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Name of Ability?
Communicator 3 (300)

Ability Effects:
Three communicators so the group can communicate during the quest.

Descriptor: Takes the form as a video screen communicator with sound.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: This would require the Ongoing and Transferable modifiers since you are letting others use them for an extended period.
 

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Name of Ability?
Fang of Abyss

Ability Effects:
Damage Rank 5 [500] -> Removable [-250]
Debuff Rank 5 [500] - > Ongoing [500], Removable [-250]

Descriptor: Shinku wields a black steel 60cm katana that he got from his father as a gift while still a child. The katana is able to inflict poison to whoever is cut by its blade. With the help of a merchant, his blade was forged to become sharper, dealing an even more slashing damage as its old form. Similarly, the sword's power has been enhanced, producing a more lethal poison.

Note: Ability is an upgrade of Shadow Tooth.

This ability's Essence Cost - 1000
Old ability's cost - 400

Difference - 600

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Communicator 3 (300)

Ability Effects:
Communication 3( 300)
Ongoing 3 (300)
Transferable (150)

(750E)

Descriptor: Takes the form of communicators with video and sound to talk to each other during the quest

Essence Cost: 750

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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User name: Ridley

Name of Ability?
Dragon Wings

Ability Effects:
Damage 2

Descriptor: Ridley's wings are surprisingly tough, strong, and taper off into two vicious spikes at their tip that can be used to cause damage to opponents with a slam or Stab.

Essence Cost: 200

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Engineering (robotics)

Ability Effects:
Master skill - Rank 6

Descriptor: Ridley is a master mechanic and is known for creating his own robotic servants to support his armies, once having even made a mechanical replica of himself. He has a commanding understanding of the field

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Asspull Trap

Ability Effects:
Damage 3 (+300)
Ranged (+150)

Descriptor: When the ability has been activated. Something like an unstable environment will turn against the enemy whether Vitan intended it or not. A loose billboard? Falls on the enemy. Wobbly 2nd floor? Breaks down and the enemy falls through it. The enemy tries to smash Vitan through glass? The glass somehow stays somewhat intact. You get the picture.

It's pretty inconsistent depending on chance.

Essence Cost: 450


STAFF EDIT: With the way this is written up it would need some....other modifiers and effects to work appropriately. Move Object with Ranged Chaotic at a minimum, Affects Multiple if it can hit or effect any kind of significant area at once, Variable Creation if things can just appear in places they shouldn't be, etc etc. This would of course raise its cost by quite a bit, but given how versatile and wide-reaching it is in scope, and thus the huge reach of potential narrative options it provides, it's somewhat necessary.
 
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Name of Ability?
Light Jak// Light Regeneration

Ability Effects:
Level 5 Healing (500 Essence)

Descriptor: Light Jak can heal wounds on Jak that enemies cause. Light eco absorbs into Jak’s body, allowing minor to major wounds to heal from touching himself with Light eco.

Essence Cost: 500


STAFF EDIT: This looks fine, but Healing costs 200 per rank so this would cost 1,000 essence total and not 500.
 
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User name: Izuku Midoriya

Name of Ability?
xPhone 11

Ability Effects:
Communication Rank 1 (100E)
-- Removable (-50E)

Descriptor: Izuku has the latest and greatest model of Wondertainment Toy Company's xPhone, which he recieved from UA and... uh... forgot to return when he was expelled. On the back, it has a sticker of All Might and a piece of tape with his 'hero name' inscribed on it. This is a very good thing, as he's prone to losing it or dropping it places, as evidenced by the slightly cracked screen. Get a case, Midoriya!

Essence Cost: 50

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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User name: Vitan Armerstrannie

Name of Ability?
Asspull Trap

Ability Effects:
Move Object 4 (+400)
Ranged (+200)
Chaotic (-200)

Descriptor: When the ability has been activated. Something like an unstable environment will turn against the enemy whether Vitan intended it or not. A loose billboard? Falls on the enemy. Wobbly 2nd floor? Breaks down and the enemy falls through it. The enemy tries to smash Vitan through glass? The glass somehow stays somewhat intact. You get the picture.

It's pretty inconsistent depending on chance.

Essence Cost: 400

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Charisma A+

Ability Effects:
Endurance V (500)
--Affects Multiple (250)
--Finite (-250)
--Activation (-250)
Agility III (600)
--Affects Multiple (150)
--Finite (-150)
--Activation (-150)

Descriptor: Gilgamesh has a natural charisma to him and thus can make powerful speeches to his allies. He can make a short speech to invigorate his companions to continue on fighting for him with increased endurance and agility. He needs about 15 seconds to complete the speech and multiple speeches don't help his companions further.

Essence Cost: 700

STAFF EDIT: Approved.
 

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Name of Ability?
Mar's armor

Ability Effects:
Bracers
Greves
Shoulder Plates
Breast Plate

Descriptor: Ongoing 3 (300) + Protection (500)

Essence Cost: 800

STAFF EDIT: It looks like you have your Descriptor and Effects confused on your app. Switch them around on the form and you’re fine.

Plus, Ongoing is a modifier that is applied to Protection, meaning that since both Protection and Ongoing cost 100E per Rank, they would cost the same.

You would write your ability Effects as:

Protection Rank 3 (300E)
— Ongoing (+300E)

Total cost would then be 600E. You could also opt to make Protection Rank 5 (500E), so then Ongoing would also cost 500E. Total cost would then be 1000E. It’s up to you, though.
 

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Name of Ability?
Light Jak// Light Regeneration

Ability Effects:
Level 5 Healing (1000 Essence)

Descriptor: Light Jak can heal wounds on Jak that enemies cause. Light eco absorbs into Jak’s body, allowing minor to major wounds to heal from touching himself with Light eco.

Essence Cost: 1000

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Ki Blasts

Ability Effects:
Damage 2 (200)
+ Ranged (100)

Descriptor: Bardock charges balls of small ki in his hand and fires it at his target.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Blutz Waves (False Moon)

Ability Effects:
Illusion 2 (200) X2 =400
Ranged (50)
Affects Multiple (50)

Descriptor: As creator of the Blutz waves, Bardock creates a illusion of a false moon in the skies. Any and All Saiyans in said area transform to Oozuru at the sight of the full moon.

Essence Cost: 500

Staff Edit: A few things. So I'm not sure how you would do this since Illusion 2 only covers 2 feet. Is the idea that you would make a small fake moon in the sky that could potentially look like a real one? Also, what do you mean by transform to Oozuru? That isn't described in the move. Ranged would also be 100 since its (50x2). Lastly, you don't need affects multiple since it can automatically be seen by whoever is near it.
 
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Psystrike

Ability Effects:
Damage (100) Rank 4

Descriptor: Psystrike normally appears as an “odd psychic wave” to attack the target physically, and known as Mewtwo’s signature move which it learns at level 100. The particular Mewtwo that arrived in Multerra instead manifests the ability as a comically oversized spoon about 150cm long, summoned into its hands at a moment’s notice. Why a spoon? Because it's considered an expression of psychic powers in the Pokémon world due to the Abra/Kadabra/Alakazam evolutionary line, which Mewtwo drew its inspiration from.

Though it is made of hyper-compressed psychic energy, it has the weight, toughness and other properties of steel, and attacks a target physically as any blunt metal weapon would, with the added advantage that the handle is just as good at laying on the hurt as the bowl.

In combat, Mewtwo can summon and dismiss the spoon at a moment’s notice to free up its hands or re-summon it if it’s lost.

Essence Cost: 400

Staff Edit: Approved.
 
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User name: Pecan

Name of Ability?
Bad Breath

Ability Effects:
Concealment-Scent (100) Concealment-Sight (100)
Negative Modifiers: Limited-Only affects the gas itself (-100)

Damage 5 (500)
Positive Modifiers: Affects Multiple 3 (750),
Negative Modifiers: Limited-Only when exposed to high heat (-250), Weakness-Does not work in windy areas (-125), Indiscriminate (-250)

Descriptor: A series of thin tubes were implanted into Pecan’s throat by the gang leader Diamond. These tubes connect to small canisters in Pecan’s lungs. When Pecan inhales deeply and forcibly these canisters synthesize a colorless, odorless, and flammable gas. Upon exhale this gas is sprayed out of Pecan's mouth through the tubes with a soft hissing noise. Using this Pecan is able to fill a large area with this gas in only a few moments. The synthesized gas quickly breaks down and becomes inert, especially in windy areas, but if exposed to a fire source it will ignite and create a devastating explosion.

Essence Cost: 725

Staff Edit: Since you are concealing the gas itself, it does not qualify the 'limited' modifier. Everything else seems okay.
 
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Name of Ability?
Heavy Handed

Ability Effects:
Damage 2 (200)

Descriptor: The bones in Pecan's knuckles have been coated in a synthetic metal as part of Diamond's augments. While his hands appear no different than anyone else's his punches hit much harder.

Essence Cost: 200

Staff Edit: Approved!
 
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Name of Ability?
Air Force

Ability Effects:
Damage 2 (200E)
-- Ranged (+100E)

Descriptor: Izuku can use One for All to literally punch "bullets" of air towards enemies by swiping with his fists or feet. These have the power to cause significant knockback and take an enemy's breath away, but usually aren't powerful enough to kill.

Essence Cost: 300

Staff Edit: Approved
 
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User name: Roy Mustang

Name of Ability?
FN Browning M1910 handgun

Ability Effects:
Damage (300) rank 3
-- Ranged (150)
-- Transferable (150)
-- Finite (7-round clip) (-150)
-- Removable
300 + 150 + 150 – 150 – 150 = 300

Descriptor: A standard issue handgun, equivalent to technology from the early 1900s. It has seven rounds per clip, and decent stopping power for its size, though it can jam sometimes if the cartridge does not properly eject from the chamber. Hawkeye typically carries two extra clips for this gun on her person.

Essence Cost: 300

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