The Counting House I

Arthur Morgan

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Consumable

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Fallen Angel Feather


Healing Rank 12 (2,400C)
-- Ongoing (+1,200C)
-- Affects Multiple 25 (+15,000C)
-- Indirect (+1,200C)
-- Limited (Only works on the innocent, -600C)
-- Concentration (-600C)
-- Activation (10 seconds, -600C)

Damage Rank 12 (1,200C)
-- Ongoing (+1,200C)
-- Affects Multiple 25 (+15,000C)
-- Indirect (+1,200C)
-- Limited (Only works on the wicked, -600C)
-- Concentration (-600C)
-- Activation (10 seconds, -600C)

Descriptor: A tangible fallen angel feather glistening with shivering blue flame, plucked from the ethereal, fiery wings of [REDACTED]. To activate, this consumable requires the user to slowly burn the consumable to ash over a period of 10 seconds. Once the activation period is over, the user and all innocents within a 500 ft diameter of the feather’s burning are immediately granted an ongoing sensation of paradise-level healing, repairing even the most grievous of wounds.

In addition, a wave of azure flame races across the land, covering all wicked individuals within a 500 ft diameter with a shroud of cleansing blue hellfire, causing extensive physical harm and an ongoing state of being on fire.

This healing/damage period lasts until the end of a scene (usually the end of the user’s post). The user must stand completely still, entirely focused on emitting the wave of divine hellfire. The damage and healing can go around corners/work through walls to encompass the complete inside of a structure.

Coin to be deducted: 34,800C

STAFF EDIT: Approved and Deducted
 
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Mad Maggie

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Going from Size 1 Speed 2 1400
to
Size 3 Flight 5 (Ongoing) Protection 5 (Ongoing) Damage 5 Healing 5 Adaptation: Space Communication

Descriptor: HA SRP Strike Lander "Daedalus"

This comfortably sized assault shuttle is outfitted with everything Caustic needs for his private lab to produce and experiment with any type of research he needs. It can hold a maximum crew of six, but that's when things feel a bit crowded. Additionally, there are well stocked medical facilities and a small armory that holds the weapons Caustic has gathered. It is equipped with a Shield system and two twin plasma disintegrators as armaments. It is also spaceworthy and can land and fly in an atmosphere.

Coin to be deducted: 6000

STAFF EDIT: Listed price for these things does not fit. for the modifications made, you would need roughly 11,200 coin. this is partly due to the fact speed does not evenly transfer into flight ranks - those are differing effects.
 
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Dr. McNinja

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BASE LEVEL 3 [x3]
PRICE: 1000

THE DOCTOR WILL SEE YOU NOW
Healing [200] Rank 5
- Affects Multiple [+50]
- Ongoing [+100]
- Activation [-50]
- Concentration [-50]
- Limited (Must be near someone with the Medical skill) [-50]
PRICE: 1000

ADT PROVIDES THE BEST SECURITY
Sense (Sight, Hearing, Thermal Sight, Magical Energy) [400] Rank 2
- Ongoing [+100]
- Removable [-50]
PRICE: 1700

GORILLA WITH ROCKET LAUNCHER PROTOCOL
Damage [100] Rank 3
- Affects Multiple [+50]
- Ranged [+50]
- Triggered (when the sensors detect a threat) [+50]
- Chaotic [-50]
- Indiscriminate [-50]

Protection [100] Rank 5
- Ongoing [+100]
- Triggered (when the sensors detect a threat) [+50]
PRICE: 1700

SO MANY TRAPS
Damage [100] Rank 6
- Affects Multiple [+50]
- Triggered [+50]
- Limited (only in the basement area) [-50]
- Finite (once each) [-50]
- Indiscriminate [-50]

Debuff [100] Rank 6
- Affects Multiple [+50]
- Triggered [+50]
- Limited (only in the basement area) [-50]
- Finite (once each) [-50]
- Indiscriminate [-50]
PRICE: 600

TOTAL PRICE: (1000 + 1000 + 1700 + 1700 + 600) * 3 = 18000

Descriptor: Dr. McNinja's clinic. The ground level is the clinic itself, which at first glance looks like the typical physician's private clinic that you'd find in America. The entrance leads to a reception area, and you can enter through another door into the main hallway. This hallway gives access to Doc's office, the examination room, or the surgery room. At the end of the hallway is a locked door that is clearly labelled as "DO NOT ENTER". This door leads to the basement, and the living quarters of Dr. McNinja and Peter Pellbrook. They seldom let people into these quarters, because they are rather intensely trapped (more below).

THE DOCTOR WILL SEE YOU NOW
Dr. McNinja's clinic is, as all clinics should be, absolutely stocked with medicine at any given moment. But there are also a lot of experimental medicines and even surgical machines that no sane doctor would keep. Thankfully, Dr. McNinja is no sane doctor. Anyone who knows how to practice medicine will be able to identify the various drugs and supplies in the clinic, and be able to use them within 10 seconds. After these 10 seconds, the patients experience rapid and ongoing healing, as long as the medical practitioner continues to focus on their treatment. Why are these seemingly normal medicines so potent, and why do even the most complicated of procedures take only 10 seconds when used in Doc's clinic? Because Dr. McNinja is very good at his job.

ADT PROVIDES THE BEST SECURITY
What? They do, and Doc has a lot of enemies. Dr. McNinja's clinic is lined inside and out with advanced security cameras, which are able to detect anything within 200 feet of the clinic as long as the subject can be seen, heard, has a detectable heat signature, or uses any magic. The cameras even record all this data and keep it for Doc to search through later. Seriously, these are some awesome cameras. Unfortunately, they're not THAT well hidden, and you could probably easily break one and create a blind spot for yourself.

GORILLA + ROCKET LAUNCHER PROTOCOL
Judy may not be here in body, but she is here in spirit. Her security protocols in Doc's old clinic were to, at the first sign of danger, bring down the ballistic-proof window shutters and take out her rocket launcher. After Gorilla + Rocket Launcher > Most Ninjas. While Doc no longer has the gorilla, he does have the ballistic-proof window shutters, and just so many rocket launchers. When the sensors detect a threat, the walls and windows are all immediately lined with dense metal shutters that are meant to withstand tanks. Furthermore, the clinic immediately fires many of automated rockets at the threat. This is an automated system (though it can be shut off by someone with the proper clearance inside the clinic), and they're... you know, rockets. They explode, damaging anyone within 15 feet of where the rocket lands. Also, these launchers aren't the best at aiming... Look, if you get hurt and you weren't supposed to, Doc will compensate you with some free treatment.

SO MANY TRAPS
As described above, the living quarters of Dr. McNinja are so extremely trapped. All of the chairs have spring-loaded poison darts, every picture frame has a hidden laser that triggers a heavy-duty net gun which can render you immobile until you break free, and 70% of the floorboards have a shotgun below them. Doc is a paranoid man. If you are accompanied by Dr. McNinja, Peter Pellbrook, or anyone who knows where the traps are, you are completely safe as long as you follow their exact instructions (or they turn the traps off, but that's less likely). If you don't follow their instructions... well, they warned you. If you are uninvited, then rest assured each trap needs to be manually reset - once you spring a trap in an area, it will not be able to hurt you again. Don't rest too assured though - these traps hurt a lot, and some of the floorboards are actually hiding flamethrowers.

Coin to be deducted: 18000

STAFF EDIT: This looks mostly fine, however, I'd like you to write down how long it takes for these traps to be manually reset (or note if it's just - not going to happen during a fight's timeframe), and you've actually overcharged yourself on "ADT provides the best security" by about 800 coin.
 
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Dr. McNinja

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BASE LEVEL 3 [x3]
PRICE: 1000

THE DOCTOR WILL SEE YOU NOW
Healing [200] Rank 5
- Affects Multiple [+50]
- Ongoing [+100]
- Activation [-50]
- Concentration [-50]
- Limited (Must be near someone with the Medical skill) [-50]
PRICE: 1000

ADT PROVIDES THE BEST SECURITY
Sense (Sight, Hearing, Thermal Sight, Magical Energy) [400] Rank 2
- Ongoing [+100]
- Removable [-50]
PRICE: 900

GORILLA WITH ROCKET LAUNCHER PROTOCOL
Damage [100] Rank 3
- Affects Multiple [+50]
- Ranged [+50]
- Triggered (when the sensors detect a threat) [+50]
- Chaotic [-50]
- Indiscriminate [-50]

Protection [100] Rank 5
- Ongoing [+100]
- Triggered (when the sensors detect a threat) [+50]
PRICE: 1700

SO MANY TRAPS
Damage [100] Rank 6
- Affects Multiple [+50]
- Triggered [+50]
- Limited (only in the basement area) [-50]
- Finite (once each) [-50]
- Indiscriminate [-50]

Debuff [100] Rank 6
- Affects Multiple [+50]
- Triggered [+50]
- Limited (only in the basement area) [-50]
- Finite (once each) [-50]
- Indiscriminate [-50]
PRICE: 600

TOTAL PRICE: (1000 + 1000 + 900 + 1700 + 600) * 3 = 15600

Descriptor: Dr. McNinja's clinic. The ground level is the clinic itself, which at first glance looks like the typical physician's private clinic that you'd find in America. The entrance leads to a reception area, and you can enter through another door into the main hallway. This hallway gives access to Doc's office, the examination room, or the surgery room. At the end of the hallway is a locked door that is clearly labelled as "DO NOT ENTER". This door leads to the basement, and the living quarters of Dr. McNinja and Peter Pellbrook. They seldom let people into these quarters, because they are rather intensely trapped (more below).

THE DOCTOR WILL SEE YOU NOW
Dr. McNinja's clinic is, as all clinics should be, absolutely stocked with medicine at any given moment. But there are also a lot of experimental medicines and even surgical machines that no sane doctor would keep. Thankfully, Dr. McNinja is no sane doctor. Anyone who knows how to practice medicine will be able to identify the various drugs and supplies in the clinic, and be able to use them within 10 seconds. After these 10 seconds, the patients experience rapid and ongoing healing, as long as the medical practitioner continues to focus on their treatment. Why are these seemingly normal medicines so potent, and why do even the most complicated of procedures take only 10 seconds when used in Doc's clinic? Because Dr. McNinja is very good at his job.

ADT PROVIDES THE BEST SECURITY
What? They do, and Doc has a lot of enemies. Dr. McNinja's clinic is lined inside and out with advanced security cameras, which are able to detect anything within 200 feet of the clinic as long as the subject can be seen, heard, has a detectable heat signature, or uses any magic. The cameras even record all this data and keep it for Doc to search through later. Seriously, these are some awesome cameras. Unfortunately, they're not THAT well hidden, and you could probably easily break one and create a blind spot for yourself.

GORILLA + ROCKET LAUNCHER PROTOCOL
Judy may not be here in body, but she is here in spirit. Her security protocols in Doc's old clinic were to, at the first sign of danger, bring down the ballistic-proof window shutters and take out her rocket launcher. After Gorilla + Rocket Launcher > Most Ninjas. While Doc no longer has the gorilla, he does have the ballistic-proof window shutters, and just so many rocket launchers. When the sensors detect a threat, the walls and windows are all immediately lined with dense metal shutters that are meant to withstand tanks. Furthermore, the clinic immediately fires many of automated rockets at the threat. This is an automated system (though it can be shut off by someone with the proper clearance inside the clinic), and they're... you know, rockets. They explode, damaging anyone within 15 feet of where the rocket lands. Also, these launchers aren't the best at aiming... Look, if you get hurt and you weren't supposed to, Doc will compensate you with some free treatment.

SO MANY TRAPS
As described above, the living quarters of Dr. McNinja are so extremely trapped. All of the chairs have spring-loaded poison darts, every picture frame has a hidden laser that triggers a heavy-duty net gun which can render you immobile until you break free, and 70% of the floorboards have a shotgun below them. Doc is a paranoid man. If you are accompanied by Dr. McNinja, Peter Pellbrook, or anyone who knows where the traps are, you are completely safe as long as you follow their exact instructions (or they turn the traps off, but that's less likely). If you don't follow their instructions... well, they warned you. If you are uninvited, then rest assured each trap needs to be manually reset - once you spring a trap in an area, it will not be able to hurt you again, until Doc (or Peter) resets them out-of-combat. Don't rest too assured though - these traps hurt a lot, and some of the floorboards are actually hiding flamethrowers.

Coin to be deducted: 15600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Mad Maggie

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Base

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Going from Size 1 Speed 2 1400
to
Size 3 Flight 5 (Ongoing) Protection 5 (Ongoing) Damage 5 Healing 5 Adaptation: Space Communication

Descriptor: HA SRP Strike Lander "Daedalus"

This comfortably sized assault shuttle is outfitted with everything Caustic needs for his private lab to produce and experiment with any type of research he needs. It can hold a maximum crew of six, but that's when things feel a bit crowded. Additionally, there are well stocked medical facilities and a small armory that holds the weapons Caustic has gathered. It is equipped with a Shield system and two twin plasma disintegrators as armaments. It is also spaceworthy and can land and fly in an atmosphere.

Coin to be deducted: 6000

STAFF EDIT: Listed price for these things does not fit. for the modifications made, you would need roughly 11,200 coin. this is partly due to the fact speed does not evenly transfer into flight ranks - those are differing effects.
Can I get a breakdown on what is wrong? I didn't really understand the difference between size modifiers and it's kind of confusing.

STAFF EDIT: The size modifier for a base is tacked on to every ability for the base, not just the base cost. For what you have here, it would be:

Mobile Base (1000)
Flight 5 (1000)
-- Ongoing (+500)
Protection 5 (500)
-- Ongoing (+500)
Damage 5 (500)
Healing 5 (1000)
Adaptation: Space (300)
Communication (100)

The total cost of this would be 5400.

Multiplying this by your new Base Size Multiplier (x3 in this case) you get a final cost of 16,200.

Subtracting the eligible cost of your previous base to account for the upgrade, you would only need 15,200 for this upgrade.

Some additional notes for this: with the way Base rules work, you technically don't need the Adaptation effect, since bases already provide whatever you need to survive in whatever environments they were built for. Additionally, for your damage effect, keep in mind it will need the Ranged modifier unless you plan to have the plasma disintegrators be melee (or very, very close) range.
 

Solomon Grundy

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Can I get a breakdown on what is wrong? I didn't really understand the difference between size modifiers and it's kind of confusing.

STAFF EDIT: The size modifier for a base is tacked on to every ability for the base, not just the base cost. For what you have here, it would be:

Mobile Base (1000)
Flight 5 (1000)
-- Ongoing (+500)
Protection 5 (500)
-- Ongoing (+500)
Damage 5 (500)
Healing 5 (1000)
Adaptation: Space (300)
Communication (100)

The total cost of this would be 5400.

Multiplying this by your new Base Size Multiplier (x3 in this case) you get a final cost of 16,200.

Subtracting the eligible cost of your previous base to account for the upgrade, you would only need 15,200 for this upgrade.

Some additional notes for this: with the way Base rules work, you technically don't need the Adaptation effect, since bases already provide whatever you need to survive in whatever environments they were built for. Additionally, for your damage effect, keep in mind it will need the Ranged modifier unless you plan to have the plasma disintegrators be melee (or very, very close) range.
Thank you!
 

Hela

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Azgard (1000)

Protection VIII (800)
--Ongoing (+800)
--Limited [Fly Overs] (-400)
—> 1200

Words - Walls. Made of metal and brick on the perimeter and underside of the complex and act to keep out unruly pirates and underwater scum. They are sturdy but people can also fly over them if they're that desperate.

Damage VIII (800)
–Ranged (+800)
—> 1600

Words -> Azgard is defended by fucking big-ass laser cannons that shoot at things that get to close. These cannons are both built into the walls but also present on various towers within the city-castle itself.

Sub Total - 3800
Multiplier: 8

Descriptor: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/719557665541455902/912013887677825095/IMG_9592.jpg

Castle complex floating on ocean.

Coin to be deducted: 30400 (To be deducted from Hela and Rommy)

STAFF EDIT: It does look good and there's no errors, however, as formidable doesn't help with base facilities, your rank Cap is actually VIII and not IX, so this cannot be purchased at this rank for the moment.

Hela Edit: Adjusted the numbers.

STAFF EDIT AGAIN: Approved!
 
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Azula

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Minion

Effects
Burning Legion (900) -- x100 (x7 modifier)
Damage 3 (300)
Protection 3 (300)

Descriptor: Soldiers from Dante’s Abyss that sought out the fire princess after the competition ended because of their fierce loyalty, or like-minded compatriots they picked up along their pilgrimage to find Azula. Armed with swords/axes/maces, financed through Syntech; wearing purple Syntech armbands, but otherwise decidedly evil-looking armor. Made up of many different species, including humans, orcs, and other types of monstrous-looking, intimidating folks.

horde_of_the_burning_legion_by_koz23_d6czbfq-fullview.jpg

Coin to be deducted: w/ 25% Persuasive Discount & 10% Syntech Discount = 4,095

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Burning Legion: Ranged (1200) -- x100 (x7 modifier)
Damage 3 (300)
-- Ranged (300)
Protection 3 (300)

Descriptor: Soldiers from Dante’s Abyss that sought out the fire princess after the competition ended because of their fierce loyalty, or like-minded compatriots they picked up along their pilgrimage to find Azula. Armed with flamethrowers, financed through Syntech; wearing purple Syntech armbands, but otherwise decidedly evil-looking armor. Made up of many different species, including humans, orcs, and other types of monstrous-looking, intimidating folks.

greg-luzniak-10-blackhand-flamethrower-final.jpg

Coin to be deducted: w/ 25% Persuasive Discount & 10% Syntech Discount = 5460 Coin

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Mad Maggie

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Effects
Mobile Base (1000)
Flight 3 (600)
-- Ongoing (+300)
Protection 3 (300)
-- Ongoing (+300)
Healing 3 (600)
Communication (100)
Total 3200
x Size Modifier (x3) = 9600
Minus Cost of previous base - 1400

Descriptor: Hammond Aeronautics Sustainable Research Shuttle - "Tonegawa"

This comfortably sized research shuttle is outfitted with everything Caustic needs for his private lab to produce and experiment with any type of sample he needs. It can hold a maximum crew of six, but that's when things feel a bit crowded. There is a spartan kitchen that will support a full crew complement for several months. Additionally, there are well stocked medical facilities and a small armory that holds the weapons Caustic has gathered. It is equipped with a regenerative shield system, can land and fly in an atmosphere, and is space worthy.

Coin to be deducted: 8200

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Victor Wolfe

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Base

Effects
Base:
The Dreadnought:
Mobile Base Size 8: 1000 coins
X8 modifier for 8000

Afloraltite Ship core
Flight 3 - 600 coins
Ongoing - +300 Coins
Activation 2 - -300 coins


Cordite hull
Protection 4 - 400 coins
+ongoing - +400 coin -
Weakness: Mental effects - -100 coin


Humility-class Galvanic Accelerator Cannons

Damage 4 - 400
Area of Effect rank 1 - +200
Ranged - +200



Subspace sensors
sense (extrasensory) Rank 1 - 100 coins


100 coin total
Viewscreen technology
Communications rank 1 - 100 coin


Lamia class Tractor Beam:

Tractor beam - move object 3 - 300
Ranged modifier - +150
Ongoing modifier - +300
Activation 2 - -300
Concentration - -150



1000+600+700+600+100+100+300=3,400 coins
x8=27,200 coins
Victors Enterprising Affinity - x0.75=20’400 coins To come from Ridley and Lilith (Up to them how they split it)

Descriptor: Base:
The Dreadnought:

A refurbished capital ship that once was known as the Dragon’s Gaze, the Space Pirate Frigate known as the Dreadnought now serves as Ridley and his organization’s main base of operations.



Afloraltite Ship core
Ridley’s ship has a central core that generates power by utilizing the power of nuclear fusion, stabilized by Afloraltite. It gives the ship power and allows for the plasma engines to move, but requires time to warm-up, requiring the warship to power up it’s engines before lifting off into the air from dock. This allows for the plasma engines to fire and move the ship through the sky at speed, and allows for FTL jumps between worlds, though more precise jumps in-system are impossible with just the basic core and engine systems. (flavor for transit between worlds).


Cordite hull
The Dreadnought is very banged up from previous engagements and in the process of being properly restored, but the reinforced Cordite hull remains durable enough to weather gunfire with ease and stand up to the basic rigors of space travels, even if time has weakened it somewhat.

This is only protective against physical effects, however, and mental attacks against the mind and soul go straight through the metal like they would any other mundane material, unbothered by the ship’s hull. While the ship itself has no mind, it does leave the sentients aboard vulnerable to such attacks.


Humility-class Galvanic Accelerator Cannons
An older model based on when the ship was first created, the galvanic accelerator cannon fires off short bursts of crimson energy partially powered by the ship’s power core and partially powered by a solar battery that ensures they can operate for several hours without strain. The blasts fired by these cannons melt targets on impact with plasma fire and originate from forty different hard-points on the ship, allowing them to blanket areas in blaster fire from rapid turret blasts.


Subspace sensors
Subspace sensors allow for the ship to have a basic view of the world around itself, though these require tuning to allow for a more in-depth sweep past very small distances.

Viewscreen technology
Ridley’s ship has several vid-screens spread through it that allow for advanced audio and, if permitted by the other caller, visual data, allowing for the pirate to communicate with others using such a device from far away. These screens work under a variety of frequencies and can catch anything from eldritch echoes, to Radio signals, to high speed photonic comms systems quite easily.

Lamia class Tractor Beam
A tractor beam Ridley can use from a distance to obtain the fruits of his labor, the midas class tractor beam is able to snag anything from ships to treasure and pull them to his ship, or simply hold them in place with raw force. As the system is still being repaired from damage, the tractor beam is slow to turn on and requires warm-up time. As a result of using the ship’s core directly for power, any similarly powered systems can also not be utilized while the tractor beam is being used, outside of its function powering the engines.

Coin to be deducted: 20’400

STAFF EDIT:

I would recommend reformatting this ability to make future purchases much easier. The current formatting is pretty inconsistent and the Total Cost of each aspect of the ship is not listed, which seems to have resulted in miscalculations. I have prepared a reformatted sample of your Base below, which you should feel free to use while making the necessary adjustments.

Base: The Dreadnought
Base Cost: 1000 Coin
Base Size: x8

Afloraltite Ship Core
Flight 3 - 600 Coin
Ongoing - +300 Coin
Activation 2 - -300 Coin
Total Cost: 600 Coin

Cordite Hull
Protection 4 - 400 Coin
Ongoing - +400 Coin
Weakness: Mental effects - -100 Coin
Total Cost: 700 Coin

Humility-class Galvanic Accelerator Cannons
Damage 4 - 400 Coin
Area of Effect Rank 1 - +200 Coin
Ranged - +200 Coin
Total Cost: 800 Coin

Subspace Sensors
Sense (extrasensory) Rank 1 - 100 Coin
Total Cost: 100 Coin

Viewscreen Technology
Communications Rank 1 - 100 Coin
Total Cost: 100 Coin

Lamia class Tractor Beam
Move Object 3 - 300 Coin
Ranged - +150 Coin
Ongoing - +300 Coin
Activation 2 - -300 Coin
Concentration - -150 Coin
Total Cost: 300 Coin

Final Cost (Needs to be Revised): 1000+600+700+600+100+100+300=3,400 coins
x8=27,200 coins
Victors Enterprising Affinity - x0.75=20’400 coins To come from Ridley and Lilith (Up to them how they split it)


Descriptor:

The Dreadnought
A refurbished capital ship that once was known as the Dragon’s Gaze, the Space Pirate Frigate known as the Dreadnought now serves as Ridley and his organization’s main base of operations.

Afloraltite Ship Core
Ridley’s ship has a central core that generates power by utilizing the power of nuclear fusion, stabilized by Afloraltite. It gives the ship power and allows for the plasma engines to move, but requires time to warm-up, requiring the warship to power up it’s engines before lifting off into the air from dock. This allows for the plasma engines to fire and move the ship through the sky at speed, and allows for FTL jumps between worlds, though more precise jumps in-system are impossible with just the basic core and engine systems. (flavor for transit between worlds).

Cordite Hull
The Dreadnought is very banged up from previous engagements and in the process of being properly restored, but the reinforced Cordite hull remains durable enough to weather gunfire with ease and stand up to the basic rigors of space travels, even if time has weakened it somewhat.

This is only protective against physical effects, however, and mental attacks against the mind and soul go straight through the metal like they would any other mundane material, unbothered by the ship’s hull. While the ship itself has no mind, it does leave the sentients aboard vulnerable to such attacks.

Humility-class Galvanic Accelerator Cannons
An older model based on when the ship was first created, the galvanic accelerator cannon fires off short bursts of crimson energy partially powered by the ship’s power core and partially powered by a solar battery that ensures they can operate for several hours without strain. The blasts fired by these cannons melt targets on impact with plasma fire and originate from forty different hard-points on the ship, allowing them to blanket areas in blaster fire from rapid turret blasts.

Subspace Sensors
Subspace sensors allow for the ship to have a basic view of the world around itself, though these require tuning to allow for a more in-depth sweep past very small distances.

Viewscreen Technology
Ridley’s ship has several vid-screens spread through it that allow for advanced audio and, if permitted by the other caller, visual data, allowing for the pirate to communicate with others using such a device from far away. These screens work under a variety of frequencies and can catch anything from eldritch echoes, to Radio signals, to high speed photonic comms systems quite easily.

Lamia class Tractor Beam
A tractor beam Ridley can use from a distance to obtain the fruits of his labor, the midas class tractor beam is able to snag anything from ships to treasure and pull them to his ship, or simply hold them in place with raw force. As the system is still being repaired from damage, the tractor beam is slow to turn on and requires warm-up time. As a result of using the ship’s core directly for power, any similarly powered systems can also not be utilized while the tractor beam is being used, outside of its function powering the engines.

Other Issues:

For "Humility-class Galvanic Accelerator Cannons" -- You seem to have miscalculated this as 600 Coin rather than 800 Coin in your final calculations. Also, there is no 'Area of Effect' modifier-- please reword this as "Affects Multiple."

For "Subspace Sensors" -- This will require the Ongoing modifier if it is always active.

Please resubmit once you have recalculated the total cost and figured out who is paying for what. I want specific Coin amounts from each character involved in this purchase. Otherwise, I cannot deduct the correct Coin amounts.
 

Anders Nazret

Arcadian Swordmage
Level 4
Joined
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Messages
69
Awards
1
Essence
€11,565
Coin
₡8,057
Tokens
5
World
Erde Nona
Profile
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Faction
Heralds of the True Heir
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin?
Base

Effects
Size 4 Mobile Base
Multiplier x 4

Mobile Base (1000)
Positive Modifiers:
Negative Modifiers: Limited - Cannot move (-50)

Treasury (5000)

Descriptor: Once a resplendent example of Arcadia’s thaumaturgical and technological progress the golem foundry is but a shadow of its former glory. Many of the foundry’s functions are currently in disrepair, including its mobile capabilities. However, basic creature comforts such as the kitchen and bunk areas are functional. The entire facility is quite large, but the current usable area is not much larger than a modest sailing ship. Anders intends to restore the facility to use in his crusade against Arcadia.

Coin to be deducted: 7850

EDIT - I forgot to calculate my Enterprising affinity into the equation the true cost should be 5887.50

STAFF EDIT: you appear to have calculated your cost for size 3, Not size 4. Base cost would be 8800, reduced by 25% via enterprising to 6600.
 
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Anders Nazret

Arcadian Swordmage
Level 4
Joined
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Messages
69
Awards
1
Essence
€11,565
Coin
₡8,057
Tokens
5
World
Erde Nona
Profile
Click Here
Faction
Heralds of the True Heir
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin?
Base

Effects
Size 4 Mobile Base
Multiplier x 4

Mobile Base (1000)
Positive Modifiers:
Negative Modifiers: Limited - Cannot move (-50)

Treasury (5000)

Descriptor: Once a resplendent example of Arcadia’s thaumaturgical and technological progress the golem foundry is but a shadow of its former glory. Many of the foundry’s functions are currently in disrepair, including its mobile capabilities. However, basic creature comforts such as the kitchen and bunk areas are functional. The entire facility is quite large, but the current usable area is not much larger than a modest sailing ship. Anders intends to restore the facility to use in his crusade against Arcadia.

Coin to be deducted: 7850

EDIT - I forgot to calculate my Enterprising affinity into the equation the true cost should be 5887.50

STAFF EDIT: you appear to have calculated your cost for size 3, Not size 4. Base cost would be 8800, reduced by 25% via enterprising to 6600.

Ah, yeah I meant to do Size 4 so 6600 is good

Staff edit: Approved!
 
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Amalia Eckern

Level 2
Joined
Sep 14, 2021
Messages
22
Awards
1
Essence
€5,361
Coin
₡300
Tokens
0
World
Opealon
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin?
Base

Effects
Amalia’s Home (1400)

Base (600)
Size 2

Cozy Little Home (800)
Healing 1 (200)
Positive Modifiers: Ongoing (100)
Negative Modifiers: Activation - 30 Seconds (-100)

Protection 1 (100)
Positive Modifiers: Ongoing (100)
Negative Modifiers

Descriptor: Amalia’s home on the Desamperado Wharf is not much larger than a studio apartment, but thanks to Juno’s additions it is quite a snug little place. Before her touch it was not much more than a haphazard collection of cobbled together driftwood. While its foundation is still cobbled together with driftwood it is now teaming with plant life that acts both as decoration and structural supports. Networks of vines and roots form a sort of shell that protects it from both the elements and outside intruders. Inside you can find all the amenities one would expect of a standard apartment. Various flowers fill the air with comforting aromas and medicinal herbs can be harvested for use in teas, salves, and other tinctures. Those who rest here and take advantage of the healing herbs find themselves recovering at slightly faster rates, although the healing effect takes some time before it fully kicks in. All-in-all Amalia’s home is her little slice of comfort on the stormy seas of Opealon.

Coin to be deducted: 1400

STAFF EDIT:

Any Base purchase has a default added cost of 1000 Coin. Your base's Effects added together amount to 400 Coin. This creates a Total Cost of 1400 Coin, but only if you don't consider the size of the base involved.

Since you have chosen to create a Size 2 base, you would multiply 1400 Coin by 2. This creates a total cost of 2800 Coin! Please resubmit with this cost in mind.
 

Amalia Eckern

Level 2
Joined
Sep 14, 2021
Messages
22
Awards
1
Essence
€5,361
Coin
₡300
Tokens
0
World
Opealon
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin? Base

Effects
Amalia’s Home (2800)

Base (2000)
Size 2

Cozy Little Home (800)
Healing 1 (200)
Positive Modifiers: Ongoing (100)
Negative Modifiers: Activation - 30 Seconds (-100)

Protection 1 (100)
Positive Modifiers: Ongoing (100)
Negative Modifiers

Descriptor: Amalia’s home on the Desamperado Wharf is not much larger than a studio apartment, but thanks to Juno’s additions it is quite a snug little place. Before her touch it was not much more than a haphazard collection of cobbled together driftwood. While its foundation is still cobbled together with driftwood it is now teaming with plant life that acts both as decoration and structural supports. Networks of vines and roots form a sort of shell that protects it from both the elements and outside intruders. Inside you can find all the amenities one would expect of a standard apartment. Various flowers fill the air with comforting aromas and medicinal herbs can be harvested for use in teas, salves, and other tinctures. Those who rest here and take advantage of the healing herbs find themselves recovering at slightly faster rates, although the healing effect takes some time before it fully kicks in. All-in-all Amalia’s home is her little slice of comfort on the stormy seas of Opealon.

Coin to be deducted: 2800

STAFF EDIT: Approved. Coin deducted!
 

Mad Maggie

Kia Maia, Kia Manawanui!
Level 2
Joined
Jul 4, 2020
Messages
80
Essence
€5,044
Coin
₡1,500
Tokens
15
World
Opealon
Profile
Click Here
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable

Effects
Death Protection

Descriptor: Apex Games Emergency Medical Teleporter

This small device detects when a user would be "dead" and instantly transports their body into a preset advanced medical stasis pod to recover.

Coin to be deducted: 2000

STAFF EDIT: Approved! Coin deducted!
 

Bridget Remington

From Hell’s Heart
Joined
Aug 1, 2021
Messages
6
Essence
€9,445
Coin
₡1,500
Tokens
0
World
Opealon
Profile
Click Here
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin?
Consumable

Effects
Noble Phantasm: Ahab’s Razor -- Of Fire and Blood


Damage Rank 10 (1000C)
—Indirect (+1000C)
—Ranged (+500C)
—Activation (-500C)
—Chaotic (-500C)
—Concentration (-500C)
—Side Effect (Drains magical energy, -500C)

Descriptor: The signature weapon of Bridget’s former servant Avenger. It is a vile, bloody red harpoon that through being forged with a cursed fire, soaking it in heathen blood, and a blessing of the Devil, has reached a level of mysticism only seen in the Age of Gods. The blade is soaked in burned blood, and upon calling its true name will burn with hellfire itself. The actual summoning of the weapon takes roughly 10 seconds. It has the ability to breach most magical or physical defenses.

Bearing symbolic resemblance to Occam’s Razor, and as a result is constantly seeking any hypothetical path for an attack or throw. Instead of Bridget controlling where the harpoon is thrown, it will seek out the “simplest” path towards the intended target. Be it by ricochet or a direct hit, it will always seek out it’s victim, much like a heat-seeking missile. But, due to the nature of the weapon and it’s previous wielder, it may completely miss Bridget’s intended targets and instead target those who she bears great hatred for, provided that they are within her line of sight. Taking aim with this harpoon is a rather involved process and will leave Bridget open to attack. In addition, due to being but a mage, simply holding this weapon greatly drains Bridget’s magical reserves, limiting her ability to defend herself for a while after it is thrown.

Coin to be deducted: 500C - 125C (25% Exceptional Affinity Discount) = 375C

STAFF EDIT: We do not allow affinities such as 'Exceptional' to drop costs below 50/rank. The lowest price for the consumable would be 500C. Otherwise APPROVED and coin deducted at the proper price!
 

Ezrihel

Charismatic Duelist
Joined
May 12, 2019
Messages
38
Awards
3
Essence
€12,757
Coin
₡500
Tokens
25
World
Inverxe
Profile
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Faction
Spirits of Vengeance
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin? Consumable

Effects
Revival (2000)

Descriptor: A highly skilled assassin is a pain to lose and have to spend time and resources retraining, and as such Ezrihel has made it a point to provide Sari with a 'back-up' in the case that he perishes during the events of the death game. It's the least he can do, after what happened to Rue in Nausicaa.

Coin to be deducted: 2000

STAFF EDIT: Approved and Coin deducted!
 

Masahir N'air

[M] Arbiter of Love
Staff member
Joined
Aug 3, 2018
Messages
103
Awards
6
Essence
€25,828
Coin
₡23,763
Tokens
65
World
Mesa Roja
Profile
Click Here
Faction
The Thieves Guild |&| Babylonia
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin?
Base

Effects
Donation to Gilgamesh’s Treasury in Uruk

Descriptor: Deposit 3,000 of my hard earned coins into MY KING's Uruk Treasury pls, he is broke and needs the funding of his merchant class!

Coin to be deducted: 3000

STAFF EDIT: Coin deducted and transferred to @Gilgamesh
 

Cho

Avatar-in-Training
Level 3
Joined
Sep 30, 2018
Messages
60
Awards
4
Essence
€8,649
Coin
₡11,550
Tokens
10
World
Mesa Roja
Profile
Click Here
Faction
Babylonia
Username:

What are you purchasing with your Coin?
Base

Effects
Paragon-Class Light Freighter
Mobile Base (1000)
Flight 3 (600)
-- Ongoing (300)
Protection 3 (300)
-- Ongoing (300)
Communication (100)
Healing 3 (600)

Descriptor: This Light Freighter is outfitted with all the amenities for comfortable travel. It can hold and support a maximum crew of five for near a month when fully stocked with food and medical supplies. It comes equipped with long range comms and a shielding system. It can fly and land in both an atmosphere and in space.

Coin to be deducted: 9600

STAFF EDIT: Approved and Coin deducted. Be sure to mark down that this is a Size 3 Base when you add it to your profile!
 
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