit She feels she knows her way around stuff
CURRENT RANK: 4 (200)

Survival- Cartographer; Having a Self-Navigation and not Auto means she had to learn how to guide herself around the cosmos early on.
Current Rank: 3 (150)

How much Essence did you spend? 1950

How much Essence do you have left? 50

Were you referred by an existing member? No. Found via Top RP Sites.

 

[Klarion]

Hello and welcome to Multerra! So sorry for the wait, I’ll try to be as clear as possible about your application to make the joining process smoother. If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask them!

For your character’s starting location, you must pick one of the eight worlds. This is mentioned in your Character History, so whatever planet you had in mind, please specify what it was on your app!

As for your abilities…

For “Shimmer Ward” --

You want this ability to have the Concealment effect. Concealment, though, requires that you pick a specific “Sense” that your character will be hidden from-- for instance: Sight, Hearing, Smell, etcetera. You would write this like Concealment (Sight), Concealment (Hearing), or Concealment (Smell).

If you want your character to be hidden from multiple senses, you will have to pay for each additional Sense.

Also, when writing out your abilities, you write them like what I’ve written below. This is because it is the Effect that is ranked, not the Ability itself:

“Shimmer Ward
Concealment (Sight) Rank 5 (500)

Total Cost: 500 Essence

Veira was often persued for her odd looks so seeing her now is a rare sighting. A Master at Dissapearing acts and camoflauge. A life running in the stars now lets her relfect it off herself making it nearly impossible to find her.”

For “Motobike” --

Like your other ability, you would generally write your ability like this:

“Motobike
Summoning Rank 2 (600)

Total Cost: 600 Essence

While she can create it, doesnt me it is always going to work.Being on the run you need something to run in. Her motorbike is that thing. Featuring auto blasting Engiens and self-navigation AI. The Shooting Star is the best self Build Motorbike in the galaxy.”

In addition, if you want your Motobike to let your character move over land very quickly or be capable of flight, you should add the Speed and Flight effects to your ability.

For “Shattering Shreach” -

Does this Ability restrict or impede the target, giving your character time to get away? If so, it needs to have the Debuff effect. The Debuff effect is 100 Essence per rank of Effect.

Also, if you want Shattering Shreach to have a range larger than 10 ft/3m, you will need to add the Ranged modifier to either Damage, Debuff, or both. Taking Ranged as a modifier costs 50 Essence per Rank of Effect, so if you give your Damage Rank 5 the Ranged modifier, that would be 250 Essence.

For example, if you added Debuff Rank 1 and wanted both of your ability's Effects to be Ranged, this is how your ability would appear:

“Shattering Shreach
Damage Rank 5 (500)
-- Ranged (+250)

Debuff Rank 1 (100)
-- Ranged (+50)

Total Cost: 900 Essence”

Again, if you have any questions about this or if something I've written is unclear, please don't hesitate to ask.