Ability Approval I

[Malloki Tuwile]

User name: Malloki

Name of Ability?
Eye for Power

Ability Effects:
Sense: Power Level (600) Rank 6
--Indirect (+600)
--Side Effect (-300) (Urge to fight stronger opponents)
--Weakness (-150) (Only targets of equal strength or stronger)

Descriptor: Malloki’s adventure into DA was brief, but insightful. The power to locate others is immensely useful. Eye for Power is an ability that is inspired by the Global Positioning System that Malloki received from his delve into Dante’s Abyss.

Malloki can sense all beings of power around him up to one thousand feet, no matter the obstacles in between him and the target and gauge their power relative to his own. Those of lesser overall might than Malloki do not appear on his senses, while those far superior will appear like a bright light so to speak.

There is a drawback… Targets of high power tend to draw Malloki’s attention and invoke a bloodlust. Just a nudge from ol’ Dolloki.


(I think Weakness works better than Limited for this situation.)

Essence Cost: 749

STAFF EDIT: Your Side Effect, upon closer review, isn’t really much of a side effect for a character who actively seeks out combat. Think of something which would truly negatively impact your character.

Your Weakness, on the other hand IS now an example of the Limited modifier. A Weakness is something like “This ability does NOT work on people taller than Malloki.” An example of Limited is more like “ONLY works on people taller than Malloki.”

 

[Malloki Tuwile]

User name: Malloki

Name of Ability?
Eye for Power

Ability Effects:
Sense: Power Level (500) Rank 6
--Indirect (+500)
--Limited (-300) (Only targets of equal strength or stronger)

Descriptor: Malloki’s adventure into DA was brief, but insightful. The power to locate others is immensely useful. Eye for Power is an ability that is inspired by the Global Positioning System that Malloki received from his delve into Dante’s Abyss.

Malloki can sense all beings of power around him up to one thousand feet, no matter the obstacles in between him and the target and gauge their power relative to his own. Those of lesser overall might than Malloki do not appear on his senses, while those far superior will appear like a bright light so to speak.

(Should be last try.)

Essence Cost: 750

STAFF EDIT: Did you mean to list the rank of Sense: Power Level as Rank 5 instead of Rank 6? That would also make Limited -250E, not -300E. If so, you're approved.

 

[Pecan]

User name: Pecan

Name of Ability?
Revenant's Breath

Ability Effects:
Adaptation: Immune to Pain (200)
Negative Modifiers: Activation 30 Seconds (-100)

Adaptation: Nonbiological Anatomy (300)
Negative Modifiers: Activation 30 Seconds (-100)

Endurance 5 (500)
Negative Modifiers: Activation 30 Seconds (-500)

Descriptor: Appearing as a small nebuliser attached to an oxygen mask, Revenant’s Breath naturally synthesizes a cocktail of chemicals using nothing more than air, sun, and water. Stolen from a military lab Pecan holds this mask as one of his prized possessions. Holding the mask tight over one’s airways and twisting the nebuliser activates the Revenant’s Breath. A rush of cool vapor fills the user’s lungs and is absorbed into their body. Once the mask is remove soft blue vapor escapes from all available airways and, with a strong enough hit, from the ears and eyes as well. After about thirty seconds all pain receptors in the user’s body are silenced. Essentially the user is turned into a living zombie, capable of shrugging off mortal wounds as if they were nothing. This effect lasts for a few hours.

Essence Cost: 550

STAFF EDIT: approved!

 

[Pecan]

User name: Pecan

Name of Ability?
Zap Hand

Ability Effects:
Damaged 5 - 500
Negative Modifiers: Side Effect (-250)

Debuff 5 - 500
Negative Modifiers: Side Effect (-250)

Descriptor: Implanted just beneath the skin on Pecan’s left hand are several high-power electrodes. Using these electrodes Pecan can grab an opponent and send electricity into an opponent’s body. Once grabbed the target is locked in place as the electricity forces their muscles to contract. For the next ten seconds they are subject to a devastating wave of electricity. In an effort to make his zap hand more destructive Pecan removed most of the internal inhibitors which means that he suffers a portion of the shock.

Essence Cost: 500

STAFF EDIT: Approved

 

[The Future Warrior]

User name: Ashe-0

Name of Ability?
Ocular Bombardment System

Ability Effects:
Damage 6 (600)
-- Ranged (300)
-- Affects Multiple 2 (300)
-- Activation (-300)
-- Indiscriminate (-300)
-- Side Effect (Obscured Vision) (-300)

Descriptor: Intended as the heavy, long-range weapon of Ashe's model line, requiring careful use but dealing devastating damage at extreme range The activation is signaled by the concentric rings in her eye lighting up as the energy generators 'spin up' and prepare for firing, one by one from the outside in; upon reaching the center, the 'iris' there glows white and the weapon system is ready for firing. While active and ready for use, however, the system telescopes Ashe's vision as if peering through the scope of a rifle, to allow for greater precision and accuracy with an included laser sight and targeting grid, but narrowing her field of view immensely.

Once sufficiently powered up and active, the weapon can be fired at one shot every five seconds, producing a beam of blue-hued light and energy which lances out to its target point with precision accuracy, with an effective range of several miles before losing cohesion, and explodes in a huge blast of light, heat and concussive force.

When its usage has run its course, or it must be deactivated, the process requires a full five-second cooldown during which visual receptors are turned off completely and fully rebooted, to clear away any lingering targeting functions.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: approved!

 

[The Future Warrior]

User name: Ashe-0

Name of Ability?
War Machine

Ability Effects:
Endurance 5 (500)
Agility 3 (600

Descriptor: Ashe is a war machine, intended for long operations without maintenance or recharging. As such, she can endure extended, intense activity far better than most could hope to.

Her advanced construction and nature also affords great coordination, dexterity and coordination which greatly belies what is normally expected for something her size, and which allows her to fully utilize her additional limbs with just as much precision and focus as all her others.

Essence Cost: 1100

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Shinku]

User name: Shinku

Name of Ability?
Veil of Shadows

Ability Effects:
Concealment (Sight, Hearing and Smell)
Ongoing

Descriptor: Shinku covers himself in darkness, concealing his appearance, any sound he can make along with his scent to be undetected by sentient beings around him.

Essence Cost: 400

 

[Roy Mustang]

User name: Roy Mustang

Name of Ability?
Riza Hawkeye

Ability Effects:
Summoning

Descriptor: Riza Hawkeye is Mustang’s loyal and trusted assistant, both his bodyguard and most reliable subordinate. She is an expert marksman and overall model soldier, competent and dependable to follow her orders quickly and effectively.

Riza Hawkeye is a Loyal Sharpshooter. Hawkeye and Mustang have known one another for years and are both veterans of the Ishvalan conflict. She firmly believes that Mustang’s goals are correct and is committed to seeing him achieve them. As Mustang’s Adjutant, Hawkeye is both his personal assistant and effective second-in-command.
Known during the Ishvalan Conflict as “The Hawk’s Eye”, Riza is a peerless marksman. She is a veteran soldier with years of experience and is versatile with all kinds of firearms, from rifles to dual-wielded pistols. Though she does not fight hand-to-hand, Hawkeye has enough training and experience to defend herself from close-range fighters.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Roy Mustang]

User name: Roy Mustang

Name of Ability?
The Hawk's Eye

Ability Effects:
Endurance (100) rank 1
Agility (200) rank 1
Sense (sight and hearing) (200) rank 1
--ongoing (100)

Descriptor: Riza has trained extensively with the military and possess both quick reflexes and exceptional awareness. This makes her an indispensable bodyguard for Roy, and a dangerous warrior in her own right.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Roy Mustang]

User name: Roy Mustang

Name of Ability?
Outstanding Lieutenant

Ability Effects:
Athletics (Soldier) (250) rank 5
Social (Adjutant) (250) rank 5
Rsearch/Investigation (100) rank 2

Descriptor: Regarded by many as a “model soldier” Riza is extremely competent at her job. As an Adjutant, Riza is both mustang’s personal assistant and bodyguard, in addition to a field commander for his team. She is also very collected and quick-witted, able to keep her cool and notice key details even in high-stress situations.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Victor Wolfe]

User name: Victor Wolfe

Name of Ability?
Fear Aura

Ability Effects:
Debuff 4(Agility) 400
- affects multiple 2 (400)
-ongoing (400)
-weakness (-100) only works on things that can feel fear.

Descriptor: A 40f aura that Victor can target within at will to make anyone he wishes have their fear reactions triggered, often causing shaking and terror, the most basic level of his fear aura ability being assaulted by the negative energy makes the average person struggle to maintain their motor skills and reflexes.

Essence Cost: 1100

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Solomon Grundy]

User name: Okuyasu Nijimura

Name of Ability?
Surprise!

Ability Effects:
Damage 2 - 200
Debuff 2 [Knockdown] - 200
Limited: Must be Preceded by SE - T/P (-100)

Descriptor: Okuyasu takes advantage of the disorienting effect of being teleported by The Hand to land a knockout punch. After using Space Erasure (Teleport/Pull) on a foe, Okuyasu winds up and aims a mighty haymaker square at their jaw or jaw-analogue. This is usually enough to knock even the most aggressive foe off balance or even onto their ass.

Okuyasu can't just use this move on someone at-will, he has to have teleported them to him first to take advantage of their momentary confusion to land the hit. Additionally, if the opponent can see The Hand, they can try to prepare against the sneak attack by coordinating its movement with the teleport.

Special: This move can specifically be enhanced with Focus use, and turns into a multi hit combo where Okuyasu continually repeats the teleport/punch move up to four times. This could also have the effect of dizzying an enemy.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[V]

User name: Samus Aran

Name of Ability?
Plasma Whip

Ability Effects:
Damage 4 (400)
-- Removable (-200)
-- Ranged (200)
Move Object 2 (200)
-- Removable (-100)
-- Ranged (100)

Descriptor: Originating from a pistol, the plasma whip is energized by depressing the trigger. At its base, it is an 8-foot long 'cord' of crackling and sparking electric-yellow energy, which can be wielded to lash and slash at anything and everything much like a normal whip could, and its nature as a plasma-based weapon gives it considerable striking power.

An alternate usage involves the whip adhering to objects, either by wrapping and tangling around them or simply latching hold with its energy-based nature, allowing Samus to either pull such objects to herself, reel herself in toward them, or use them as an anchor point to swing from.

The weapon seems to respond to the will of its wielder, and can vary its overall length to anything from half its base size for confined space, up to four times its base size, for striking at or latching onto more distant targets.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Fenix]

User name: Suwako Moriya

Name of Ability?
Transcend Self

Ability Effects:
Fusion Rank 1 - 500 essence
Modifier (ongoing) - +100 essence

Descriptor: Suwako splits and combines her divine self with another being, bathing them in the inherent formless light and energy of a God, and creating a combined self as her Immortal concept mixes with another who has this potential.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Fenix]

User name: Suwako Moriya

Name of Ability?
The Curse of Hunger

Ability Effects:
Damage 3 - 300 essence
Damage 1 (ongoing) - 100 essence
Ongoing modifier: +100 essence
Ranged modifier - +250 Essence
Limited Modifier - may only be used a single time on open, bleeding wounds caused directly by Suwako- -250 essence.

Descriptor: Suwako concentrates her spite and wrath on an opponents open wound and, after a second or two, brings forth the smallest avatar of impurity - Centipedes burst forth from the open, bleeding mass of flesh. The centipedes don't really hang around or take orders, but they're prone to biting their unwilling Fathers on the way out, leaving poison that festers in the bloodstream for continued minor damage before leaving. These centipedes must be brought out of a considerable wound in an opponent's flesh - A hole needing to be made that's at least the width of a quarter and the depth of a thumb-tack - and the ability can only be focused once per seperate wound.

Essence Cost: 500

STAFF EDIT: Could you more clearly split the Effects and their respective modifiers up? Also, is the Ranged Modifier meant to apply to the Damage 3 Effect? If so, it would be 150E. The same goes for Limited: -150E.

 

[Shinku]

User name: Shinku

Name of Ability?
Shadow Gem

Ability Effects:
Agility Rank 5 [1000] -> Removable [250]

Descriptor: Shinku wears a ring forged by the blacksmiths of their clan, imbued with a dark gem, extracted deep beneath their mines. The gem itself, when polished, gives its owner superhuman agility.

Essence Cost: 750

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Fenix]

User name: Suwako Moriya

Name of Ability?
The Curse of Hunger

Ability Effects:
Ability Effects:
Damage 3 - 300 essence
Ranged modifier - +150 Essence
Limited Modifier - may only be used a single time on open, bleeding wounds caused directly by Suwako | -150 essence.
Damage 1 (ongoing) - 100 essence
Ongoing modifier: +100 essence


Descriptor: Descriptor: Suwako concentrates her spite and wrath on an opponents open wound and, after a second or two, brings forth the smallest avatar of impurity - Centipedes burst forth from the open, bleeding mass of flesh. The centipedes don't really hang around or take orders, but they're prone to biting their unwilling Fathers on the way out, leaving poison that festers in the bloodstream for continued minor damage before leaving. These centipedes must be brought out of a considerable wound in an opponent's flesh - A hole needing to be made that's at least the width of a quarter and the depth of a thumb-tack - and the ability can only be utilized once per seperate wound.

Essence Cost: 500

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Fenix]

User name: Suwako Moriya

Name of Ability?
Communicator

Ability Effects:
Communication (100)
-Removable (-50)

Descriptor: A device able to send text as well as voiced messages much like a smartphone. Suwako's model is bright green and has a frog motif to it.

Essence Cost: 50

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Gilgamesh]

User name: Gilgamesh

Name of Ability?
Cell Phone

Ability Effects:
Communication (100)
--Limited (Must have met the person) (-50)

Descriptor: This is a standard smartphone (Syntech Brand, of course) that can make and receive calls. However, he needs to get people's numbers before he can call anyone.

Essence Cost: 50

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Gilgamesh]

User name: Gilgamesh

Name of Ability?
Ea

Ability Effects:
Damage III (300)
--Removable (-150)
Debuff II (Cannot be Mimicked) (200)

Descriptor: Gilgamesh summons Ea, the blade of creation, from his vault. It is a black, cylindrical sword covered in red runes. It is made of three rotating parts. Even though it doesn't look much like a sword, it can be used quite effectively.

It is one of a kind, and Gilgamesh cannot resummon it if it is removed from his hand. Additionally, this item is enigmatic and very hard to mimic.

Essence Cost: 350