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Marcus Wright

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Name of Ability?
Terminator Strength

Ability Effects:
Strength 4

Descriptor: Marcus can lift double his peak strength as a cyborg terminator

Essence Cost: 400

STAFF EDIT: Strength isn't one of the effects we have here. Based on the description, I can assume you meant/want Move Object. Just remember, if you want Marcus to be able to support that weight for more than just a few seconds it will also need Ongoing.
 

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Name of Ability?
Terminator Strength

Ability Effects:
Move Object 4
Outgoing (0) (Specialized Affinity)

Descriptor: Marcus at his peak strength can lift double a normal human's weight.

Essence Cost: 400

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Name of Ability?
The Terminator

Ability Effects:
Terminator: (650)
Immune to Pain-
Immune to Extreme Heat-
Immune to Extreme Cold-
No need to breathe-

Learning Terminator:
Survival (Fire)- Rank 7
Technical (Learning/Adaptation)- Rank 7
Knowledge (Computer wise)- Rank 7
Marksman- Rank 7

Descriptor: It's the T-800!

Essence Cost: 4500

STAFF EDIT: I'm assuming this is meant to be a Summon? If so, you'll need to include the base Summon effect as well, which is another 300 on top of everything. Moving on from that...

The Terminator ability, I'm assuming these are Adaptations. Your costs here are a bit off, as the four you have lifted would only add up to 600 and not 650.

The Learning Terminator ability, these are...Master Skills? Make sure to note that just for record-keeping sake. As they're 50 essence per rank, that would be 350 per skill, making the ability cost 1,400 total.

Including the base 300 summon cost, that makes this purchase come out to a total of 2,300 essence total, as currently written.

Fix up these inconsistencies and check your math, and you should be good to go. And as a general note, make sure you actually provide an explanation of what your abilities are and do, even if it's a basic one.
 

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❈ Proficient Telekinetic - 1500 E

Ability Effects:
Damage V (500)
-- Affects Multiple: 20ft Max Diameter V (250)
-- Ranged V (250)
-- Concentration V (-250)
-- Side Effect V: Tiring (-250)
Debuff V: Movement (500)
-- Affects Multiple: 20ft Max Diameter V (250)
-- Ranged V (250)
-- Concentration V (-250)
-- Side Effect V: Tiring (-250)
Move Object V (500)
-- Affects Multiple: 20ft Max Diameter V (250)
-- Ranged V (250)
-- Concentration V (-250)
-- Side Effect V: Tiring (-250)

Descriptor: While the andromedan is more than capable of lifting heavy objects through brute strength alone, this aristocrat has a particular distaste towards getting his delicate hands dirty. With concentration, Ezrihel is able to focus his psychic powers and telekinetically move various objects around his environment to differing effects, freezing his targets in place, throwing them around like a ragdoll, and otherwise manipulating or crushing the object(s) to devastating effect. He is able to influence multiple targets at once as long as they reside within a reasonable (20ft) diameter. He may be interrupted by anything that would reasonably result in being staggered. Using this ability multiple times in rapid succession is mentally tiring.

(Upgrading from a previous iteration. )

Essence Cost: 1500

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
❈ Psion's Guard - 750 E

Ability Effects:
Protection V (500)
-- Ongoing V (500)
-- Limited V: Only against Psychic (-250)

Descriptor: As an inquisitor it is within Ezrihel’s best interest to keep his mind guarded against psychic intrusions of any sort. Normally this effect is kept personal, and to only himself, and has been trained to the extent that is an unbreakable second nature to maintain. He does not need to be conscious nor focused on defending his psyche, and must be utterly overwhelmed or otherwise forced to drop his guard for his mental shielding to be overtaken.

Essence Cost: 750

Staff Edit: APPROVED
 

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Name of Ability?
Way of the Mighty Fist

Ability Effects:
Damage 4 (100)
100/Rank
Subtotal 400

Agility 1 (200)
200/Rank
Subtotal: 200

Protection 1 (100)
200/Rank
Subtotal: 200

Endurance (100)
100/Rank

Skill: Mixed Martial Arts 5
50/Rank
Subtotal 250

Total: 1150

Descriptor: The Way of Iron Fist is a unique ability that relies heavily on the frictionless liquid-like magnetic suspension that composes Magnus’ body. Various styles of martial arts have been extrapolated and adapted to suit this particular physiology, furthering its unique nature.

Offensively, any point of the body can be used as a striking surface by moving mass to the point of impact. This internal motion is not seen externally, but is faster than the striking motion itself to impart additional force. This was the premise to Mighty Fist, but now includes any body surface with much higher efficiency and skill. Despite high force, these blows often have a swift follow up as well.

Defensively, Magnus is capable of swift reactions and the ingrained skill to evade or redirect attacks to help mitigate damage, if not potentially avoid it entirely. The more innate manipulation of internal anatomy has also been streamlined to increase stamina and efficiency.

Essence Cost: 1150

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Fawful's Wonderful Things (Bite Revamp)

Ability Effects:
Variable Creation 2
Damage 3
Protection 3

Descriptor: Fawful's headgear is full of wonderful things, things Fawful doesn't even necessarily remember installing. It is able to draw from hammerspace an assortment of various weapons, tools and gadgets which can do damage or protect things.

Essence Cost: 1000

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Name of Ability?
Ottsel Shapeshifter

Ability Effects:
Shapeshifting- 1000
Growth- 2 (To Human form)
Ongoing- (200)

Descriptor: Daxter can shapeshift from ottsel to human whenever he so wishes

Essence Cost: 1200

STAFF EDIT: You do not need to buy this for Daxter as an NPC. he can just do this.
 
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Name of Ability?
Demon/Werewolf Senses

Ability Effects:
Rank 1 Sense(Hearing+Smell): 200
Ongoing: 100
Total Cost: 300E

Descriptor: As a demon werewolf, Fenrich has a enhanced sense of smell and hearing, beyond human level, rather on par with wolves. He is naturally able to differentiate and seperate the smells of people he has met. Once he has caught a wiff of someone, he is bound to remember that scent once it gets in his nose again.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Demon Werewolf Physiology

Ability Effects:
Endurance(Rank 5): 500
Agility(Rank 2): 400
Speed(Rank 1): 200
-ongoing (100)
Protection(Rank 1): 100
-ongoing (100)
Adaptions(200):
Need For Sleep: 50
Disease Resistance: 50
Fall Resistance: 100

Descriptor: As a demonic Werewolf, Fenrich has enhanced physical attributes which allow to move faster, be more nimble and withstand more physically draining activities than humans. He is capable of handling days without sleep and can fight fight for days on end, one more than one occasion being attacked by enemies in vital spots, and indespite of their attacks was able to get up and then fight them with little issue. He is able to jump from tall structures and land gracefully being undamaged, he is also able to resist diseases as well.

Essence Cost: 1600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Name of Ability?
Regenerative Healing Factor

Ability Effects:
Healing(Rank 1): 200
-ongoing 1 (100)
Total Cost: 300E

Descriptor: Fenrich is a demon from the netherworld, a place of constant combat. As a result, the inhabitants of his original multiverse, known as the 'cosmos' had adapted to situations of constant violence. As a demon from the disgaea series he is capable of healing from cuts and bruises, with his body pulling itself back together naturally.

Essence Cost: 300

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Name of Ability?
Trident

Ability Effects:
Damage 3 (300)
Protection 3 (300)

Descriptor: A parting gift of sorts from Aster's rather unpleasant sojourn in DA '22. It is a trident...made for stabbing and, ostensibly, eating large pieces of meat. It's also really good for stabbing other things, and it's sturdy -- like, really sturdy -- and can be used to block and deflect all kinds of crazy attacks.

Plus it's just really cool, man.

Essence Cost: 600

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Name of Ability?
Barrel of Skills

Ability Effects:
Master Skills
-- Survival (Tracking) 4 (200)
-- Technical (Computer/Electronics Troubleshooting) 4 (200)
-- Social (Bullshit De-escalation) 3 (150)
-- Social (Customer Service Voice) 3 (150)
-- Combat (Unarmed) 2 (100)
-- Combat (Spearmanship) 2 (100)
-- Medical (First Aid) 2 (100)
-- Driving (Motorcycle) 2 (100)

Descriptor: Aster has picked up a rather...eclectic and diverse smattering of skills during her life.

• Tracking -- It's not an actual 'skill' per se, as much as it is just natural-born wolfish instinct. She's adept at picking out and recognizing scents and sounds in particular, and can notice relatively subtle visual cues of someone or something's passage in an area if she's alert for it.
• Computer-Fu -- It wasn't anything as professional as actual college, but Aster has in fact taken classes on the subject and knows her way around figuring out why something isn't working right, from the basics of "have you tried turning it off and on again?" to somewhat more advanced diagnostics to root out a potential software issue
• Bullshit De-escalation -- An unfortunately very well-practiced skill developed by necessity when you work in retail. Being able to stay calm under pressure and avert rampant bullshittery and conflict between customers or between a customer and oneself. It takes a level head and a well-versed dialogue. Sometimes just a simple "Sir, this is a Wendy's." isn't enough, after all.
• Customer Service Voice -- It really is all about 'how' you say things, sometimes. Most of the time, actually. And Aster is real good at putting on the fake, super polite, nice and sweet voice, tone, manner of speech and even accent to put people at ease and help them relax and have a pleasant time. It sucks, and it's exhausting, but hey. It's a living, right?
• Unarmed Combat -- She's far from what you'd call a truly capable fighter, but she does know the basics. Company-mandated self-defense classes and all that. She at least knows the right and wrong way to throw a punch, the best/worst places to try and hit someone, and other such similar basic principles. Plus some natural-born instinct helps her put her claws and teeth to use in a pinch, which definitely helps.
• Spearmanship -- Learned purely through trial by fire more than actual practice. While her only experience is with a trident rather than an actual spear, the same principles apply. Probably. She at least knows more than 'sharp end that way', even if she does do some rather...unorthodox and occasionally risque maneuvers with it, on occasion.
• First Aid -- Something her parents demanded she learn about. A step above the very basics, she at least knows proper ways to wrap or bandage a wound, how to properly clean cuts and the like to help minimize infection, and what NOT to do in case of most basic injuries.
• Driving -- Given it's her preferred form of motorized conveyance (because it's cool, obviously), Aster at least knows her way around how to handle a cycle of motors. She's no expert, and not going to be doing any races or such absurdity, but she can handle it even on less than perfect roads or in less than ideal weather.

Essence Cost: 1100

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Name of Ability?
Millennium Dragon

Ability Effects:
Millennium Dragon
Titanic Form
Shapeshifting (1000)
-Limited ( to/from Millennium Dragon)(-50)
Growth Rank 7 (1400)
-Limited (Static, Millennium Dragon form only) (-350)


On Golden Wings
Flight rank 7 (1400)
-ongoing (0, specialized)
-limited (millennium dragon form) (-350)
3050 total

Cosmic Firebolts
Damage Rank 7 (700)
-limited (only in Millennium Dragon form) (-350)
-ranged (700)
-Affects multiple Rank 4 (200)
-Indiscriminate (-200)
900 total

Descriptor: King Ghidorah's burgeoning cosmic fires have recovered to the point where he can at last recall a shadow of his former glory. As the milllenium dragon, Ghidorah is 12 stories tall, possessing two powerful, sinuous tails as long as his entire body and ending in spiked clubs. He has golden wings, chiropteran but undeveloped, with a non-functional 'thumb' joint; they seem like they are slightly too small, proportionally, but he is still capable of flight at slightly below jet-airplane speeds. His body is covered in large, bronze scales reminiscent of armor plating, especially around the chest and thighs. Tooth-like bone spikes line the vertebrae of his three serpentine necks, joining into a single row down his back and splitting into two again as they proceed along his tails. His powerful legs have conical armored spurs on the knee-joint, and end in three-toed digitigrade feet, like those of a therapod dinosaur. His trio of terrible faces, while as distinctly reptillian as the rest of him, are almost bird-like in shape, but ringed by horns and bony protrusions, sporting cackling maws filled with double-rows of serrated teeth, and covered in slabs of armored scale.

The Millennium Dragon is capable of spitting explosive bolts of cosmic fire the size of train-cars. These orange-red plasma-bolts possess a flickering core of golden electricity and explode on impact, detonating with enough force to completely gut a four-story building.

Essence Cost: 3950
 

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Name of Ability?
Millennium Dragon (I borked my math - resubmitting)

Ability Effects:
Millennium Dragon
Titanic Form
Shapeshifting (1000)
-Limited ( to/from Millennium Dragon)(-50)
Growth Rank 7 (1400)
-Limited (Static, Millennium Dragon form only) (-350)


On Golden Wings
Flight rank 7 (1400)
-ongoing (0, specialized)
-limited (millennium dragon form) (-350)
3050 total

Cosmic Firebolts
Damage Rank 7 (700)
-limited (only in Millennium Dragon form) (-350)
-ranged (700)
-Affects multiple Rank 4 (200)
-Indiscriminate (-200)
1050 total

Descriptor: see previous

Essence Cost: 4100
 

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Name of Ability?
Millenium Dragon (I SWEAR MY NUMBERS ARE RIGHT THIS TIME)

Ability Effects:
Millennium Dragon
Titanic Form
Shapeshifting (1000)
Growth Rank 7 (1400)
-Limited (Static, Millennium Dragon form only) (-350)


On Golden Wings
Flight rank 7 (1400)
-ongoing (0, specialized)
-limited (millennium dragon form) (-350)
3100 total

Cosmic Firebolts
Damage Rank 7 (700)
-limited (only in Millennium Dragon form) (-350)
-ranged (350)
-Affects multiple Rank 4 (200 x 7=1400)
-Indiscriminate (-350)
total 1750

Descriptor: see the first time I tried to buy this ability, back when I was young and had hope

Essence Cost: 4850

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Upgrading Glorious Golden Body, Lightning Reflexes, and Earth-Shaking Might

Ability Effects:
Glorious Golden Body
Protection Rank 6 (600) => Protection Rank 7 (700)
-Ongoing (0, Specialized))
Endurance Rank 6 (600)
Healing Rank 5 (1000)
-Ongoing (0, Specialized)
Adaptation: Extreme Heat (100)
Adaptation: Extreme Cold (100)
Adaptation: Toxic environments (50)
Adaptation: Radioactive environments (50)
Adaptation: Falling (100)
Adaptation: Starvation and Thirst (50)
Adaptation: Need to Breathe (200)
Adaptions: Need for Sleep (50)
2900 total cost => 3000 total cost

Lightning Reflexes
Agility Rank 3 (600)
Speed Rank 1 (200) = Speed Rank 3 (600)
-Ongoing (0, specialized) -Ongoing (0, specialized)
Flight Rank 1 (200)
total cost 1000 => 1400 total cost

Earth Shaking Might
Damage Rank 6 (600) => Damage Rank 7 (700)
Move Object Rank 6 (600) => Move Object Rank 7 (700)
1200 total cost => 1400 Total Cost

Descriptor: Descriptions unchanged, just gettin' that *beef*

Essence Cost: 700


STAFF EDIT: You good to go, chief. Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Adding ongoing to the Titanic Form subsection of Millennium Dragon(should have been there already, but I am apparently not as good at this as I thought I was two days ago)

Ability Effects:
Old version
Shapeshifting (1000)
Growth Rank 7 (1400)
-Limited (Static, Millennium Dragon form only) (-350)
total (2050)

Proper Version
Shapeshifting (1000)
Growth Rank 7 (1400)
-Ongoing (0, specialized)
-Limited (Static, Millennium Dragon form only) (-350)
total (2050)

Descriptor: same as it was before

Essence Cost: 00000

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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Name of Ability?
Senzu Beans (revised)

Ability Effects:
Previous:
Healing 4 (800)
-Finite (3 uses) (200)
-Removable (200)
Total: 400

New:
Healing 4 (800)
+Self/Other (100)
-Finite (3 uses) (200)
-Removable (200)
Total: 500

Descriptor: Orion carries a pouch of Senzu beans within his robe. These incredible legumes can heal astonishing injuries just by being consumed, and the restoration is immediate. Anyone can take advantage of this boon, should he choose to share a Senzu. However the value of these Senzus means Orion only keeps three on his person at any one time, and once he runs out he has to retrieve more from his starship, where he grows them. The Senzu beans and pouch can also be forcibly removed from him.

Essence Cost: 500

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 

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Name of Ability?
Instant Transmission (revised)

Ability Effects:
Previous:
Teleport 2 (600)
- Limited (can only use in conjunction with Ki Sense) (100)
Total: 500

New:
Teleport 4 (1200)
- Limited (can only use in conjunction with Ki Sense) (200)
Total: 1000

Difference: 500

Descriptor: Orion can sense the ki of any living thing within a certain vicinity. If the creature is an artificial construct (eg. robot, android, golem) or undead, Orion can’t sense them.

Essence Cost: 1000

STAFF EDIT: Approved!
 
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