Username: Izaneus Phortea
What are you purchasing with your Coin? Base
Effects
Size: 4 (4000)
Protection: 5 (2000)
Modifiers: Ongoing (2000) Finite (-1000) Removable (-1000)
Total: 2000
Damage: 5 (2000)
Modifiers: (1000) Indirect (2000) Indiscriminate (-1000) Affects multiple 5 (5000)
Total: 9000
Descriptor: A mansion sized wizardly shelter. Complete with a tower of magistery.
This base has been equipped with enchantments, and arcane defenses to protect its contents, as well as its inhabitents.
This includes massive arcane blasts and streams of magic that detonate on impact, causing gigantic explosions of magic energy reaching 100ft in all directions, this beam only targets hostile enemies. However, should a friendly be in the range of its blast, they will take the same damage as others.
It also sports a magical barrier covering the entirety of the tower, and it's mansion. It can be broken. But only of several hits of the same intensity or higher.
Lower attacks need many more attempts to break through this potent shield.
It is powered by a magical crystal deep within the mansion. Should this crystal be taken, the shield will fall.
The mansion itself, sports a comfortable abode, for any would-be scholar or mage. With a sizeable library
(Hope this fixes most of the issues. Sorry. I was at work)
Coin to be deducted: 11,000
STAFF EDIT: As everything is written here, the Damage effect is missing Ranged to let it actually attack at range. Beyond that, remember that Affects Multiple grants a 20-foot total area per rank, so in this instance it would only be a 50-foot radius, rather than a 100-foot radius blast.
That said, with those corrections, this would come up to a total of 16,000 coin, as the base cost for the Base itself is included in the total. It's technically 'approved', whenever you save up enough coin to afford it all. Or you're welcome to refigure things down to a lower cost so you can afford it now.