Ability Approval I

[Don Isaac]

Username: Rhodri Garvier

Name of Ability?
OtPv. 9 30-inch Machete

Ability Effects:
Damage (4) - 400
Removable - (200)

Descriptor: The Outil Polyvalent Mark 9 is a solid piece of stamped steel with a single edge mass-produced within the industrial compounds of the Ebon Forest. Two and a half feet in length, the machete, while capable of serving brush-clearing duties to ensure the passage of convoys, is most often put to use in direct combat. Every Lupar serving within the Army of the Ebon Forest has been extensively drilled in its use, hacking and carving apart training dummies until the notched-eared veterans are satisfied. Whether used to carve underbrush or flesh, the OtPv. 9 is an ever-reliable tool, and simple enough to be wielded by a soldier in the depths of their bloodlust.

Essence Cost: 200

STAFF EDIT: APPROVED!

 

[Roy Mustang]

Username: Roy Mustang

Name of Ability?
Jean Havoc

Ability Effects:
Summoning (300)

Descriptor: Jean Havoc is a member of Mustang's hand-picked core team of officers. After Mustang and Hawkeye, Havoc's natural charisma tends to place him at the head of the team's operations.

Jean is a Casual Gunner. Something of a hopeless romantic with a laid-back attitude, Havoc is easily underestimated at first glance as someone who does not have much to contribute beyond following orders. While he will be the first to label himself as "not the sharpest", he is selling himself short, as he is a competent lieutenant and a reliably attentive officer.
Havoc is a competent soldier, able to wield both pistol and shotgun with skill. His weaponry tends to be short to mid-range firearms, placing him within range of retaliation, but he has enough combat experience to be able to hold off an attacker until he can get a shot off. Havoc is comfortable both organizing troops in the heat of battle and following orders quickly and efficiently.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Roy Mustang]

Username: Roy Mustang

Name of Ability?
Trench Gun

Ability Effects:
Damage 4 (400)
-- Ranged (200)
--Transferable (200)
-- Removable (-200)
-- Finite (6 shell magazine) (-200)
Debuff (Knockback/Stagger) 3 (300)
-- Ranged (150)
--Transferable (150)
-- Removable (-150)
-- Finite (6 shell magazine) (-150)

Descriptor: A Break action shotgun, specialized for close ranged encounters with limited maneuverability. The shotgun shells have a spray, making it most effective within twenty meters, though not impossible to hit with beyond that range. A target catching the brunt of a shot will likely find themselves staggered or even lifted off their feet by the impact. The Magazine holds six shells, with Havoc generally keeping two spare magazines.

Essence Cost: 700

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Eszter]

Username: Eszter

Name of Ability?
Hard-headed

Ability Effects:
Damage - Rank 5 (500)

Protection - Rank 5 (500)
- Ongoing (0, Specialized)
- Limited (Just her head) (-250)

Descriptor: Though Eszter’s horns are positioned on her head in such a way that goring an opponent is rather impractical, underestimating her ability to headbutt could lead to a quick and slightly embarrassing demise. The draconic magic in Eszter’s blood has gifted her with ultra-dense neck muscles, an extremely tough skull, and a spongy layer in the braincase, making her head an effective close-combat bludgeoning weapon at little risk to herself. This also has the added bonus of turning Eszter’s head into a rather durable target, turning it, somewhat surprisingly, into the least effective place to hit her.

Essence Cost: 750

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Mad Maggie]

Username: Dr. Caustic

Name of Ability?
M600 Light Machine Gun "Spitfire"

Ability Effects:
Damage (100) 4 - 400
-Ranged (+50)

Descriptor: The M600 Spitfire Mk3 is a light machine gun manufactured by Siwhan Industries. Descended from the Frontier War-era Mk1 and Mk2, the design and operation of the Mk3 seems to be a mix of both of its ancestors, retaining the gas operated, rotating bolt locking mechanism of the Mk1 but using the light composite frame of the Mk2. Improvements to initial recoil and accuracy makes it a good weapon for sustained suppressive fire. It is belt fed and can suppress an impressive area by itself for a man portable SAW. Caustic uses the tactically designed frame to ensure it cannot be yanked from his grasp, as well as the weight of the gun itself which he can heft easily.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Sans]

Username: Sans

Name of Ability?
Blue Mode

Ability Effects:
Debuff Effect – Rank 3: (+300)
Ranged Modifier: Sans can turn somebody “blue” even if they are some distance away. (+300)
Ongoing Modifier: The debuff lasts indefinitely while Sans has his target in Blue Mode. It only ends when Sans turns it off or his concentration is broken. (+300)
Weakness: Cannot work on objects or mechanical beings. It only works on living beings. (-100)

Move Object Effect – Rank 4: (+400)
Ranged Modifier: Sans can telekinetically move a target around even if they are some distance away. (+200)
Concentration: Requires Sans to concentrate in order to fling people around, and thus cannot use other moves while doing this. (-200)
Side Effect: Very tiring on Sans’ constitution. Repeated usages will wear him out and make him sluggish. (-200)

Descriptor: Sans has the ability to manipulate the “form” of another living being via the coloration of it. In layman’s terms, he can heavily inconvenience people by turning them into a dark shade of blue.

With a flick of his wrist, he is able to instantly turn a living being within his line of sight into a dark shade of blue. Immediately upon this happening, “Blue Mode” is in effect, and its effects are apparent. The target made “blue” is significantly slowed down, rendered less agile, like the weight of gravity is crushing them, and more or less rendering all forms of movement (jumping, dodging, running, etc.) much more difficult. Blue Mode thus lasts until Sans turns it off again, which he can also do with a mere flick of his wrist. However, this “Blue Mode” debuff does not work on objects or mechanical beings, as it can only be used on the “living.”

While a target is “blue,” Sans is also capable of flinging them around with telekinesis, even if they are some distance away from him. The damage this inflicts is by and large non-existent, but the speed in which one is flung about while under its effects are massive and happen instantly. It merely takes yet another flick of Sans’ wrist to start moving his target around like a puppet. He can lift up people of incredible sizes and weight like they are nothing. Doing so, however, requires concentration on his part, and he cannot use other moves while flinging people around. The telekinesis, too, is very tiring on Sans’ constitution, and repeated or extended usage of it will eventually render him too sluggish to fight effectively.

Essence Cost: 1000

STAFF EDIT: In a rare moment for move approval, you've actually managed to use weakness in place of limited here and underpowered your move. Weaknesses are for more specific issues, while Limited should affect the usefulness of a move in half or more relevant situations. Thus, the ability to only move living beings with your telekinesis, rather an any mechanical beings or any mechanical objects, both far outnumbering living beings in almost any situation, qualifies for the 'limited' modifier, not the weakness modifier, and would reduce cost further, as a result. Weakness in this case, additionally, would have been -75 essence, not -100. additionally, if you can only use the 'move object' on living beings, it would also qualify for the 'limited' modifier. additionally, a short descriptor next to the debuff effect, to pair with your longer description, would be helpful.

 

[Sans]

Username: Sans

Name of Ability?
Blue Mode (Edited)

Ability Effects:
Debuff Effect – Rank 6: (+600) A target within Sans’ line of sight is, with a flick of his wrist, instantly turned a dark shade of blue. Once made blue, the target feels significantly heavier and has a much more difficult time jumping, dodging, flying, or just moving around in general. It lasts until Sans turns it off.
Ranged Modifier: Sans can turn somebody “blue” even if they are some distance away. (+300)
Ongoing Modifier: The debuff lasts indefinitely while Sans has his target in Blue Mode. It only ends when Sans turns it off or his concentration is broken. (+600)
Limited: Cannot work on objects or mechanical beings. It only works on living beings. (-300)
Cost: 600

Move Object Effect – Rank 6: (+600)
Ranged Modifier: Sans can telekinetically move a target around even if they are some distance away. (+300)
Concentration: Requires Sans to concentrate in order to fling people around, and thus cannot use other moves while doing this. (-300)
Side Effect: Very tiring on Sans’ constitution. Repeated usages will wear him out and make him sluggish. (-300)
Limited: Sans cannot use telekinesis on objects or mechanical beings, since he cannot use Blue Mode on them at all. It must be a living being. (-300)
Cost: 50

Descriptor: Sans has the ability to manipulate the “form” of another living being via the coloration of it. In layman’s terms, he can heavily inconvenience people by turning them into a dark shade of blue.

With a flick of his wrist, he is able to instantly turn a living being within his line of sight into a dark shade of blue. Immediately upon this happening, “Blue Mode” is in effect, and its effects are apparent. The target made “blue” is significantly slowed down, rendered less agile, like the weight of gravity is crushing them, and more or less rendering all forms of movement (jumping, dodging, running, etc.) much more difficult. Blue Mode thus lasts until Sans turns it off again, which he can also do with a mere flick of his wrist. However, this “Blue Mode” debuff does not work on objects or mechanical beings, as it can only be used on the “living.”

While a target is “blue,” Sans is also capable of flinging them around with telekinesis, even if they are some distance away from him. The damage this inflicts is by and large non-existent, but the speed in which one is flung about while under its effects are massive and happen instantly. It merely takes yet another flick of Sans’ wrist to start moving his target around like a puppet. He can lift up people of incredible sizes and weight like they are nothing. Doing so, however, requires concentration on his part, and he cannot use other moves while flinging people around. The telekinesis, too, is very tiring on Sans’ constitution, and repeated or extended usage of it will eventually render him too sluggish to fight effectively.

Essence Cost: 650

STAFF EDIT: See below.

 

[Sans]

Username: Sans

Name of Ability?
Blue Mode (Edited(Edited))

Ability Effects:
Debuff Effect – Rank 6: (+600). A target within Sans’ line of sight is, with a flick of his wrist, instantly turned a dark shade of blue. Once made blue, the target feels significantly heavier and has a much more difficult time jumping, dodging, flying, or just moving around in general. It lasts until Sans turns it off.
Ranged Modifier: Sans can turn somebody “blue” even if they are some distance away. (+300)
Ongoing Modifier: The debuff lasts indefinitely while Sans has his target in Blue Mode. It only ends when Sans turns it off or his concentration is broken. (+600)
Limited: Cannot work on objects or mechanical beings. It only works on living beings. (-300)
Cost: 1200

Move Object Effect – Rank 6: (+600). Once Blue Mode has been activated upon a target, Sans can, with a flick of his wrist, fling them about telekinetically, with great speed and near instantly.
Ranged Modifier: Sans can telekinetically move a target around even if they are some distance away. (+300)
Concentration: Requires Sans to concentrate in order to fling people around, and thus cannot use other moves while doing this. (-300)
Side Effect: Very tiring on Sans’ constitution. Repeated usages will wear him out and make him sluggish. (-300)
Limited: Sans cannot use telekinesis on objects or mechanical beings, since he cannot use Blue Mode on them at all. It must be a living being. (-300)
Cost: 300

Descriptor: Sans has the ability to manipulate the “form” of another living being via the coloration of it. In layman’s terms, he can heavily inconvenience people by turning them into a dark shade of blue.

With a flick of his wrist, he is able to instantly turn a living being within his line of sight into a dark shade of blue. Immediately upon this happening, “Blue Mode” is in effect, and its effects are apparent. The target made “blue” is significantly slowed down, rendered less agile, like the weight of gravity is crushing them, and more or less rendering all forms of movement (jumping, dodging, running, etc.) much more difficult. Blue Mode thus lasts until Sans turns it off again, which he can also do with a mere flick of his wrist. However, this “Blue Mode” debuff does not work on objects or mechanical beings, as it can only be used on the “living.”

While a target is “blue,” Sans is also capable of flinging them around with telekinesis, even if they are some distance away from him. The damage this inflicts is by and large non-existent, but the speed in which one is flung about while under its effects are massive and happen instantly. It merely takes yet another flick of Sans’ wrist to start moving his target around like a puppet. He can lift up people of incredible sizes and weight like they are nothing. Doing so, however, requires concentration on his part, and he cannot use other moves while flinging people around. The telekinesis, too, is very tiring on Sans’ constitution, and repeated or extended usage of it will eventually render him too sluggish to fight effectively.

Essence Cost: 1500

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[John Connor]

Username: John Connor

Name of Ability?
Erupting God/Burning Finger Shika Tenkayoken

Ability Effects:
Limited: Only in Hyper Form (-50)
Damage 7 (700)
- Ranged (350)
- Affects Multiple 4 (1400)
- Indiscriminate (-350)
- Concentration (-350)

Descriptor: NPC Attack for Domon Kasshu Gundam- Hyper/Super Mode for Domon Kasshu

Essence Cost: 1850

STAFF EDIT: Keep in mind that you do not need to get abilities approved for NPCs. If you are entering this NPC in Dante's Abyss, the ability just needs Alex's approval once you submit your join form.

 

[Beatrix III]

Username: Beatrix III

Name of Ability?
Sanguine Succor (Ability Upgrade)

Ability Effects:
Agility Rank 5 (1000E)
Edurance Rank 5 (500E)
Finite (-250E) - Becomes Less Effective as Damage Piles Up
Side Effect (-250E) - Fatigue builds heavily as more damage is healed
Healing Rank 6 (1200)
Ongoing (600E)

Descriptor: Beatrix is afflicted with Blood Magic from an unknown source. It comes with benefits. She has a huge pool of stamina to draw from and she is very nimble on her feet. Her body is extremely versatile and capable of taking more way damage than your average person. Beatrix can stay in the fight as long as she wants or until she sustains enough damage that it literally becomes impossible for the magic to keep her going and she falls unconscious. As she takes damage and her blood magic rushes to heal it, it takes its toll on her stamina. The more injury she sustains the more and more fatigue she gets and her magic's ability to keep her alive becomes less and less effective until it runs out and stops completely resulting in either her death or loss of consciousness.

Essence Cost: 2600

STAFF EDIT: Approved, but the total cost of this ability would be 3,050E. Keep in mind that the cost of Effects cannot drop below 50E per rank of Effect, so your Endurance Effect still adds 250E to the cost. 1000 + 250 + 1200 + 600 = 3,050E.

 

[King Ghidorah]

Username: King Ghidorah

Name of Ability?
Like Thunder (renaming and improving existing ability Lightning reflexes)

Ability Effects:
Agility Rank 3 (600) ---> Agility Rank 5 (1000)
Speed Rank 3 (600) ----> Speed Rank 5 (1000)
-Ongoing (0, specialized)
Flight Rank 1 (200) ----> Flight Rank 2 (400)
total cost 1400 -----> Total cost 2400

Descriptor: King Ghidorah has existed in a variety of shapes over the eons - Monster Zero, Kaiser Ghidorah, and Monster X among others. As a result of his great strength and vast experience adapting to and moving around in different bodies, Ghidorah is shockingly quick in both action and reaction, and possesses superb physical coordination, no matter what form he may find himself in. Furthermore, even in the absence of his wings, his tremendously powerful legs enable him to make great leaps through the air.

Essence Cost: 1000

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[King Ghidorah]

Username: King Ghidorah

Name of Ability?
Glorious Golden Body (adding to existing ability)

Ability Effects:
Protection Rank 7 (700)
-Ongoing (0, Specialized))
Endurance Rank 6 (600) -----------> Endurance Rank 7 (700)
Healing Rank 5 (1000) ------------> Healing Rank 7 (1400)
-Ongoing (0, Specialized)
Adaptation: Extreme Heat (100)
Adaptation: Extreme Cold (100)
Adaptation: Toxic environments (50)
Adaptation: Radioactive environments (50)
Adaptation: Falling (100)
Adaptation: Starvation and Thirst (50)
Adaptation: Need to Breathe (200)
Adaptions: Need for Sleep (50)
________________________ -------------------------> Adaptation: Space (300)
_________________________ ---------------------------> Adaptation: Disease (50)
3000 total cost ----------------------------> 3850 total cost

Descriptor: unchanged

Essence Cost: 850

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[King Ghidorah]

Username: King Ghidorah

Name of Ability?
Millenium Dragon (Upgrading On Golden Wings and Cosmic Firebolts sub-abilities) and Earthshaking Might (upgrading)

Ability Effects:
Note: Picked up Formidable affinity. Rank Cap +1!

On Golden Wings
Flight Rank 7 (1400) => Flight Rank 8 (1600)
-ongoing (0, specialized)
-limited (Millennium Dragon only) (-350) => (-400)
total (1050) => 1200

Cosmic Firebolts
Damage Rank 7 (700) => Damage Rank 8 (800)
-limited (only in Millennium Dragon form) (-350) => (-400)
-ranged (350) => (400)
-Affects multiple Rank 4 (200 x 7=1400) => Affects multiple Rank 4 (200 x 8=1600)
-Indiscriminate (-350) => (-400)
total 1750 => 2000

Earthshaking Might
Damage Rank 7 (700) => Damage Rank 8 (800)
Move Object Rank 7 (700) => Move Object Rank 8 (800)
1400 total cost => 1600

Descriptor: no changes

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[King Ghidorah]

Username: King Ghidorah

Name of Ability?
Glorious Golden Body (upgrading existing ability)

Ability Effects:
Protection Rank 7 (700) => Protection Rank 8 (800)
-Ongoing (0, Specialized))
Endurance Rank 7 (700) => Endurance Rank 8 (800)
Healing Rank 7 (1400) => Healing 8 (1600)
-Ongoing (0, Specialized)
Adaptation: Extreme Heat (100)
Adaptation: Extreme Cold (100)
Adaptation: Toxic environments (50)
Adaptation: Radioactive environments (50)
Adaptation: Falling (100)
Adaptation: Starvation and Thirst (50)
Adaptation: Need to Breathe (200)
Adaptions: Need for Sleep (50)
Adaptation: Space (300)
Adaptation: Disease (50)
3850 total cost => 4250 total cost

Descriptor: no change

Essence Cost: 400

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Orion]

Username: Orion

Name of Ability?
Splitting one Ability into four

Ability Effects:
Current Ability:

Physical Training
Damage 6 (600)
Protection 6 (600)
+ Ongoing (0)
Move Object 6 (600)
+ Ongoing (0)
Endurance 4 (400)
Adaptation: Falling (100)
Total: 2300
Description: Orion’s Saiyan heritage and ki mastery have bolstered his body well beyond normal limits.

Proposed Abilities:

Melee Power
Damage 6 (600)
Total: 600
Description: Orion's basic melee attacks overwhelm most adversaries defenses.

Physical Strength
Move Object 6 (600)
+ Ongoing (0)
Total: 600
Description: Lifting heavy objects is part and parcel of Orion's power.

Saiyan Resilience
Protection 6 (600)
+ Ongoing (0)
Total: 600
Description: A combination of his armour and ki infusion heighten the punishment Orion can receive without major injury.

Physical Conditioning
Endurance 4 (400)
Adaptation: Falling (100)
Total: 500
Description: Outrageously fit and impervious to long walks off short piers.

Descriptor: Splitting one pre-existing Ability into four, more appropriate Abilities. No essence changes.

Essence Cost: 1

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Ganondorf]

Username: Kolith

Name of Ability?
Beast Spirit Roar

Ability Effects:
Debuff 6: Daze/Shock (600)
+Affects Multiple 1 (300)
-Limited: Only while channeling a Beast Spirit (300)

Descriptor: While harnessing an Elder Beast’s power, Kolith can release a roar, screech or cry that disorientates anyone within a twenty foot radius momentarily – long enough to disrupt a hold, falter a close range attack, or frighten anything close by.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[Ganondorf]

Username: Kolith

Name of Ability?
Beast Spirit Roar (Edit)

Ability Effects:
Debuff 6: Daze/Shock (600)
+Affects Multiple 1 (300)
-Limited: Only while channeling a Beast Spirit (300)
-Indiscriminate (300)

Descriptor: While harnessing an Elder Beast’s power, Kolith can release a roar, screech or cry that disorientates anyone within a twenty foot radius momentarily – long enough to disrupt a hold, falter a close range attack, or frighten anything close by.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!

 

[John Connor]

Username: John Connor

Name of Ability?
Earpiece translator

Ability Effects:
Translation: Latin to English
English to Latin
Other Languages

Descriptor: Vatallion needs a translator for the professor to understand his old language. This makes it easier to talk between the two of them.

Essence Cost: 100

 

[King Shark]

Username: King Shark

Name of Ability?
Cellular Regeneration

Ability Effects:
Healing - Rank 7 (1400)
Modifiers:
+Ongoing (700)
-Activation (-700)

Descriptor: Nanaue has the fantastic ability to perform cellular regeneration. He can regrow lost limbs, chunks of his torso - nearly anything as long as his brain is not destroyed. The catch to this is that it is not instantaneous. A finger might take a couple of minutes to regrow, while a hand might take an hour. If his arm was lopped off at the elbow, that could take hours to regrow, while losing his entire arm at the shoulder might take the greater part of a day. This regeneration is ongoing.

Essence Cost: 1400

Staff Edit: King shark is a APPROVED!

 

[Ganondorf]

Username: Kolith

Name of Ability?
Camouflage

Ability Effects:
Concealment 3 (Sight, Hearing, Smell, Extrasensory) (1200)
+Ongoing (300)
-Limited: Only while channeling appropriate Elder Beast (Narri) (150)

Descriptor: Kolith can render himself invisible to all practical ranged methods of detection when bonding with an Elder Beast capable of camouflage.

Essence Cost: 1350

Staff edit: APPROVED!